课件48张PPT。 短文改错zxxkw考 查 目 标1)识别句子错误,并正确校正语篇的能力
2)综合运用英语知识的能力
3)准确理解语篇,掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力
短文改错 从句连词不定代词谓语动词冠词名词单复数介
词非谓语动词形容词、副词代词并列连词数词Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!
2014年ago ofa years have everywhere Wonderful或改为yetmanytasty ∧When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
2015年with ∧thought the and serious Manyair find our/the My uncle 13 the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.where havehonesty a of his steadilyandused∧2016年In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
2017年∧the/myeighteenth words Turn later ofbut wentSudden
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were found living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.2018年∧other the foundtherechickensselling happyand加in 或改为where
I can go to home now.
2. I like playing piano.
3. I am fond at English.
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words高考短文改错的考察方式学科网解题步骤:1. (浏览全文,掌握大意)2.(分句阅读,逐句找错)3.(检查核对,攻克难点)哪些方面需要改?时态形式词性用法 哪些方面需要改? 动词形,名词数.还要注意形和副.代词格,细领悟介词短语须关注.
习惯用法要记住.冠词连词常光顾. 韵律诗请先看一下“咒语” 吧1.??? 单词拼写不改 .
2.??? 大小写不改 .
3.??? 词序不改 .
4.??? 标点符号不改 .
Don't forget!四不改原则 从错误比例上看,一般以三种题型出现:增加,删除或修改。
设问的角度有三个:词法、句法和行文逻辑。summary一、动词形 1.动词的时态和语态错误.
高考链接1:
However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday. (2011 全国)flew Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is
someone to rely on.(2008 全国)needed注意and连接的并列动词She had us elect our monitor and decided where to go
for an outing.decide2. She puts her hand into her pocket, take out her cell
phone and presses the talk key.takes 2. 主、谓不一致的错误.高考链接: I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国卷2)
was一、动词形3. 非谓语动词 错误高考链接:
I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.
(2011新课标全国卷)buying I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building. (2011陕西卷)disappointed一、动词形5. He used to getting up early to take physical exercise. ∨werelikes excitinggetNot only the students but also the teacher like the film. 2. When they came here, I will show them.3. They eager to know everything about China
and asked me lots of questions. 4. I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules. practicecome6. Water pollution often bring on disease.
7. So far, he made a living by picking up wastes. 8.Compare to 1992, the price of grain was
increased about 50%.
9. Judge from his accent, he is from America.
10.With a boy led the way,they started towards the village. bringshasJudgingleadingCompared二、名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。高考链接2:
It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.
(2011新课标全国卷)luggage This year, the rate of UFO reports
was steady, around three per weeks. (2011辽宁卷)week1.Don’t lose hearts, you’ll be successful in time.
2.I need some more informations.
3.These machines look the same,but they are of different kind. heartinformationkindspractice不可数名词progress, furniture, trouble,
weather, fun, news, news,
information, advice,clothing
4. We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream. (全国卷)
5.We climb everywhere, not only in America. We have been to Europe many time.
6. Mr. Lu, our English teachers, was ill in hospital.watertimesteacher 三、还要注意形和副 1.形容词和副词的误用高考链接3:
When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.(2011 浙江卷)slowly2.比较级和最高级的混用或误用.
The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.
(2009陕西)faster 1. He asked angry if we had finished the work.
2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is
quite different from mine.
3. His father looks much more happier today.angrily clear 4. So I grateful accepted the offer. gratefullypractice四、 代词格,细领悟3. it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏 (make, find, think) 高考链接4:
1. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me… (2011 重庆卷)mine2. I knew that they would be worried about myself
because I was so far away.(2012浙江卷)
3. He found difficult to learn math well.me∨it1. 人称代词,物主代词,反身代词的使用.2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误.2. I was learning to express me in simple English.
3. I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.
4. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. myselfeverything∨itSome students may also save up for our college or future use .theirpractice五、介词短语须关注,习惯用法要记住. 1.主要考查固定短语,固定介词的搭配。高考链接5:
1. There was one on particular I’d really wanted.(2011 浙江卷)2.不定式后的动词短语中介词不能省3.时间状语前有指示代词this, that或one,
next,last等修饰时不用介词. in2. He had only a small cold room to live.in3. He paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon.
∨practiceI’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as
a fool. 2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of
the hill.
3. When a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .
4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the
money.at∨foron2.连词but,and,or, so和although的逻辑性用法错误.高考链接6:六、冠词, 连词常光顾1. As a result, nobody knew truth. (2012浙江卷)2. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my
bag from the floor. (2011新课标卷)1. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误.and/theI came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light.
He will stay there one and two days.3. Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying. 4. The driver put the window down and offered us a
umbrella. andoranpracticeAt Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
1._____
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
2._____
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
3._____
They put them in the corner of the sitting
4._________on_________chose_______tall_______it动词形介词短语常常考,习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格,细领悟room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
5._____
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
6. ____
really beautifully at the moment. There was
7. ________
a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas
8. ____
tree lights were shine brightly. Jim and his
9. ____
parents singing and dancing happily.
10.____\_______lights_____________beautiful_____andshining∧were动词形还要注意形和副动词形名词数冠词连词须关注______动词形 I was a high school student then, from the low-income
family. So I have to support my family. My
first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant.
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do
my homework. But I came to understand that was not
easy to earn money, and that knowledges could change
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard
way, was much more important as what I learned from school. ahadfeelinghardknowledgeittoothan∧And Last Saturday, we organize a trip to the countryside. The countryside has taken on new look everywhere all around us, the hills are covered with green trees and colorful flower. Rivers are clean with bridges over them, that makes a beautiful picture. Farmers are living in nice houses which are equipped of fine furniture . Nowadays the farmers there is caring more about our life quality. With their life greatly improving, so they have more time for leisure(休闲). That may be why people look more energetic and young for their age. ∧organizedaimprovedyoungerwhichwitharetheirflowersPractice Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!
2014年When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
2015年My uncle 13 the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. 2016年In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
2017年
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were found living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.2018年