高中英语人教版必修4 Unit 2 Working the land Revision and Writing(共55张PPT)

课件55张PPT。挖掘教材资源 提升写作技能--- Revision and Writing for Book 4 Unit 2 Reading: A Pioneer for All People
头脑风暴---复习人物介绍的重点词汇短语Revision & Writing人物概况外貌性格教育经历生平经历成就评价 identity(身份)/job/appearance/age/sex/birth-place/birth-timeeducationmain experiencesevaluation of achievementsappearance/character11930年出生在一个贫穷的农民家庭 (+1)was born into a poor farmer’s family in193021956年出生于福建省厦门(+2)was born in Xiamen in Fujian Province in1956395岁时因肺病去世 (+2)died of lung disease at the age of 95. 4一位著名英国喜剧演员(+1)A famous English comic actor人物概况humorous
Imaginative
with a moustachediligent
warm-hearted
determined
considerate
wise
slim and strong body 睿智的
削瘦强壮的身材
幽默的
富有想象力的
留着一撮小胡子随和的
无私的
乐于助人勤奋的
热心的
意志坚定的
体贴的easy-going
selfless
be ready to help others外貌性格11953年大学毕业 (+1)graduated from college in 19532unlucky number
(no task) -33lucky number
(no task) +24在很小的时候就开始表演
(+1)began performing at an early age教育经历生平
经历11.在农业方面很感兴趣
2. 研究水稻(+2)1.shows great interest in agriculture
2. does research on rice2终身都奉献于中国妇女和儿童的医疗事业(+2)devoted all her life to medical work for Chinese women and children 3竭尽全力地建立一个新的，平等的以及自由的南非(+2)spared no efforts to found a new, equal and free South Africa4lucky number
(no task)exchange the results成就
评价11.为世界做出巨大的贡献
2. 被誉为“杂交水稻之父”(+2)1. make great contributions to the world
2. is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice”
2一位了不起的女性医生(+1)a great woman doctor31.在1993年获得了诺贝尔和平奖
2.是世界上最伟大的人之一(+2)1.got the Noble Peace Prize in 1993
2. is one of the greatest men in the world
4被认为是一位无声幽默的大师(+1)is considered as a master of nonverbal humourwas born into a poor farmer’s family in1930
was born in Xiamen in Fujian Province in1956
died of lung disease at the age of 95.
A famous English comic actor
graduated from college in 1953
devoted all her life to medical work for Chinese women and children spared no efforts to found a new, equal and free South Africa
make great contributions to the world
is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice”
got the Noble Peace Prize in 1993
is one of the greatest men in the world
is considered as a master of nonverbal humour朗读和识记描述人物的重点短语：通过复习Reading 了解如何用英语对人物进行介绍；
在练习中体会并掌握写作中常用的一些技巧：同位语结构、非谓语动词、介词短语、倒装结构、定语从句、状语从句等；
掌握描述人物的重点短语和高频句式。学习目标：Para. 1
介绍人物概况Revision & WritingRead Para 1 and sum up the key words: Q1: What are the key words in the Para 1 ?Although he is one of China's most famous scientists, Yuan Longping considers himself a farmer, for he works the land to do his research.Indeed, his sunburnt face and arms and his slim, strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers.This special strain of rice makes it possible to produce one-third more of the crop in the same fields. Now more than 60% of the rice produced in China each year is from this hybrid strain.---introducing Yuan Longping’s ---introducing Yuan Longping’s ---introducing Yuan Longping’s job or identity (身份)appearanceachievement写作任务1：使用简单句描述袁隆平的身份, 外貌和工作:（2）他脸庞和手臂黝黑，身躯削瘦而又结实。（1）袁隆平是中国著名的科学家之一。Yuan Longping is one of China’s most famous scientists.He has sunburnt face and arms and slim ,strong body. （3）在过去的五十年里，他田间研究水稻。He has worked the land to do the research for the past five decades. (1) Yuan Longping is one of China’s most famous scientists.
(2) He has sunburnt face and arms and slim ,strong body.
(3) He has worked the land to do the research for the past five decades. (仿写)写作任务1：合并描写人物身份, 外貌和工作 的三个简单句：(B4U3 page 18) :
The tramp, a poor, homeless man
with a moustache,
wore large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat. (同位语) (介词短语描述外貌) (Charlie Chaplin)(B7U2 page 11):
He was tall and handsome with smooth hair and a deep voice,
although his facial expression never changed.(介词短语描述外貌) (A Robot, Tony)整合成： Yuan Longping, one of China’s most famous scientists (同位语) with sunburnt face and arms and slim ,strong body (介词短语描述外貌), has worked the land to do the research for the past five decades. (1) Yuan Longping is one of China’s most famous scientists.
(2) He has sunburnt face and arms and slim ,strong body.
(3) He has worked the land to do the research for the past five decades. (仿写)写作任务1：合并描写人物身份, 外貌和工作 的三个简单句： 仿写句式： The tramp, a poor, homeless man (同位语) with a moustache (介词短语描述外貌), wore large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat. (确定选取谓语动词)(选取表身份的名词作同位语)(转换成介词短语)巩固练习Revision & Writing巩固练习: 运用同位语,介词短语或定语从句试整合下列描写人物概况的句子：(课文原句Book 4, Unit 1, Page 1)：Song Qingling was one of the top leaders in modern Chinese history.
She concerned herself with welfare projects for women and children.整合成： Song Qingling, one of the top leaders (同位语) in modern Chinese history (介词短语), concerned herself with welfare projects for women and children.(Song Qingling )Lin Qiaozhi was a doctor who became a specialist in women’s illness.
She devoted all her life to medical work for Chinese women and children.巩固练习: 运用同位语,介词短语或定语从句试整合下列描写人物概况句子：(课文原句Book 4, Unit 1, Page 1)：整合成： Lin Qiaozhi, a doctor (同位语) who became a specialist in women’s illness (定语从句), devoted all her life to medical work for Chinese women and children.(Lin Qiaozhi) (熟读或背诵)介绍人物概况的句式:
The tramp, a poor, homeless man (同位语) with a moustache (介词短语描述外貌), wore large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat.
Yuan Longping, one of China’s most famous scientists (同位语) with sunburnt face and arms and slim ,strong body (介词短语描述外貌), has worked the land to do the research for the past five decades.
Lin Qiaozhi, a doctor (同位语) who became a specialist in women’s illness (定语从句), devoted all her life to medical work for Chinese women and children.写作技巧总结 1：尽量用_____________________________________________修饰句子的主语，简明扼要地介绍人物的概况。同位语结构+介词短语/同位语结构+定语从句Para. 2
描述人物教育经历/生平经历Revision & Writing---introducing Yuan Longping’s
Read Para 2 and find the key information according to the given tips : Q1: What are the key words in the Para 2 ?birth, education, experiences and achievements.be born into a poor farmer’s familydo research on rice for over half a century
search for a way to increase rice outputsgraduate from Southwest Agricultural Collegeis regarded as the agricultural pioneer of the world
develop super hybrid riceis well-known in many other countries
help the UN (to) fight against starvation根据关键词口头介绍介绍袁隆平的教育经历和生平经历：根据关键词用单句介绍袁隆平的教育经历和生平经历：In 1930& in 1953:(1) Dr Yuan was born into a poor farmer’s family in 1930.
He graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953.Since his graduation from college:(2) Since his graduation from college, he has done research on rice for over half a century and devoted all his time and energy to searching for a way to increase rice outputs. In 1974：(3) He is regarded as the agricultural pioneer of the world.
He first developed super hybrid rice in 1974. Now：(4) Dr Yuan is also well-known in many other countries.
His research has helped the UN (to) fight against
starvation in a better way. 写作任务2：改写下列描写人物教育经历和生平经历的句子使句子长短有致，加强内容的逻辑连贯性。Dr Yuan was born into a poor farmer’s family in 1930.
He graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953.(课文原句)：Born into a poor farmer’s family in 1930(过去分词状语结构), Dr Yuan graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953.(1) 高频句式:Born in+ 地点+on(具体哪天)/in+时间, sb+谓语….写作任务2：改写下列描写人物教育经历和生平经历的句子使句子长短有致，加强内容的逻辑连贯性。写作要点：请改写下列介绍袁隆平的教育经历和生平经历的句子：Since his graduation from college, he has done research on rice for over half a century and devoted all his time and energy to searching for a way to increase rice outputs. 改写成： Since his graduation from college, not only has he done (倒装结构) research on rice for over half a century but also devoted all his time and energy to searching for a way to increase rice outputs. (2) 写作任务2：改写下列描写人物教育经历和生平经历的句子使句子长短有致，加强内容的逻辑连贯性。写作要点：请改写下列介绍袁隆平的教育经历和生平经历的句子：改写成： Since his graduation from college, he has done research on rice for over half a century , devoting all his time and energy to (分词状语结构) searching for a way to increase rice outputs. Since his graduation from college, he has done research on rice for over half a century and devoted all his time and energy to searching a way to increase rice outputs. (2) 写作任务2：改写下列描写人物教育经历和生平经历的句子使句子长短有致，加强内容的逻辑连贯性。写作要点：请改写下列介绍袁隆平的教育经历和生平经历的句子：He is regarded as the agricultural pioneer of the world.
He first developed super hybrid rice in 1974.改写成：He is regarded as the agricultural pioneer of the world who first developed super hybrid rice in 1974. (定语从句)
Dr Yuan is also well-known in many other countries.
His research has helped the UN (to) fight against starvation in a better way. 改写成： Dr Yuan is also well-known in many other countries, because his research has helped the UN (to) fight against starvation in a better way. (状语从句)
(3) (4) Born into a poor farmer’s family in 1930(过去分词状语结构), Dr Yuan graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953. Since his graduation from college, not only has he done (倒装结构) research on rice for over half a century but also devoted all his time and energy to searching for a way to increase rice outputs. He is regarded as the agricultural pioneer of the world who first produced super hybrid rice in 1974. (定语从句) . Dr Yuan is also well-known in many other countries, because his research has helped the UN (to) fight against starvation in a better way. (状语从句) (熟读或背诵)介绍人物教育经历和生平经历的句式： 巩固练习Revision & Writing*硕士学位：master’s degree; **博士：doctor(2012年广东高考)基础写作：
你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。Born on March 7, 1915(分词状语), Allan Stewart, an Australian (同位语), become the oldest man to obtain a master’s degree over the world in 2006. 巩固练习：运用分词状语结构，倒装句，复合句等描写人物教育经历和生平经历：所需短语:
an Australianobtain a master’s degree(分词状语；同位语)(2012年广东高考)基础写作： 高频句式:Born in+ 地点+on(具体哪天)/in+时间, sb+谓语...基础写作：
你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。In his eighties, he decided to study law, after which (定语从句)he obtained his third degree in 2006.In 2012, not only did(倒装句)he manage to get his fourth degree by online learning , but also he won praise from his teacher for his good time management in study.所需短语:
in his eightieswin praise fromgood time management in study(after which 定语从句)(not only…but also…倒装句) (熟读或背诵)： Born on March 7, 1915(分词状语结构), Allan Stewart, an Australian (同位语), become the oldest man to obtain a master’s degree over the world in 2006. In his eighties, he decided to study law, after which (定语从句)he obtained his third degree in 2006. In 2012, not only did(倒装句)he manage to get his fourth degree by online learning , but also he won praise from his teacher for his good time management in study.(2012年广东高考)基础写作： 写作技巧总结 2：尽量用_____________________________________________描写人物教育经历和生平经历使句子长短有致，加强内容的逻辑连贯性。分词状语结构，倒装句，复合句等Para. 3&4
评价人物的品质和成就Revision & WritingRead Para 3&4 and sum up the key words: Q1: What are the key words in the Para 3 ?Dr Yuan is quite satisfied with his life.
However, he doesn't care about being famous.---introducing Yuan Longping’s personality Q2: What are the key words in the Para 4 ?Just dreaming for things, however, costs nothing.Long ago Dr yuan had a dream about rice plants as tall as sorghum. Now , Dr Yuan has another dream: to export his rice so that it can be grown around the globe.---introducing Yuan Longping’s dreamsAlthough he is one of China's most famous scientists, Dr Yuan considers himself a farmer.___________
He has done his research on rice for the past five decades, without giving up. ________________________________
One dream is not always enough.________________
He loves and cares for his people.________________
He developed super hybrid rice to help Chinese farmers and hungry people around the world.______________
He doesn't care about being famous and money. He gives millions of yuan to equip others for their research in agriculture. ______________________
He would much rather work than lead a comfortable life.
______________modest determined and perseverant creativeconsiderateselfless and generousambitiousdiligentWhat kind of person is Dr Yuan?写作任务3 (评写) : 使用下列的短语和句式评述人物的品质或成就。Language points(words and expressions): a pioneer, a great scientist, do research on rice, dream of, devote… to finding, increase…. without expanding, rid…. of the hunger, would rather, lead a comfortable life, care little about, be satisfied with… love and care for people…(句式)sentence patterns:
He is loved/respected / be highly thought of as … who…
Devoted all one’s life to..., he…
Remembered as…, he….
In terms of money and fame, he…
He is so/such…that …
His …. is encouraging us to ….
What he has done proves that ….
(课文原句B4U1 page 6 )： It was hard work and determination as well as her gentle nature that made her a great specialist in women’s disease.
What made her success was the kindness and consideration she showed to all her patients.(课文原句B4U3 page 18 )：He is loved and remembered as a great actor who could inspire people with great confidence. two examples:Language points(words and expressions): a pioneer, a great scientist, do research on rice, dream of, devote… to finding, increase…. without expanding, rid…. of the hunger, would rather, lead a comfortable life, care little about, be satisfied with… love and care for people…(句式)sentence patterns:
He is loved/respected / be highly thought of as … who…
Devoted all one’s life to..., he…
Remembered as…, he….
In terms of money and fame, he…
He is so/such…that …
His …. is encouraging us to ….
What he has done proves that ….
(评写)写作任务3： 使用下列的短语和句式评述人物的品质或成就。Dr Yuan is loved/respected / is highly thought of as a great scientist who developed super hybrid rice and helped the UN to rid the world of hunger.
Devoted all his life to the research on rice, Dr Yuan has made great contributions to the agriculture.
Remembered as “Father of Hybrid Rice”, he is one of the greatest scientists in China/ a great pioneer in agriculture.
In terms of money and fame, he cares little about them and gives millions of yuan to equip others for their research in agriculture.
Examples (熟读或背诵) ： He loves and cares for his people so much that he is loved by everyone who knows him.
His determination to overcome difficulties in the research for a way to increase rice harvests without expanding the area of the fields encourages us not to fear difficulties and failures in life and make every effort to overcome them.
What he has done /His success proves that there is a will , there is a way/ No pains, No gains.
Examples (熟读或背诵) ： 写作技巧总结 3：尽量用______________________________________________描写人物的品质和成就使句子丰富多样。动词短语, 形容词短语, 高频句式总结Revision & Writing 写作技巧总结： 同位语+介词短语/定语从句…分词状语结构、倒装句、复合句等动词短语、形容词短语、高频句式等篇章写作及作业 (Homework)Revision & Writing基础写作
请用5句话描述林巧稚的以下信息:基础写作
请用5句话描述林巧稚的以下信息:Lin Qiaozhi is a great woman of China, a specialist in women’s diseases.Born in Xiamen in Fujian Province in1901, she died in 1983.所需短语:
a specialist in women’s diseases基础写作
请用5句话描述林巧稚的以下信息:With great hard work and determination, she was admitted into medical school and became an outstanding woman doctor . 所需短语:
great hard word and determination
was admitted intoNot only was she busy writing books and articles on how to care for babies to cut down the death rate but also she devoted all her life to medical work for Chinese women and children, making sure that about 50,000 babies were safely delivered.基础写作
请用5句话描述林巧稚的以下信息:所需短语:
care for babies
medical work for chinese women and children
be safely delivered基础写作
请用5句话描述林巧稚的以下信息:She is loved and remembered for her kindness and consideration she showed to all her patients. What she did is encouraging thousands of people to continue her career.所需短语:
is loved and remembered for
show her kindness and consideration
continue her career (熟读或背诵) ： Lin Qiaozhi is a great woman of China, a specialist in women’s diseases. (同位语) Born in Xiamen in Fujian Province in1901, (分词状语结构) she died in 1983. With great hard work and determination(介词短语), she was admitted into medical school and became an outstanding woman doctor . Not only was she busy writing books and articles on how to care for babies to cut down the death rate but also she devoted all her life to medical work for Chinese women and children, making sure that about 50,000 babies were safely delivered(倒装句/分词状语结构) . She is loved and remembered for her kindness and consideration she showed to all her patients. What she did is encouraging thousands of people to continue her career. (动词短语/高频句式)