Module 9 Friendship Unit 3 Language in use-Writing 课件20张PPT

课件20张PPT。Module 9 Friendship
Unit 3 Language in use--writingHelpline’s
questionsWho called Friendship HelplineLinglingWhat was the problem?Lingling’s best friend didn’t like her to ....Why Lingling called it
Because she had a problem with …
She wanted to ..
What might be the reason? Maybe her best friend didn’t feel very sure of …adviceTry to ….
Be patient with … and explain to …
Try to introduce …to ...Revision-M9U1Who :Zhang Bei
When :
the early autumn of
her first year
Where:
at a new school
What: No one knew …;
…was very lonely,
afraid to make friends
with anyone
At firstStory: _________________Then one day Now What happened?
One day:
were talking…,
sat in silence
At that moment:
entered-passed-turned
back-looked at-smiled
(without a word)
Suddenly:
felt the touch of …;
made …feel …;
…was like…
Attitude towards:
other students
changed …; started to
talk with …learnt to
trust…; included …in
their circle of …
the girl
has become …stick…
the world
I believe that ….
If you think …, you
might ….
Smile at…and it will...
A beautiful smileRevision-M9U2From Lingling’s call:
When we have a problem with our best friend, we should try our best to solve it.From Zhang Bei’s story:
The world is what we think it is. Smile at the world, and it will smile back. What can you learn from Lingling’s call and Zhang Bei’s story? We should treasure our friendship. 1.What do you think is the most important about friendship?
Honesty(真诚)
Confidence (信任)
To help each other (互助)
Tolerance(宽容)
Undertanding (理解)
Respect(尊重)
Sharing(分享)
Encouragement(鼓励)
……
2.Say something about your experience.Discuss in groups: Some good sayings about friendshipA life without a friend is like a life without the sun.
人生没有朋友, 犹如人生没有了太阳。
Friendship is a love without wings. 友谊是一种无形的爱
A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友.
A friend without faults will never be found.
没有缺点的朋友是永远找不到的。
A good friend is my nearest relation. 良友如近亲。
Without confidence there is no friendship.
没有信任，就没有友谊。
Friendship is like money, easier made than kept.
友谊如金钱一般，容易得到却不易保持。
大连市2015年中考作文题目（分值：20分）
朋友情深，友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中，你认为什么是最重要的？是以诚相待、彼此信任，还是……？目前，你校校刊正在就此话题开展征文活动，请你结合自己的经历，写一 篇英语短文，谈谈看法。
内容提示：
（1）What is the most important about friendship?
（2）Share your experience.
要求：
（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名；
（3）80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。思路点拨{审题}
作者身份：
读者：
体裁：
主题 ：
内容：
时态 ：
素材：题目：朋友情深，友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中，你认为什么是最重要的？是以诚相待、彼此 信任，还是……？目前，你校校刊正在就此话题开展征文活动，请你结合自己的经历，写一 篇英语短文，谈谈看法。
内容提示：
（1）What is the most important about friendship?
（2）Share your experience.学生（第一人称）老师和同学记叙文(narration)友谊(Friendship)（1）What is the most important about friendship?（2）Share your experience.一般现在时、一般过去时 教材中与友谊话题相关的模块 （Module9）
自己与好友的经历Tips:
中心突出、内容完整、
表述真情实感。Structure（结构）Beginning
What is the most important about friendshipBody
Share my experience
Ending
What my experience has brought me.When
Who
Where
What
FeelingsTips:
层次清晰，
分段行文，
详略得当，
首尾呼应。LanguageSentence patterns
语言句式运用准 确、 灵活，
表达合理得体地道，贴切,
恰当运用教材及阅读材料中的佳句和表达形式
Grammar
关注时态、动词变化、名词单复数、词性等
Words & phrases
注意单词拼写、大小写、标点符号正确使用书上好句：
1.I felt even more lonely.
2.She looked at me and, without a word, smiled.
3.Suddenly, I felt the touch of something…
4.It made me feel…
5.It was like a hidden treasure.
6.They include me in their circle of friends.
7.The girl with a bight smile has become…and we stick together like glue.
8.I believe that the world is… Smile at the world, and it will smile back.BeginningSamples：
An old saying goes,”…..” So in my opinion, real friends should always …
Talking of friendship, the word “…”appears in my mind suddenly.
I’m eager to share my opinion about friendship with you…
….plays an important role in friendship.
What is the most important about friendship?BodySamples ：
I will never forget the words she told me which gave me energy…
No matter how hard I tried, I could’t…
I felt my heart nearly broken.
The memories are just like glaring stars at the bottom of my heart.
I felt so moved that the tears rolled down my face…
Share your experienceEndingSamples ：
I’m lucky to have such a friend.
It was … that changed my life.
The experience told me that…
Friendship is like wine, the longer, the better.
What your experience has brought you.Logical
（逻辑性的）
&
Contextual
（语义连贯的）
Expressions
Beginning:
Talking of ... .
/As we all know, ... I have such a friend.
Body:
At first,….
Little by little,….
And as a result,…
Since then, I’ve…
What’s more/In addition/ Besides,…
Ending:
In a word/ All in all /In conclusion,... One possible version:
A friend is easier lost than found. So in my opinion, tolerance plays an important role in keeping friendship.
Lily and I have been friends for three years, but there is one thing impressing me deeply.One day, we had a big quarrel just because we had different ideas. I said she never put herself in my shoes. As a result, she ran away with tears on her face. But later, I regretted hurting her. The following morning,I failed my exam. When she saw the sadness on my face, she walked towards me and cheered me on gently, just like nothing had happened. Suddenly, I felt the touch of something warm. She had forgiven me and we were still the best friends.
Friendship is like wine, the longer, the better. If you want to keep it, you should learn to be tolerant first.
Handwriting（书写） 字迹工整，无划痕
大小、字距适中
压线写（划线写）
平行（横平竖直）
字数100-120最佳, 一行12-13，答题卡区域
档次评分参考标准：
　　A ( 17-20分) 出色完成了试题规定的任务，有围绕主题的合理发挥，内容符合逻辑，覆盖所有要点，组织结构清晰，选词贴切，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，标点、大小写正确。
　　B (13-16分)较好完成了任务。有围绕主题的适当发挥，内容比较符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构比较清晰，语言较准确。
　　C (9-12分) 基本完成了任务。覆盖了所有主要内容，意思基本连贯，但语言有一些错误。
D (5-8分) 勉强完成了任务。内容缺乏连贯性，语法结构单调，运用词汇有限，有一些语法词汇方面的错误。信息未能较清楚地传达给读者。
E (0-4分) 未完成任务。语言表述不清，词汇使用有限，错误很多，只有个别语句可读。Summary & Homework
1.The topic: friendship
2.The lesson tasks:
1).Review Unit1 and Unit2
2). Tell what you think is the most important about friendship and share your experience.
3).Write a passage about your opinion about friendship and your experience.
3.The Grammar : object clause （宾语从句）
4. The homework: finish and polish the article by using the key words and object clauses. Thank you!