高考英语书面表达——概要写作课件（15张）
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| 名称 | 高考英语书面表达——概要写作课件（15张） |  | |
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| 科目 | 英语 | ||
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How to summarize a paragraph with key supporting details
鲁周焕
余杭高级中学
Sunday June 26th
LIFE ? ANECDOTE
Marriage Badly Needed
Nice male. Would like to meet a like-minded, good-natured girl to share quality times. (A)
Nice male, good sense of humor, into volunteering, socializing, comedy shows. Would like to meet a like-minded, good-natured girl to share quality times. (B)
Too general
A summary is a brief review of a piece of written material. It should include only main ideas and key supporting details. It should NOT include minor details or any personal opinions. (Herzfeld-Pinpkin 2007)
Definitions of a summay
Minor detail
Key supporting details
Main idea
(Conclusion)
?Lack of water may result in several problems. ?It may increase health problems. ?Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. ?Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. ?Countries may have to compete for water in the future. ?Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. ?And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. ?This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
Main idea
?Lack of water may result in several problems.
?Lack of water may result in several problems. ?It may increase health problems. ?Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. ?Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. ?Countries may have to compete for water in the future. ?Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. ?And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. ?This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
Key supporting details
Minor details
Find the main idea, key supporting details,
and minor details.
to explain and develop the main idea
most important and general point
to help support and make clear the key supporting details
Minor detail
Main idea
(Conclusion)
Key supporting details
Tree map of the paragraph
?Lack of water may result in several problems. ?It may increase health problems. ?Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. ?Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. ?Countries may have to compete for water in the future. ?Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. ?And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. ?This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
?Lack of water may result in several problems.
?Lack of water may result in several problems. ?It may increase health problems. ?Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. ?Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. ?Countries may have to compete for water in the future. ?Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. ?And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. ?This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
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?The test grades may be a stepping stone to prestigous universities. ?However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. ?To become better test-takers than others, some students would like to have more preparations. ?Several AST and ACT pre-classes are offered by various companies and individual tutors, giving rich students a better chance to improve their scores. ?Cheating also happens among test-takers. ?Some students even take medicine before their tests. ?Although it’s not proved that taking these drugs will increase a student’s score, the nature of the drug is to increase alertness, concentration, and mental processing speed.
Draw a tree map of the paragraph
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?The test grades may be a stepping stone to prestigous universities. ?However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. ?To
?The test grades may be a stepping stone to prestigous universities. ?However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. ?To become better test-takers than others, some students would like to have more preparations. ?Several AST and ACT pre-classes are offered by various companies and individual tutors, giving rich students a better chance to improve their scores. ?Cheating also happens among test-takers. ?Some students even take medicine before their tests. ?Although it’s not proved that taking these drugs will increase a student’s score, the nature of the drug is to increase alertness, concentration, and mental processing speed.
Lacking water contributes to several problems, giving rise to health problems, triggering more international conflict, and hindering economic growth. (A)
Lacking water contributes to several problems, and health will be negatively influenced, more international conflict will rise, and economic development will be hindered. (B)
Compare the two versions
Main idea
Key supporting details
Lacking water contributes to several problems,
...giving rise to health problems, triggering more international conflict, and hindering economic growth.
Lacking water contributes to several problems, giving rise to health problems, triggering more international conflict, and hindering economic growth. (A)
Write a summary of the paragraph
?The test grades may be a stepping stone to prestigous universities. ?However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. ?To become better test-takers than others, some students would like to have more preparations. ?Several AST and ACT pre-classes are offered by various companies and individual tutors, giving rich students a better chance to improve their scores. ?Cheating also happens among test-takers. ?Some students even take medicine before their tests. ?Although it’s not proved that taking these drugs will increase a student’s score, the nature of the drug is to increase alertness, concentration, and mental processing speed.
1. These tests do not promise future success because/as some
students have extra preparation/tutoring, cheat and even take
medicine for tests.
2. These tests, in which students could get better scores by
attending extra classes, cheating, or taking medicine, can not
guarantee future success.
1. These tests do not promise future success because/as some
students have extra preparation/tutoring, cheat and even take
medicine for tests.
Adverbial clause
Attributive clause
2. These tests, in which students could get better scores by
attending extra classes, cheating, or taking medicine, can not
guarantee future success.
3. Students making extra preparations, cheating and even taking
medicine before tests, these tests fail to promise one’s success in
the future.
4. These tests do not guarantee students’ future success due
to/because of their extra preparations, cheating, and medicine
taking.
Nonfinite verb
Prepositional phrases
3. Students making extra preparations, cheating and even taking
medicine before tests, these tests fail to promise one’s success in
the future.
4. These tests do not guarantee students’ future success due
to/because of their extra preparations, cheating, and medicine
taking.
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Adverbial clauses
Attributive clauses
Nonfinite verb
Prepositional phrases
…
Main idea
?What makes a person become left-handed rather than right-handed? ?One simple idea suggests that people normally get right-handedness from their parents. ?Studies have found that two right-handed parents have only a 9.5 percent chance of having a left-handed child, whereas two left-handed parents have a 26 percent chance of having a left-handed child. ?Another common theory is that left-handed people suffer mild brain damage during birth, which makes them left-handed. ?However, if this theory were true, it would not explain why the percentage of left-handed people is so similar in every society, when birth conditions vary so much from society to society.
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Inheriting from parents and suffering from mild brain damage during birth, people are likely to become lefties.
Some claim left-handedness is genetic while others attribute it to mild brain injury during birth.
People are likely to become left-handed because of inheritance and mild brain damage during birth.
Thank you!
鲁周焕
余杭高级中学
Sunday June 26th
LIFE ? ANECDOTE
Marriage Badly Needed
Nice male. Would like to meet a like-minded, good-natured girl to share quality times. (A)
Nice male, good sense of humor, into volunteering, socializing, comedy shows. Would like to meet a like-minded, good-natured girl to share quality times. (B)
Too general
A summary is a brief review of a piece of written material. It should include only main ideas and key supporting details. It should NOT include minor details or any personal opinions. (Herzfeld-Pinpkin 2007)
Definitions of a summay
Minor detail
Key supporting details
Main idea
(Conclusion)
?Lack of water may result in several problems. ?It may increase health problems. ?Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. ?Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. ?Countries may have to compete for water in the future. ?Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. ?And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. ?This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
Main idea
?Lack of water may result in several problems.
?Lack of water may result in several problems. ?It may increase health problems. ?Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. ?Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. ?Countries may have to compete for water in the future. ?Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. ?And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. ?This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
Key supporting details
Minor details
Find the main idea, key supporting details,
and minor details.
to explain and develop the main idea
most important and general point
to help support and make clear the key supporting details
Minor detail
Main idea
(Conclusion)
Key supporting details
Tree map of the paragraph
?Lack of water may result in several problems. ?It may increase health problems. ?Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. ?Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. ?Countries may have to compete for water in the future. ?Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. ?And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. ?This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
?Lack of water may result in several problems.
?Lack of water may result in several problems. ?It may increase health problems. ?Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. ?Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. ?Countries may have to compete for water in the future. ?Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. ?And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. ?This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
?
?
?
?
?
?
?
?
?The test grades may be a stepping stone to prestigous universities. ?However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. ?To become better test-takers than others, some students would like to have more preparations. ?Several AST and ACT pre-classes are offered by various companies and individual tutors, giving rich students a better chance to improve their scores. ?Cheating also happens among test-takers. ?Some students even take medicine before their tests. ?Although it’s not proved that taking these drugs will increase a student’s score, the nature of the drug is to increase alertness, concentration, and mental processing speed.
Draw a tree map of the paragraph
?
?
?
?
?
?
?
?The test grades may be a stepping stone to prestigous universities. ?However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. ?To
?The test grades may be a stepping stone to prestigous universities. ?However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. ?To become better test-takers than others, some students would like to have more preparations. ?Several AST and ACT pre-classes are offered by various companies and individual tutors, giving rich students a better chance to improve their scores. ?Cheating also happens among test-takers. ?Some students even take medicine before their tests. ?Although it’s not proved that taking these drugs will increase a student’s score, the nature of the drug is to increase alertness, concentration, and mental processing speed.
Lacking water contributes to several problems, giving rise to health problems, triggering more international conflict, and hindering economic growth. (A)
Lacking water contributes to several problems, and health will be negatively influenced, more international conflict will rise, and economic development will be hindered. (B)
Compare the two versions
Main idea
Key supporting details
Lacking water contributes to several problems,
...giving rise to health problems, triggering more international conflict, and hindering economic growth.
Lacking water contributes to several problems, giving rise to health problems, triggering more international conflict, and hindering economic growth. (A)
Write a summary of the paragraph
?The test grades may be a stepping stone to prestigous universities. ?However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. ?To become better test-takers than others, some students would like to have more preparations. ?Several AST and ACT pre-classes are offered by various companies and individual tutors, giving rich students a better chance to improve their scores. ?Cheating also happens among test-takers. ?Some students even take medicine before their tests. ?Although it’s not proved that taking these drugs will increase a student’s score, the nature of the drug is to increase alertness, concentration, and mental processing speed.
1. These tests do not promise future success because/as some
students have extra preparation/tutoring, cheat and even take
medicine for tests.
2. These tests, in which students could get better scores by
attending extra classes, cheating, or taking medicine, can not
guarantee future success.
1. These tests do not promise future success because/as some
students have extra preparation/tutoring, cheat and even take
medicine for tests.
Adverbial clause
Attributive clause
2. These tests, in which students could get better scores by
attending extra classes, cheating, or taking medicine, can not
guarantee future success.
3. Students making extra preparations, cheating and even taking
medicine before tests, these tests fail to promise one’s success in
the future.
4. These tests do not guarantee students’ future success due
to/because of their extra preparations, cheating, and medicine
taking.
Nonfinite verb
Prepositional phrases
3. Students making extra preparations, cheating and even taking
medicine before tests, these tests fail to promise one’s success in
the future.
4. These tests do not guarantee students’ future success due
to/because of their extra preparations, cheating, and medicine
taking.
单击此处添加标题
Adverbial clauses
Attributive clauses
Nonfinite verb
Prepositional phrases
…
Main idea
?What makes a person become left-handed rather than right-handed? ?One simple idea suggests that people normally get right-handedness from their parents. ?Studies have found that two right-handed parents have only a 9.5 percent chance of having a left-handed child, whereas two left-handed parents have a 26 percent chance of having a left-handed child. ?Another common theory is that left-handed people suffer mild brain damage during birth, which makes them left-handed. ?However, if this theory were true, it would not explain why the percentage of left-handed people is so similar in every society, when birth conditions vary so much from society to society.
?
?
?
?
?
Inheriting from parents and suffering from mild brain damage during birth, people are likely to become lefties.
Some claim left-handedness is genetic while others attribute it to mild brain injury during birth.
People are likely to become left-handed because of inheritance and mild brain damage during birth.
Thank you!