高考一轮复习学案 第36讲 应用文写作基本格式、写作要点与范例 (原卷+解析卷)

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第三十六讲 应用文(邀请函、海报、应聘、求职信等)写作基本格式、写作要点与范例
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黑龙江哈尔滨 邱尚瑛
在高考英语试卷中,写作不仅是必不可少的考试项目,也是整个英语试卷中最重要的项目之一。阅卷教师通过对考生写作部分的阅卷,可以看出考生对英语语言实际应用的水平。考生对写作内容的把握直接影响着写作部分的质量,而且写作部分也是最能反应考生英语水平的重要环节,对最终英语试卷得分的高低起着举足轻重的作用。高考英语作文一般满分为25分(150字左右),占总分数的16%,如果作文分数能达到20分以上,就可以轻松将许多考生甩在后面。批卷时,阅卷老师阅读速度很快,每篇作文大概以平均一分钟左右的速度审核,老师首先会大致读一下作文内容,并在心里给出作文得分的等级。通常,一等分数为21--25分;二等分数为16分--20分;三等分数为11--15分;四等分数在6—10分;最低档分数在6分以下。首先试卷的卷面干净整洁是获取较高的分数的基础,写作部分没有涂抹或修改,没有明显的错误拼写,字迹秀丽工整,用词用句注意短语、谚语等的使用;这些都可以给评卷教师一个良好的印象。因此,教师在辅导学生进行写作练习的时候,要提醒学生注意这些问题。并且辅导学生进行写作技巧的训练,对学生进行写作要点的点拨,指导学生注意运用写作技巧,注意审题立意,确定写作主题;注意拟提纲,定骨架;安排好层次段落;做好段落铺垫的过渡;处理好开头与结尾。同时,还要注意引导学生通过熟练掌握一些常用的短语、习语、谚语等进行书面表达。在这一讲里,我们一同复习总结一下应用文(邀请函、海报、应聘、求职信等)的写作基本格式与写作要点。
I. 应用文写作概述(The Summary of Practical Writing)
英语书面表达具有很强的开放性和选择性,能给予考生畅所欲言的空间,可以使考生在感受英语学习的趣味与魅力的同时展示多彩思维活动的同时,考查考生语言能力、文化意识、思维品质和学习能力,可以使考生突出英语学科的独有特征;要想书面表达拿高分,必须熟知应用文的写作要点与基本格式,关于写作技巧综述,我们将会在一轮系列复习的最后一讲——第四十讲中进行全面系统的讲解。在这一部分中,我们着重复习应用文的写作技巧。
1. 基本注意事项
语篇信息齐全;丰富的句式表达;注意句与句之间的连贯性;语句流畅自然,层次清楚;应用较高级词汇;书面整洁。
2. 最常用的几种应用文写作要点简介
从近年高考写作中,最常见的应用文一般有:通知、请假条、各类便条、备忘录、感谢信、道歉信、申请信、建议信、求职信、邀请信等。
(1)书信:书信是高考中最常见的应用文类型,其类型包括感谢信、道歉信、申请信、建议信、求职信、邀请信、回复信、咨询信、投诉信、庆祝信、推荐信等等。完整的书信内容由三个部分构成,分别是称呼、正文和结尾。称呼在使用过程中通常使用的是“Dear ×××”,用以指明收件人,是书信写作的对象,不可省略。结尾是用来标注写信人,也不可省略。正文部分通常在第一段交代写信目的,第二段是主要内容,第三段表示期望。
(2)通知/海报:通知的标志一般要醒目,一般常用Notice作标题。标出发通知的单位和时间,一般分别位于正文的右下角和右上角(有时可以省略)。通知的正文要写明所做事情的具体时间、地点、概括性内容、出席对象及有关注意事项。通知的文体注意用词贴切,语句简洁。
(3)便条:便条内容和类型不尽相同,可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素:Date(便条日期);Salutation(称呼);Body(正文);Signature(署名)。
(4)备忘录:备忘录主要用来提醒、督促对方,或就某个问题提出自己的意见或看法。基本写作格式:Heading(书端);Addressee’s Name(收文人的姓名);Title(头衔);Address(地址);Salutation(称呼);Subject(事因/主题);Body(正文);Complimentary Close(结束语);Signature(署名)。
邀请信写作范例:
假如你是王宏,想邀请外教Henry David一起参观中国剪纸艺术展。请给他写封邮件(100词左右),内容包括:展览时间;地点;展览内容。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
May 20, 2018
Dear Henry /Mr.David,
How are things with you?
I’ve got great news for you. There will be an art exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting this month.?Knowing that you show great interest in?Chinese culture,?I’d like to invite you to?attend?the exhibition with me.?The exhibition, to be held in the City Hall of Xi’an, lasts for seven days from June 6th to 12th, which attracts a large number of visitors at home and abroad. Featuring Chinese paper-cutting, the exhibition not only shows a variety of paper-cuts in different regions, but also presents to us the history and development of paper-cutting in China. I am sure that it will?broaden your horizons?and that you will enjoy it.?I wonder?if?it is convenient for you?to join me in visiting the exhibition.
Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【温馨提示】
1. 注意称呼部分,外教的名字是Henry David,要称呼Mr. David, 不可以称呼为Mr. Henry。Henry是名,David是姓,Mr. 后要跟姓,不可以跟名。但是Dear后面可以直接跟的是名。所以可以用Dear Henry;也可以用Dear Mr. David。
2. 注意动词的形式(I’ve got great…;I am sure that it will?broaden your horizons…);适时地使用非谓语动词(Knowing that you show…)。
3. Looking forward to 后接名词或者相当于名词的词,动词要用V-ing形式(Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.)
4. 结尾有礼貌用语和署名两部分,相当于汉语信件中的“此致,敬礼”。最常用的是Sincerely yours或Yours sincerely,因为无论正式书信还是非正式书信,二者均可使用。
II. 应用文写作方法(The Method of Practical Writing)
1. 普通书信常用词语:
(1) 开头
I was delighted / glad to receive your letter.
很高兴收到你的来信。
Your letter came to me this morning.
我今天早上收到了你的来信。
I have received your letter of June the 29th.
我收到了你于6月29日的来信。
I am very glad to hear from you again.
很高兴再次收到你的来信。
How is it going?
最近怎么样?
You asked me about(problem,question...),now let me give you some advice.
你在来信中询问我……,现在,让我给你一些建议。
It has been a long time since we met.
我们很久没见面了。
How time flies!It's three months since I saw you last time.
时间过得真快!我们有三个月没见面了。
I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
我写信是为了感谢你对我在美国期间的帮助。
(2) 结尾
I am looking forward to receiving your letter.
我期待你的来信。
Thank you in advance.
提前谢谢你。
Please write to me as soon as possible.
请尽快回信。
Good luck. / Wish you the best of luck.
祝你好运!
With best wishes.
致以我诚挚的祝福。
Wish you success.
祝你成功。
Wish you a pleasant journey.
祝你旅途愉快。
Please remember me to your family.
请代我向你的家人问好。
I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
请尽快回信,我将不胜感激。
2. 邀请信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I am pleased to invite you to attend.../It's a pleasure for me to invite you to attend...
我很荣幸能邀请你参加……
I wonder if you could come...
你是否能来……
My family and I would feel honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我和家人会倍感荣幸。
I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here.
相信你能在这儿过得愉快。
I am writing on behalf of all the students of our department to invite you to give a lecture on...
我代表全系学生邀请您为我们就……进行讲座。
We look forward to seeing you.
我们期待见到你。
We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.
我们期待你参加聚会。
We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on...
我们会万分感激如果你能就……进行讲座。
(2) 写作模板
Dear________,
There will be a ________ (内容) at / in ________(地点) on ________ (时间).We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at________________ (具体时间).This will be followed by a ________ (进一步的安排).At around ________________ (时间),we will have ________________________ (另一个安排).
I really hope you can make it. Reply (RSVP ), if you please before _________________________ (通知你的最后期限).
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
3. 建议信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
You have asked me for my advice about...,and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.
对于你来信问我关于……的事,现提供几条有益的建议。
I would like to suggest that...
我建议……
Why not.../ Why don't you...?
为何不……?
I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could...
我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to...
很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning...
我提出几条有关于……的建议。
Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.
请仔细考虑我的建议,谢谢。
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful.
希望这些建议对你有帮助。
Thank you for your attention.
感谢你对此事的关注。
(2) 写作模板
Dear ________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________ ,and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my humble (谦虚的)opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions:________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________ (祝愿).
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
4. 申请信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I wish to apply for a position of which you advertised in today's newspaper.
我想申请你们今天报纸上刊登的广告中的一个职位。
I have learned from a friend that...
我从一个朋友那得知……
I shall be glad to provide you with any further information concerning my education and personal experience.
我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。
My name is...I graduated from...university in...,majoring in...
我的名字是……。我毕业于……大学,专业是……
I am confident my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job.
我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。
I am skilled in/good at...
我擅长……
I had good performance in every course,especially in...
我每门课成绩都很好,特别是……
I trust that I am capable of doing the work well.
我相信我能干好这份工作。
I believe that I am well qualified for the position as...
我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。
(2) 写作模板
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in________________________(报纸名称) of________________________(广告发布时间).
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a______________(工作名称).On one hand,____________________ (第一个原因).On the other hand,________________________ (另一个原因).
Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at_____________ (电话号码).
Thank you for considering my application.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
5. 道歉信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I would like to express my apology for...
对于……,我想要表达我的歉意。
Will you be good enough to excuse me for.../Excuse me for...
请原谅我……
Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for...
请接受我最真诚的致歉……
I'm terribly sorry to tell you that.../ I regret to inform you that...
很抱歉地告诉你……
I write to you to express my deep regret.
我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。
I am writing to apologize to you for...
我写信向你致歉,因为……
Would you mind if I...?
你是否介意如果我……?
To make up my thoughtless behavior,I...
为了弥补我欠考虑的行为,我……
I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration.
我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的考虑不周。
(2) 写作模板
Dear________,
I am truly sorry that________________________________________ (道歉的原因).
The reason is that___________________________________ (介绍原因).Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience I've caused.
I hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
6. 感谢信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
Thank you so much for...
非常感谢……
I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for...
我由衷地感谢你……
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for...
写此信来表达我的诚挚谢意……
I'm grateful to you for...
因你……,我深表谢意。
I truly appreciate your...
我真诚感谢你……
Words fail to convey my gratitude to you.
我对你的感激之情难以用言语表达。
I take the opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for...
我借此机会向你表达我深深的谢意……
It's kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.
你如此善良和慷慨地帮助我,我不胜感激。
(2) 写作模板
Dear________,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for__________________________ (感谢的原因).If it had not been for your assistance in ___________________(对方给你的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been _____________________ (没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who _____________________________ (给出细节).
Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
7. 通知/海报常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
give a talk
做演讲
give a concert
开音乐会
hold a meeting / class / celebration
举办会议/开展一堂课/举行庆祝活动
attend a meeting / sports meet / lecture
参加会议/运动会/讲座
have a class / meeting / discussion
上课/开会/讨论
make a trip
旅行
set up a club
成立一个俱乐部
set out(for) / arrive at...
出发去/到达……
show sb.around / visit a place
带领某人参观某地
meet at the gate of
在……的大门处见面
go to a concert / the movies / the theatre / the cinema
去听音乐会/看电影
join sb.in / take part in 参加
There is going to be a talk on...
有一个关于……的演讲。
The meeting will be held in.../ A lecture will be given at...
会议/演讲将会在……举行。
We are going to hold a discussion over...
我们将会就……进行讨论。
The Dream Club has decided to hold a meeting on...
梦幻俱乐部会就……举行会议。
All the members are expected to attend it.
所有的成员都要出席。
Everyone will be welcome.
欢迎各位到来。
You are required to take notes during the lecture.
讲座期间,请做笔记。
Please be there on time./Please attend it on time.
请准时出席。
Make sure that you.../ Be sure to...
确保……
Thank you./Thank you for your attention
谢谢/感谢关注。
(2) 写作模板
NOTICE/Notice (标题)
Date (通知发布日期)
In order to______________(目的),________(事件) will be held ________________ (具体时间、地点).The______________________(事件大体内容).Those who________________________(要求).
All are welcome to come.
The School Students' Union (发布通知者)
书信写作注意点
写作时,要养成在审题上形成一种定向思维的习惯,首先注意应用文的体裁;进入写作时注意人称选择恰当;注意正确应用谓语动词形式(如果多处出现谓语动词形式的错误,会降等级)。
1. 注意审题、时态、人称、层次等:在审题时要给所写的文章确定主要时态(现在时、过去时、将来时),在此基础上根据实际情况使用相应时态。此外,要注意层次分明,脉络清晰,让读者(特别是评卷教师)一目了然。
2. 注意韵色:考生要在保证文体正确、要点齐全、层次分明的基础上,恰当运用一些漂亮的句式、关联词等,尽量注意遣词造句,从而使相应形式的应用文提高等级档次。
3. 注意提炼:要注意提炼要点、理顺关系、总结归纳、突出重点;要学会用关联词、引导词把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来,达到起承转合、运用自如。
4. 不同类型书信有所侧重:在撰写不同类型书信内容时要有所差异和侧重;但这些书信都有一些共同之处,掌握了这些共同点,再加之各自的特点,则可完成所相应书信写作。
5. 结尾礼貌用语:结尾的礼貌用语相当于汉语信件中的“此致,敬礼”。英语书信中礼貌用语较多,如“Faithfully yours”,“Respectfully yours”,“Yours”等;“Faithfully yours”和“Respectfully yours”使用于正式书信中,而“Yours”使用于非正式书信中。最好用“Sincerely yours”或“Yours sincerely”,因为无论正式书信还是非正式书信,这两种均可采用。
6. 署名:标注写信人名字,但在考试中通常会指定写信人的名字,考生将写信人的名字摘抄下来既可。
I. 最常用的几种应用文写作注意点
建议信,应该Give your suggestions(给出你的建议);Explain the reasons(解释原因);Other recommendation(其他的建议);Signature(署名)。
求职信,show your interest(展示你的兴趣);describe your previous experience:(描述自己以前的工作经验);explain why you would be suitable for the job(解释为什么你适合这项工作);Signature(署名)。
邀请信,Invite sb. to the party(邀请某人参加聚会);Elaborate on the reason why such a party should be held(阐述举行这个聚会的原因);What activities will be arranged for sb.(将会为某人安排什么活动);Signature(署名)。
投诉信,要先介绍购物情况;然后反映存在问题;再提出解决方案。
感谢信,需要先表示感谢之意,表达感激之情,根据具体情况介绍得到对方帮助后所取得的成效等等。注意问候语和署名。
通知/海报:通知/海报的标志一般要醒目,通知/海报的对象一般用第三人称,但如果带有称呼语,则用第二人称来表示。
II. 常见应用文范文(The Model of Practical Writing)
1. 书信:书信撰写时,要根据不同功能、不同类型有所差异,有所侧重。
(1)邀请信:假如你是王宏,得知你校外教John Smith寒假不回国,你想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信(80词左右),内容包括:时间;一同过节的家人;具体?活动。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文1】
January 29, 2019
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on February 5.?It’s traditionally?a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We’ll make dumplings?together and have a big dinner. We’ll also play card games?and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents.?
If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
Best wishes,
Yours
Wang Hong
(2)建议信/回复信:假如你是王宏,你的一位很熟悉的外朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信(80词左右),内容包括:你建议的线路;你的理由;?你的祝愿。信的开头和结尾已给出,故不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m happy...
___
___
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
【参考范文2】
Jun. 10, 2018
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter?and know you’re coming to China.?Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.?Personally,?I prefer?the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the Mother Rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.
Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.?That’s why I think?the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
(3)道歉信:假如你是王宏,与留学生朋友Tom约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件(100词左右),内容包括:表示歉意;说明原因,并且要另约时间。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文3】
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hong
(4)求职信/申请信:假如你是王宏,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应聘邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for?Talent Show, Speech Contest, and?English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Li at chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点与要求:表明写信意图;陈述应聘目的;说明应聘条件(性格、能力、等)。邮件词数不少于100;开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;不可以使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 1, Grade 3 ...
________________________________________________________

Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文4】
Dear Ms Li,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 1, Grade 3.?I’m writing to apply for the position as?a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity?because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl,?I get along well with my classmates. Besides,?I have such a good command of English that?I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
(5)推荐信:学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是王宏,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书和文学类图书。请你用英语给图书馆朱老师写一封100—120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。信的开始与结尾已给出,所以不计入词数。
Dear Ms Zhu,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 3, Grade 2...
_________________________________________________________

Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文5】
Dear Ms Zhu,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 3, Grade 2. Knowing that our library is going to buy books,?I’d like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration.?That is why I recommend?another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.
I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours truly,
Wang Hong
(6)投诉信:假如你是王宏,两周前你从网上购入一套书虫系列读物,昨天到的货,但是包装破损了,数量也不足。请给网店客服发一份邮件投诉(100词左右,其内容需要包括:介绍购物情况;反映存在问题;提出解决方案。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词。
To customer service center,
I’m ... ____
_________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文6】
To customer service center,
I am one of your customers. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.
I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
(7)感谢信:假如你是王宏,你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据要求给Sue写封电子邮件表达感谢之情。内容包括:对她表达感谢之意;介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;了解她的近况。要求:词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分);内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;书写须清晰、工整;不可以出现本人真实信息。
Dear Sue,
I’m Wang Hong, …
_________________________________________________________

All the best wishes.
Yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文7】
Dear Sue,
I’m Wang Hong, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.
All the best wishes.
Yours,
Wang Hong
2. 通知/海报:假如你是学生会主席王宏。学校将举办一次以“校园生活 创意无限”(Innovations on Campus) 为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下要求写一份书面通知。通知内容包括:创意作品的要求(与校园生活有关);展评地点(体育馆);展评时间(6月16日----18日);颁奖时间(6月18日15:00----17:00);联系人和联系电话。要求:词数100左右;可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯;开头及结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。
【参考范文8】
Notice
An exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner. Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.
Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.
All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! It’ll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18. So don’t miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success.
For any questions, call Li Hua at 44876655.
Come on, everybody! It’s your show time.
Student Union
写作练习一
邀请信:你校新华中学将于下周末举行第二届校文化节,学生会主席李华代表学校全体师生邀请北京大学大学外籍教授John Smith先生做关于中美文化差异的讲座。信的内容包括:讲座时间:11月8日早上13点到15点;讲座地点:2号教学楼102教室;联系方式:englishsetting@163.com;词数100左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作练习二
就餐投诉信:假如,你是王宏,你在酒店的窗口附近订了餐位,准备请两个美国朋友吃中国菜;但是酒店的服务令你失望。因为你们到酒店后,服务员告诉你们没有空位,结果你们被要求和一对老夫妇共用一张桌子;菜品不好吃,有的菜还很咸。请根据以上情况写一封投诉信。要求:词数100左右;可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
写作练习三
祝贺信:假如,你是王宏,你的好友朱芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请根据以下内容,给她写一封祝贺信(词数100左右)。内容包括:表达你的愉悦心情;向她表示祝贺;请她介绍成功的经验。可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作练习四
求职信:假如,你是王宏,从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid.Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员,负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。词数100字左右;不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
ASSISI ANTS WANTED
Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English.Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.
Requirements attached:
1. Good at English.
2. Experienced priority.
Contact us by e-mail: midesch@163.com.
写作练习五
演讲稿:假如,你是晨光中学的学生会主席王宏。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿,内容需要包括:回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);谈谈收获或感想;表达祝愿与期望。词数不少于100;可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends from British,
How time flies! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you.
写作练习(六)
Translate the following into Chinese(英译汉)
1. I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people.
2. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
3. Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us and enjoy it!
4. I have the confidence that you will have a great time here.
5. I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
6. I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
7. Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the?Chinese customs.
8. If I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own?country..
9. I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional?culture.
10. If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
写作练习(七)
Translate the following into English(汉译英)
1. 希望你能参加我们的活动。
2. 我想如果你能做到的话会更有帮助。
3. 在这种情况下你不适合这样做。
4. 我写信是想提出一些建议。
5. 希望我能得到你的认可;以下是一些相关的细节。
6. 我希望能得到您的认可,以下是一些相关的细节。
7. 我对这份工作特别感兴趣,因为我想进一步提高我的英语口语能力。
8. 我还通过这封电子邮件向您发送了我们的培训计划。
9. 我们真诚地希望能作为团队合作伙伴参加比赛。
10. 我相信你们在北京大学期间会有最难忘的经历。
第三十六讲 应用文(邀请函、海报、应聘、求职信等)写作基本格式、写作要点与范例
(解析卷)
黑龙江哈尔滨 邱尚瑛
在高考英语试卷中,写作不仅是必不可少的考试项目,也是整个英语试卷中最重要的项目之一。阅卷教师通过对考生写作部分的阅卷,可以看出考生对英语语言实际应用的水平。考生对写作内容的把握直接影响着写作部分的质量,而且写作部分也是最能反应考生英语水平的重要环节,对最终英语试卷得分的高低起着举足轻重的作用。高考英语作文一般满分为25分(150字左右),占总分数的16%,如果作文分数能达到20分以上,就可以轻松将许多考生甩在后面。批卷时,阅卷老师阅读速度很快,每篇作文大概以平均一分钟左右的速度审核,老师首先会大致读一下作文内容,并在心里给出作文得分的等级。通常,一等分数为21--25分;二等分数为16分--20分;三等分数为11--15分;四等分数在6—10分;最低档分数在6分以下。首先试卷的卷面干净整洁是获取较高的分数的基础,写作部分没有涂抹或修改,没有明显的错误拼写,字迹秀丽工整,用词用句注意短语、谚语等的使用;这些都可以给评卷教师一个良好的印象。因此,教师在辅导学生进行写作练习的时候,要提醒学生注意这些问题。并且辅导学生进行写作技巧的训练,对学生进行写作要点的点拨,指导学生注意运用写作技巧,注意审题立意,确定写作主题;注意拟提纲,定骨架;安排好层次段落;做好段落铺垫的过渡;处理好开头与结尾。同时,还要注意引导学生通过熟练掌握一些常用的短语、习语、谚语等进行书面表达。在这一讲里,我们一同复习总结一下应用文(邀请函、海报、应聘、求职信等)的写作基本格式与写作要点。
I. 应用文写作概述(The Summary of Practical Writing)
英语书面表达具有很强的开放性和选择性,能给予考生畅所欲言的空间,可以使考生在感受英语学习的趣味与魅力的同时展示多彩思维活动的同时,考查考生语言能力、文化意识、思维品质和学习能力,可以使考生突出英语学科的独有特征;要想书面表达拿高分,必须熟知应用文的写作要点与基本格式,关于写作技巧综述,我们将会在一轮系列复习的最后一讲——第四十讲中进行全面系统的讲解。在这一部分中,我们着重复习应用文的写作技巧。
1. 基本注意事项
语篇信息齐全;丰富的句式表达;注意句与句之间的连贯性;语句流畅自然,层次清楚;应用较高级词汇;书面整洁。
2. 最常用的几种应用文写作要点简介
从近年高考写作中,最常见的应用文一般有:通知、请假条、各类便条、备忘录、感谢信、道歉信、申请信、建议信、求职信、邀请信等。
(1)书信:书信是高考中最常见的应用文类型,其类型包括感谢信、道歉信、申请信、建议信、求职信、邀请信、回复信、咨询信、投诉信、庆祝信、推荐信等等。完整的书信内容由三个部分构成,分别是称呼、正文和结尾。称呼在使用过程中通常使用的是“Dear ×××”,用以指明收件人,是书信写作的对象,不可省略。结尾是用来标注写信人,也不可省略。正文部分通常在第一段交代写信目的,第二段是主要内容,第三段表示期望。
(2)通知/海报:通知的标志一般要醒目,一般常用Notice作标题。标出发通知的单位和时间,一般分别位于正文的右下角和右上角(有时可以省略)。通知的正文要写明所做事情的具体时间、地点、概括性内容、出席对象及有关注意事项。通知的文体注意用词贴切,语句简洁。
(3)便条:便条内容和类型不尽相同,可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素:Date(便条日期);Salutation(称呼);Body(正文);Signature(署名)。
(4)备忘录:备忘录主要用来提醒、督促对方,或就某个问题提出自己的意见或看法。基本写作格式:Heading(书端);Addressee’s Name(收文人的姓名);Title(头衔);Address(地址);Salutation(称呼);Subject(事因/主题);Body(正文);Complimentary Close(结束语);Signature(署名)。
邀请信写作范例:
假如你是王宏,想邀请外教Henry David一起参观中国剪纸艺术展。请给他写封邮件(100词左右),内容包括:展览时间;地点;展览内容。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
May 20, 2018
Dear Henry /Mr.David,
How are things with you?
I’ve got great news for you. There will be an art exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting this month.?Knowing that you show great interest in?Chinese culture,?I’d like to invite you to?attend?the exhibition with me.?The exhibition, to be held in the City Hall of Xi’an, lasts for seven days from June 6th to 12th, which attracts a large number of visitors at home and abroad. Featuring Chinese paper-cutting, the exhibition not only shows a variety of paper-cuts in different regions, but also presents to us the history and development of paper-cutting in China. I am sure that it will?broaden your horizons?and that you will enjoy it.?I wonder?if?it is convenient for you?to join me in visiting the exhibition.
Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【温馨提示】
1. 注意称呼部分,外教的名字是Henry David,要称呼Mr. David, 不可以称呼为Mr. Henry。Henry是名,David是姓,Mr. 后要跟姓,不可以跟名。但是Dear后面可以直接跟的是名。所以可以用Dear Henry;也可以用Dear Mr. David。
2. 注意动词的形式(I’ve got great…;I am sure that it will?broaden your horizons…);适时地使用非谓语动词(Knowing that you show…)。
3. Looking forward to 后接名词或者相当于名词的词,动词要用V-ing形式(Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.)
4. 结尾有礼貌用语和署名两部分,相当于汉语信件中的“此致,敬礼”。最常用的是Sincerely yours或Yours sincerely,因为无论正式书信还是非正式书信,二者均可使用。
II. 应用文写作方法(The Method of Practical Writing)
1. 普通书信常用词语:
(1) 开头
I was delighted / glad to receive your letter.
很高兴收到你的来信。
Your letter came to me this morning.
我今天早上收到了你的来信。
I have received your letter of June the 29th.
我收到了你于6月29日的来信。
I am very glad to hear from you again.
很高兴再次收到你的来信。
How is it going?
最近怎么样?
You asked me about(problem,question...),now let me give you some advice.
你在来信中询问我……,现在,让我给你一些建议。
It has been a long time since we met.
我们很久没见面了。
How time flies!It's three months since I saw you last time.
时间过得真快!我们有三个月没见面了。
I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
我写信是为了感谢你对我在美国期间的帮助。
(2) 结尾
I am looking forward to receiving your letter.
我期待你的来信。
Thank you in advance.
提前谢谢你。
Please write to me as soon as possible.
请尽快回信。
Good luck. / Wish you the best of luck.
祝你好运!
With best wishes.
致以我诚挚的祝福。
Wish you success.
祝你成功。
Wish you a pleasant journey.
祝你旅途愉快。
Please remember me to your family.
请代我向你的家人问好。
I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
请尽快回信,我将不胜感激。
2. 邀请信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I am pleased to invite you to attend.../It's a pleasure for me to invite you to attend...
我很荣幸能邀请你参加……
I wonder if you could come...
你是否能来……
My family and I would feel honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我和家人会倍感荣幸。
I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here.
相信你能在这儿过得愉快。
I am writing on behalf of all the students of our department to invite you to give a lecture on...
我代表全系学生邀请您为我们就……进行讲座。
We look forward to seeing you.
我们期待见到你。
We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.
我们期待你参加聚会。
We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on...
我们会万分感激如果你能就……进行讲座。
(2) 写作模板
Dear________,
There will be a ________ (内容) at / in ________(地点) on ________ (时间).We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at________________ (具体时间).This will be followed by a ________ (进一步的安排).At around ________________ (时间),we will have ________________________ (另一个安排).
I really hope you can make it. Reply (RSVP ), if you please before _________________________ (通知你的最后期限).
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
3. 建议信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
You have asked me for my advice about...,and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.
对于你来信问我关于……的事,现提供几条有益的建议。
I would like to suggest that...
我建议……
Why not.../ Why don't you...?
为何不……?
I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could...
我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to...
很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning...
我提出几条有关于……的建议。
Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.
请仔细考虑我的建议,谢谢。
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful.
希望这些建议对你有帮助。
Thank you for your attention.
感谢你对此事的关注。
(2) 写作模板
Dear ________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________ ,and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my humble (谦虚的)opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions:________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________ (祝愿).
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
4. 申请信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I wish to apply for a position of which you advertised in today's newspaper.
我想申请你们今天报纸上刊登的广告中的一个职位。
I have learned from a friend that...
我从一个朋友那得知……
I shall be glad to provide you with any further information concerning my education and personal experience.
我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。
My name is...I graduated from...university in...,majoring in...
我的名字是……。我毕业于……大学,专业是……
I am confident my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job.
我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。
I am skilled in/good at...
我擅长……
I had good performance in every course,especially in...
我每门课成绩都很好,特别是……
I trust that I am capable of doing the work well.
我相信我能干好这份工作。
I believe that I am well qualified for the position as...
我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。
(2) 写作模板
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in________________________(报纸名称) of________________________(广告发布时间).
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a______________(工作名称).On one hand,____________________ (第一个原因).On the other hand,________________________ (另一个原因).
Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at_____________ (电话号码).
Thank you for considering my application.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
5. 道歉信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I would like to express my apology for...
对于……,我想要表达我的歉意。
Will you be good enough to excuse me for.../Excuse me for...
请原谅我……
Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for...
请接受我最真诚的致歉……
I'm terribly sorry to tell you that.../ I regret to inform you that...
很抱歉地告诉你……
I write to you to express my deep regret.
我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。
I am writing to apologize to you for...
我写信向你致歉,因为……
Would you mind if I...?
你是否介意如果我……?
To make up my thoughtless behavior,I...
为了弥补我欠考虑的行为,我……
I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration.
我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的考虑不周。
(2) 写作模板
Dear________,
I am truly sorry that________________________________________ (道歉的原因).
The reason is that___________________________________ (介绍原因).Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience I've caused.
I hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
6. 感谢信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
Thank you so much for...
非常感谢……
I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for...
我由衷地感谢你……
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for...
写此信来表达我的诚挚谢意……
I'm grateful to you for...
因你……,我深表谢意。
I truly appreciate your...
我真诚感谢你……
Words fail to convey my gratitude to you.
我对你的感激之情难以用言语表达。
I take the opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for...
我借此机会向你表达我深深的谢意……
It's kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.
你如此善良和慷慨地帮助我,我不胜感激。
(2) 写作模板
Dear________,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for__________________________ (感谢的原因).If it had not been for your assistance in ___________________(对方给你的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been _____________________ (没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who _____________________________ (给出细节).
Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
7. 通知/海报常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
give a talk
做演讲
give a concert
开音乐会
hold a meeting / class / celebration
举办会议/开展一堂课/举行庆祝活动
attend a meeting / sports meet / lecture
参加会议/运动会/讲座
have a class / meeting / discussion
上课/开会/讨论
make a trip
旅行
set up a club
成立一个俱乐部
set out(for) / arrive at...
出发去/到达……
show sb.around / visit a place
带领某人参观某地
meet at the gate of
在……的大门处见面
go to a concert / the movies / the theatre / the cinema
去听音乐会/看电影
join sb.in / take part in 参加
There is going to be a talk on...
有一个关于……的演讲。
The meeting will be held in.../ A lecture will be given at...
会议/演讲将会在……举行。
We are going to hold a discussion over...
我们将会就……进行讨论。
The Dream Club has decided to hold a meeting on...
梦幻俱乐部会就……举行会议。
All the members are expected to attend it.
所有的成员都要出席。
Everyone will be welcome.
欢迎各位到来。
You are required to take notes during the lecture.
讲座期间,请做笔记。
Please be there on time./Please attend it on time.
请准时出席。
Make sure that you.../ Be sure to...
确保……
Thank you./Thank you for your attention
谢谢/感谢关注。
(2) 写作模板
NOTICE/Notice (标题)
Date (通知发布日期)
In order to______________(目的),________(事件) will be held ________________ (具体时间、地点).The______________________(事件大体内容).Those who________________________(要求).
All are welcome to come.
The School Students' Union (发布通知者)
书信写作注意点
写作时,要养成在审题上形成一种定向思维的习惯,首先注意应用文的体裁;进入写作时注意人称选择恰当;注意正确应用谓语动词形式(如果多处出现谓语动词形式的错误,会降等级)。
1. 注意审题、时态、人称、层次等:在审题时要给所写的文章确定主要时态(现在时、过去时、将来时),在此基础上根据实际情况使用相应时态。此外,要注意层次分明,脉络清晰,让读者(特别是评卷教师)一目了然。
2. 注意韵色:考生要在保证文体正确、要点齐全、层次分明的基础上,恰当运用一些漂亮的句式、关联词等,尽量注意遣词造句,从而使相应形式的应用文提高等级档次。
3. 注意提炼:要注意提炼要点、理顺关系、总结归纳、突出重点;要学会用关联词、引导词把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来,达到起承转合、运用自如。
4. 不同类型书信有所侧重:在撰写不同类型书信内容时要有所差异和侧重;但这些书信都有一些共同之处,掌握了这些共同点,再加之各自的特点,则可完成所相应书信写作。
5. 结尾礼貌用语:结尾的礼貌用语相当于汉语信件中的“此致,敬礼”。英语书信中礼貌用语较多,如“Faithfully yours”,“Respectfully yours”,“Yours”等;“Faithfully yours”和“Respectfully yours”使用于正式书信中,而“Yours”使用于非正式书信中。最好用“Sincerely yours”或“Yours sincerely”,因为无论正式书信还是非正式书信,这两种均可采用。
6. 署名:标注写信人名字,但在考试中通常会指定写信人的名字,考生将写信人的名字摘抄下来既可。
I. 最常用的几种应用文写作注意点
建议信,应该Give your suggestions(给出你的建议);Explain the reasons(解释原因);Other recommendation(其他的建议);Signature(署名)。
求职信,show your interest(展示你的兴趣);describe your previous experience:(描述自己以前的工作经验);explain why you would be suitable for the job(解释为什么你适合这项工作);Signature(署名)。
邀请信,Invite sb. to the party(邀请某人参加聚会);Elaborate on the reason why such a party should be held(阐述举行这个聚会的原因);What activities will be arranged for sb.(将会为某人安排什么活动);Signature(署名)。
投诉信,要先介绍购物情况;然后反映存在问题;再提出解决方案。
感谢信,需要先表示感谢之意,表达感激之情,根据具体情况介绍得到对方帮助后所取得的成效等等。注意问候语和署名。
通知/海报:通知/海报的标志一般要醒目,通知/海报的对象一般用第三人称,但如果带有称呼语,则用第二人称来表示。
II. 常见应用文范文(The Model of Practical Writing)
1. 书信:书信撰写时,要根据不同功能、不同类型有所差异,有所侧重。
(1)邀请信:假如你是王宏,得知你校外教John Smith寒假不回国,你想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信(80词左右),内容包括:时间;一同过节的家人;具体?活动。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文1】
January 29, 2019
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on February 5.?It’s traditionally?a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We’ll make dumplings?together and have a big dinner. We’ll also play card games?and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents.?
If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
Best wishes,
Yours
Wang Hong
(2)建议信/回复信:假如你是王宏,你的一位很熟悉的外朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信(80词左右),内容包括:你建议的线路;你的理由;?你的祝愿。信的开头和结尾已给出,故不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m happy...
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Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
【参考范文2】
Jun. 10, 2018
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter?and know you’re coming to China.?Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.?Personally,?I prefer?the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the Mother Rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.
Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.?That’s why I think?the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
(3)道歉信:假如你是王宏,与留学生朋友Tom约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件(100词左右),内容包括:表示歉意;说明原因,并且要另约时间。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文3】
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hong
(4)求职信/申请信:假如你是王宏,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应聘邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for?Talent Show, Speech Contest, and?English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Li at chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点与要求:表明写信意图;陈述应聘目的;说明应聘条件(性格、能力、等)。邮件词数不少于100;开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;不可以使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 1, Grade 3 ...
________________________________________________________

Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文4】
Dear Ms Li,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 1, Grade 3.?I’m writing to apply for the position as?a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity?because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl,?I get along well with my classmates. Besides,?I have such a good command of English that?I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
(5)推荐信:学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是王宏,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书和文学类图书。请你用英语给图书馆朱老师写一封100—120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。信的开始与结尾已给出,所以不计入词数。
Dear Ms Zhu,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 3, Grade 2...
_________________________________________________________

Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文5】
Dear Ms Zhu,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 3, Grade 2. Knowing that our library is going to buy books,?I’d like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration.?That is why I recommend?another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.
I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours truly,
Wang Hong
(6)投诉信:假如你是王宏,两周前你从网上购入一套书虫系列读物,昨天到的货,但是包装破损了,数量也不足。请给网店客服发一份邮件投诉(100词左右,其内容需要包括:介绍购物情况;反映存在问题;提出解决方案。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词。
To customer service center,
I’m ... ____
_________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文6】
To customer service center,
I am one of your customers. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.
I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
(7)感谢信:假如你是王宏,你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据要求给Sue写封电子邮件表达感谢之情。内容包括:对她表达感谢之意;介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;了解她的近况。要求:词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分);内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;书写须清晰、工整;不可以出现本人真实信息。
Dear Sue,
I’m Wang Hong, …
_________________________________________________________

All the best wishes.
Yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文7】
Dear Sue,
I’m Wang Hong, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.
All the best wishes.
Yours,
Wang Hong
2. 通知/海报:假如你是学生会主席王宏。学校将举办一次以“校园生活 创意无限”(Innovations on Campus) 为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下要求写一份书面通知。通知内容包括:创意作品的要求(与校园生活有关);展评地点(体育馆);展评时间(6月16日----18日);颁奖时间(6月18日15:00----17:00);联系人和联系电话。要求:词数100左右;可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯;开头及结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。
【参考范文8】
Notice
An exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner. Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.
Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.
All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! It’ll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18. So don’t miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success.
For any questions, call Li Hua at 44876655.
Come on, everybody! It’s your show time.
Student Union
写作练习一
邀请信:你校新华中学将于下周末举行第二届校文化节,学生会主席李华代表学校全体师生邀请北京大学大学外籍教授John Smith先生做关于中美文化差异的讲座。信的内容包括:讲座时间:11月8日早上13点到15点;讲座地点:2号教学楼102教室;联系方式:englishsetting@163.com;词数100左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Professor Smith,
I am Li Hua, chair of the Students’ Union of Xinhua Middle School. Our school will have the Second Culture Festival next weekend and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China, which will begin at 13 o’clock and end at 15 o’clock on Nov. 8th in Classroom 102 of the second teaching building.
As an expert in international culture, you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences between America and China, so we hope you could help us increase our knowledge and clear some cultural confusion.
Could you please contact us in advance at englishsetting@163.com if you could come to our culture festival?
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Hong
写作练习二
就餐投诉信:假如,你是王宏,你在酒店的窗口附近订了餐位,准备请两个美国朋友吃中国菜;但是酒店的服务令你失望。因为你们到酒店后,服务员告诉你们没有空位,结果你们被要求和一对老夫妇共用一张桌子;菜品不好吃,有的菜还很咸。请根据以上情况写一封投诉信。要求:词数100左右;可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir,
Last Friday, I booked a table near the window for dinner in your hotel as I was going to treat my two American friends to a typical Chinese meal, but I’m quite disappointed with your service.
We went there at the time as arranged, the waiter told us there were no seats available. After about one and a half hours, we were asked to share a table with an old couple. The food was not delicious and some dishes were too salty.
I’ll appreciate it if you can look into this case.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
写作练习三
祝贺信:假如,你是王宏,你的好友朱芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请根据以下内容,给她写一封祝贺信(词数100左右)。内容包括:表达你的愉悦心情;向她表示祝贺;请她介绍成功的经验。可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Zhu Fang,
I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.
You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.
I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Wang Hong
写作练习四
求职信:假如,你是王宏,从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid.Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员,负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。词数100字左右;不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
ASSISI ANTS WANTED
Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English.Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.
Requirements attached:
1. Good at English.
2. Experienced priority.
Contact us by e-mail: midesch@163.com.
【参考范文】
June, 20, 2018
Dear Sir,
I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.
I’ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.
In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I’m available for interview at any time.
It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
写作练习五
演讲稿:假如,你是晨光中学的学生会主席王宏。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿,内容需要包括:回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);谈谈收获或感想;表达祝愿与期望。词数不少于100;可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends from British,
How time flies! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you.
【参考范文】
Dear friends from British,
How time flies! It has been two weeks since you came to our school for the exchange program, which has benefited all of us.
During the past two weeks, we studied in the same classroom, and we lived in the same dormitory harmoniously, which has enabled us to know each other better. Doing the same sports on the playground gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship. What impresses us most is your art skills, in which you showed your outstanding talent. We believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program.
At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you will have a safe and happy journey home and that we will have more programs like this in the future.
Thank you.
写作练习(六)
Translate the following into Chinese(英译汉)
1. I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people.
我可以与母语是英语的人良好沟通;而且我对人和蔼可亲。
2. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
您在上一封信中问我关于我们学校体育活动的情况,下面的信息会让你有一个大概的了解。
3. Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us and enjoy it!
最近,一部优秀的电影将在我们校园上映。欢迎和我们一同尽情享受吧!
4. I have the confidence that you will have a great time here.
我相信您会在这里过得很愉快。
5. I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
我真诚地邀请你来我们学校亲眼看一看。
6. I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
我写信申请成为我们学校英语协会的志愿者。
7. Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the?Chinese customs.
得知你要去拜访一位中国朋友,但对中国的风俗习惯不了解。
8. If I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own?country..
如果我是你,我会带一些适合的礼物,比如:带一些我们国家的纪念品。
9. I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional?culture.
我建议您提前5到10分钟到达,这在中国传统文化中很常见。
10. If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
如果您还有其他问题,请随时与我联系。
写作练习(七)
Translate the following into English(汉译英)
1. 希望你能参加我们的活动。
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity.
2. 我想如果你能做到的话会更有帮助。
I think it would be more helpful if you could do that.
3. 在这种情况下你不适合这样做。
It's not suitable for you to do it in such a situation.
4. 我写信是想提出一些建议。
I am writing to put forward some advice.
5. 希望我能得到你的认可;以下是一些相关的细节。
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance. Here are some relevant details about it.
6. 我希望能得到您的认可,以下是一些相关的细节。
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.
7. 我对这份工作特别感兴趣,因为我想进一步提高我的英语口语能力。
I' m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities.
8. 我还通过这封电子邮件向您发送了我们的培训计划。
With this Email I also send you our training plan.
9. 我们真诚地希望能作为团队合作伙伴参加比赛。
We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
10. 我相信你们在北京大学期间会有最难忘的经历。
I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.