2019高考英语短文改错仿真模拟说明文课件 （共51张ppt ）

课件51张PPT。第二组：(一)Dear Lucy,
I would like to invite you to join us for a
visit to the nearby nursing home next
Saturday for Double Ninth Festival.
It was the day for the elder people in our
culture. We will go and make dumplings and cake
with the elderly people here. We will also
spend some fun time together play games,
which we hope will make they happy. We
should be back around 4:00 on the afternoon. If you are able to come to with us, please
let us know or we will wait for you at the
school gate at 9:00 in the morning.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua(一)本文是李华写给Lucy的邀请信，邀请她一同前往敬老院陪老人们过重阳节。
1. 在Double Ninth Festival前加the 专有名词前须加定冠词the，特指重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。
2. was→ is 客观陈述规律性或习惯性的事情用一般现在时。
3. elder→ elderly 修饰名词people要用形容词，elderly意为“上了年纪的”，符合文意；而elder意为“年纪较大的”，不符合文意；下文也有相同的表达。4. cake→ cakes 因cake是可数名词，要与dumplings并列，故要用复数。
5. here→ there 根据上下文语境，此处应该是指“敬老院那儿”，而不是“这儿”。
6. play→ playing 由固定结构spend time (in) doing sth意为“花费时间做某事”可知。
7. they→ them 作宾语要用宾格。
8. on→ in 表“在下午/上午”用in the afternoon/ morning；而表“在具体的某天上/下午”用介词on。
9. 去掉come后的to 此处come后并无宾语，故不需要介词to。
10. or→ and 表顺承关系用并列连词and。around adv. 大约
reply n. 答复
nursing home 敬老院
invite sb to do sth 邀请某人做某事(二) I’ll spend this summer holiday in the
countryside. Although the city is modern and
convenience, there’re still some problems, such
as airs pollution, crowdedness and noise. In the
countryside I can enjoy comfortable and quiet life. There, the air is fresh but the water is clean.
Trees are green and birds is singing. I can go
to boating, fishing and swimming in the lake.
What’s worse, I can climb the hills. All this will be interesting and good for your
health. Above all, I can learn more about
nature. So I wanted to go to the countryside for
a change. I’m looking forward to the come of
my summer holiday.(二)本文讲述作者想去乡村度假的原因。
1. convenience→ convenient 作表语要用形容词形式。
2. airs→ air 因air是不可数名词。
3. 在enjoy后加a 由固定结构enjoy/live/lead a…life意为“享受/过着……的生活”可知。
4. but→ and 表顺承关系用并列连词and。
5. birds后的is→ are 因主语birds是复数，故谓语也要用复数形式。
6. 去掉go后的to 由固定搭配go boating意为“(去)划船”可知。7. worse→ more 根据上下文语境可知，此处理应表“此外”，故要用what’s more。(注意：what’s worse意为“更糟糕的是”)
8. your→ my 根据上下文语境可知，应当是对作者的健康有利，应用第一人称物主代词my。
9. wanted→ want 因全文主体时态是一般现在时。
10. come→ coming 固定短语look forward to的to为介词，其后要接名词或动名词。crowdedness n. 拥挤
above all 尤其重要的是
learn more about 更多地了解
for a change 换一换(三)In the modern world, it is importantly to
be well-informed. Success in many fields
depend on getting the late information. At
the same time, failure in policy-making
often results from the lack of the necessary information. There are many ways of get information.
First, we read newspaper and magazines.
Second, we listen the news on the radio and
watch them on television. Third, we surf the
Internet for various kinds of the information.As far as the role of information in the future
is concerned, it is believed what information
will play a more or more important part in
the future.(三)本文介绍在现代社会，信息灵通是非常重要的。
1.importantly→important 作表语要用形容词。
2. depend→depends 因主语success为不可数名词，谓语动词用第三人称单数。
3. late→latest 因late意为“迟的，晚的”，而latest意为 “最新的”，文中指“最新的信息”，故用latest。
4. get→getting 作介词的宾语用动名词。
5. newspaper→newspapers 因newspaper是可数名词，与magazines并列，用复数形式。6. 在listen后加to 因listen是不及物动词，其后需加介词to才能接宾语。
7. them→it 指代前面的不可数名词news用it。
8. 去掉kinds of 后的the 不是特指无需用定冠词the。
9. what→that 因It is believed that...(人们认为……)是固定句型。
10. or→and 因more and more (越来越……)是固定搭配。well-informed adj.消息灵通的
the latest information最新信息
result from 起因于，由……造成
surf the Internet上网
as far as… is concerned就……而言
It is believed that... 普遍认为，人们认为……
play an important part起重要的作用(四)Dear Tom,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior Two student from
Si Nan Senior High School. Welcome to our
class as a exchange student. To make your
stay more comfort, I’d like to introduce
some informations to you.Our class consists of 70 students. And it has a
harmonious study atmosphere, which students
and teachers are friendly and have a good
relationship. Beside, there are several subjects
you can choose from them, such as Chinese,
Chemistry and so on.I sincere wish you could introduce some
western cultures we Chinese students are
interested. In that case, we’ll have a better
understanding of each other, which help
improve our friendship.
Looking forward to your come.
Yours,
Li Hua(四)本文主要讲作者向留学生Tom简要介绍班级及课程设置情况，以及对Tom的到来表示欢迎。
1. exchange前的a→ an 因exchange为以元音音素开头的单词,所以应用冠词an。
2. comfort→ comfortable 在“make+宾语+宾补”结构中作补语用形容词，前面的more也提示我们用形容词。
3. informations→ information 因information(消息，信息)是不可数名词，没有复数形式。4. which→ where 分析句子结构可知，which后为定语从句，从句中不缺主语或宾语，先行词为atmosphere，故把which改为where，指“在这种环境里”师生友好，相处融洽。
5. Beside→ Besides 此处应为副词besides(此外,而且)而不是介词beside(在……的旁边)。
6. 把from后的them去掉 分析句子结构可知，you can choose from为定语从句，先行词后省略了在从句中作宾语的that/ which，故them在此多余。7. sincere→ sincerely 修饰动词wish要用副词。
8. 在interested后加in 因be interested in(对……感兴趣)是固定短语。
9. help→ helps 因which引导非限制性定语从句，指代前面整个句子，故用第三人称单数。
10. come→ coming 因look forward to为固定搭配，其中to为介词。 exchange n. 交换
harmonious adj. 和谐的
atmosphere n. 气氛；氛围(五) My hometown is Brighton where isn’t a very big
town. It’s in the coast about 50 miles from London
and has a population of 300,000. Certainly it isn’t
as interested as London. So the air is a lot of
cleaner because there’s little pollution here. There’re few factories in Brighton, but not
many. So, it isn’t easy to find a job there. My
father used to working in a factory which shuts
down a year ago and my father lost his job. There’re many hotels and language schools
in the town. In summer the town is full of
traveler. My father has decided to open a
small gift shop.(五)本文作者介绍了自己的家乡——Brighton。
1. where→ which/that 引导定语从句，并在从句中充当主语。
2. in→ on 由固定短语on the coast意为“在海岸线上”可知。
3. interested→ interesting 主语是it，故用interesting。
4. So→ But 根据上下文逻辑关系可知此处显然存在转折关系，故用But。
5. 去掉a lot后的of 此处并不是表“很多”，而a lot放在比较级前表“……得多”的意思，故去掉of。6. 在few前加a 根据后面的but not many可知此处应该是指“有一些”，而不是“few(几乎没有)”，故在few前加a。
7. there→ here 作者是介绍自己的家乡，要用here才符合逻辑。
8. working→ work 由固定词组used to do…意为“过去常常做……”可知。
9. shuts→ shut 由后面的a year ago可知要用一般过去时。
10. traveler→ travelers 根据句意可知旅客不止一个，故用名词的复数形式。coast n. 海岸
used to 过去常常做
shut down 倒闭
gift shop 礼品店
lose one’s job 失业
have a population of… 有……人口(六) As a senior student, I often imagine that I
will be doing in the future. Talking of my
dream job, I expect to be an English teacher
for the following reason.
First, I’m a energetic boy with great patience.
That’s what makes a qualified teacher. Besides, I am crazy about the English language,
and I was doing quite well. Above all, teachers
are general respected and well-paid. With
two vacations each year, I may enjoy more
relaxed time. As a responsible boy, I hope that to take up a
job which is beneficial to society. Being a good
teacher may influences more students shoulder
their responsibilities.
In short, I’ll work even hard to become a
popular English teacher.(六)本文主要讲作者将来想要成为一名英语老师及其原因。
1. that→ what 因imagine后接宾语从句，从句中缺宾语，故用连接代词what。
2. reason→ reasons 由下文可知，作者提到的理由不止一点，故用名词的复数形式。
3. a→ an 因energetic为以元音音素开头的单词,所以应用冠词an。。
4. was→ am 本段通篇使用一般现在时，此处相应使用一般现在时。
5. general→ generally 修饰动词，应用副词。6. relaxed→ relaxing 表示“令人放松的”要用relaxing。
7.去掉hope后的that 表示“希望做某事”是hope to do sth，故去掉that。
8. influences→ influence 在情态动词(may)后用动词原形。
9. 在shoulder前加to 由influence sb. to do sth.(影响某人做某事)是固定搭配。
10. hard→ harder 因even是修饰比较级的程度副词。 imagine vt. 想象
energetic adj. 精力充沛的
patience n. 耐心，忍耐
qualified adj. 有资格的
respect vt. 尊敬，尊重
well-paid adj. 报酬优厚的
beneficial adj. 有益的
shoulder vt. 承担，肩负
responsibility n. 责任，职责(七)The Mid-Autumn Festival, which is one of
most important traditional festivals in China,
fall on August 15th of the lunar calendar ever
year. Not only is it popular in China, but it is
also celebrating in many other Asian countries.People believe that the moon is a symbol of
family reunion, lucky and fortune. But it is a
custom to express best wishes to the beloved
ones in this particular time. On that day,
people usually go back to home to have family
reunion, enjoying a large meal with our family. They will also eat mooncakes, that are round
cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other thing
inside. (七)本文介绍了中国的传统节日——中秋节。
1. 在most前面加the 形容最高级前要有the。
2. fall→falls 本句主语是The Mid-Autumn Festival，因此谓语动词fall要用第三人称单数。
3. celebrating→celebrated 中秋节被很多国家庆祝，故用被动语态。
4. lucky→luck 此处与family reunion、fortune并列，用名词。
5. But→ And 上下文是顺接关系。
6. in →at 因at this time固定搭配。7. 删除home前的to 因go back home中home是副词，不用to。
8. our →their 前面的主语人称是they。
9. that→which 非限制性定语从句不能用that引导。
10. thing→things 因thing为可数名词，表示“其它的事情”要用复数things。traditional festival传统节日
the lunar calendar 农历
a symbol of … ……的象征
express best wishes表达最好的祝愿
the beloved ones心爱的人
family reunion 家庭团聚(八)Long ago people used bells more than they
did today. The postmen was used to ring a
hand bell when they delivered letters. Fire
engines had bells instead sirens(警笛). People which sold things came past houses,
rang a bell and shouting what was for sale.
In many country, bells were hung around the
necks of animals. The bells helped owners
find lost cows or sheep. Today, at India, animals still wear bells.
Now bells are used less because various
modern sound-makers have taken its
place. Now people try to keep the old bells
in schools and churches but that they
won’t lose their beautifully sounds forever.(八)本文介绍了铃声在生活中的使用。
1. did→ do 由后面的today可知用一般现在时。
2. 去掉used to前的was 由固定短语used to do意为“过去常常”可知。
3. 在instead后加of 由固定短语instead of意为“而不是”可知。
4. which→ who/that 先行词是people(指人)，故要用关系代词who/that。
5. rang→ ringing 分析句子成分可知，此处ring作非谓语动词，且与逻辑主语People存在主动关系，故要用现在分词，与后面的shouting构成并列的伴随状语。6. country→ countries 由前面的many可知要用复数。
7. at→ in 表“在某个国家”要用介词in。
8. its→ their 根据前面的bells可知此处指的是“bells的”，故要用their。
9. but→ so 根据上下文意思可知，此处理应是指“以至于、以便(它们不会……)”，故把but改为so，so that引导目的状语从句。
10. beautifully→ beautiful 修饰名词要用形容词。postman n. 邮递员；邮差
various adj. 各种各样的
hand bell 手摇铃
deliver letters 送信
fire engine 消防车
for sale 出售
take one’s place 取代某人
come past 从一旁经过THANK YOU!