课件31张PPT。We can write beautifully !教师寄语:An idle youth ,a needy age.
idle: lazy,bord,free;
needy: poor enough to need helpteaching aim write a composition about a personthe 3 C rule
cleanclearcorrectcleancleandirtyclearstate
age,look
nationality
hobby
character
comment
20----30words story oropening
rising action
turning point
falling action
ending
experience
40----50 wordsArchimedes and the golden crown1.Archimedes found that the crown displaced more water than gold of the same weight.
2.He asked Archimedes to find out the truth.
3.King Hiero douted that the golden crown was real.
4. Archimedes was very clever to find out the truth
5.Archimedes had a good idea when he filled his bath.
opening__ rising__ turning__ falling__ ending___
32514Miss Yu is a good teacherI love my mother bestA person
1.I like ___ in history
2.A person I’ll never forget
3.A/An adj person in my mind
4.I want to be a/an job when I grow up
5.I want to learn from___
6.I want to be a person like___correctthe 3C rulehomework
Finish the articie you are writing
Choose another title to practise writing goodbyeThank you