2019年中考英语话题作文冲刺周周练4：提建议（写作导航+参考范文）

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初三中考作文周周练之四

主 题 概 述
体裁：议论（阐释类） 话题：提建议（How to do/be…）（二） 题型：提示性作文 提示性作文通常给出具体的内容并规定作文的字数。这类作文限定了文章的思想内容，便于同学们把注意力集中在英文表达上，突出了英语作文的测试要点。 要想写好提示性作文，必须注意以下四点： 确定题目，明确中心。要善于从所提示的情景中确定中心思想，明确写作意图，并在把我主题内容的基础上，确定文章的主题句、写作方法以及分配段落的方式。 依据提示，进行构思。在写作过程中，必须按照提示的范围和要求来撰写文章。提示的内容是文章的总体框架，应该在提示内容的范围内进行分析、构思。在此基础之上可以进行适当发挥。 扩展语句，升华思想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定的逻辑关系来展开段落，句与句、段与段志坚衔接要自然恰当。切忌把中文提示的情景逐词逐句地翻译，而应当根据所提示的内容用自己熟悉的英文词语、句型、句式来表达。 语法准确，句意连贯。应根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态，力求句型、句式丰富多样。 变式：How to study well. How to get along well with others. How to solve problems. How to release stress. How to learn English well. How to lead a healthy life. How to sleep well. How to eat a balanced diet. How to be a good sportsman. How to shop on line. How to make good friends with others. How to make a milkshake. How to study for a test.
常 用 表 达
实用词汇 注意连接词和过渡词等词语的使用，以增强文章的条理性和逻辑性。常用的过渡词和连接词包括： 表观点：I think…, in my opinion… 表顺序：first, second, third, finally, later on, next, to start/begin with, also, what’s more 表因果：because, so, so that, therefore 表转折：but, however, although, though, even if, even though, instead 表选择：either…or…, neither…nor…, not…but… 表比较：compare with/to… 表总结：总之in a word, all in all 简而言之in short
实用句式提建议常用句型：句型一：What/How about doing…? 做….怎么样？ 句型二：Let’s (not) do …? 让我们(不要)做…吧。 句型三：You’d/We’d better (not) do …? 最好（不要）做… 句型四：Why not do ….? Why don’t you do…? 为什么不做… 句型五：If I were you, I would do…. 如果我是你，我会… 句型六：You should (not) do …? 你（不）应该做…
写 作 导 航 第一段：提出中心论点（要开门见山，不要拖泥带水）； Nowadays, there are more and more… 第二段：讨论问题，并提出建议（多使用过渡词和连接词，逻辑要清晰）； Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, … Finally, … 第三段：总结和归纳（首位呼应，突出中心） All in all, if all of us can do so, ….

参考范文1：How to Protect the Environment
Good environment can make people feel happy and fit. To improve the environment means to improve our life.?So it is our duty to protect the environment.
In fact, all of us can make a small change in the way we live. It will make a big difference?to our environment. Here are a few tips.
First, we can stop driving our personal cars. We can go to school or work on foot or by bus. Not only can it protect environment, but also it is good for our health. Second, we are not supposed to drop litter anywhere, we should put them into the trash bin. What’s more, we can take our own bags instead of plastic bags while shopping. Finally, we should protect the trees and plant more trees.
I think if everyone does something to protect the environment, our world will be much better.

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参考范文2：为了倡导低碳生活，你们班下周将进行一次题为“如何节约能源”的讨论。请根据以下提示，写一篇题为“How to Save Energy”的英语短文。
提示：1.多选择公共交通方式出行；
2.购物时携带环保购物袋；
3.节约水电；
4.废品循环再利用。
要求：1.内容要包括以上提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.80词左右。
How to Save Energy
In order to save energy, we can do the following things.
First, take public transportation when we go out. We can take buses instead of cars to go to school or go to work. Second, take cloth bags when we go shopping. Try our best to stop using the plastic bags. Third, save water and electricity as much as possible. For example, we can open the windows rather than turn on the air-conditioner on some hot summer days. Finally, collect reusable waste for recycling, such as waste paper.
Everyone can do something to save energy. Let’s start now!
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参考范文3：每个人都希望自己幸福快乐，但是不同的人对幸福快乐有着不同的看法。请以“How to Live a Happy Life”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. Keep healthy (lifestyle, exercise…);
2. Make more friends (share joy and sadness);
3. Help others (volunteer);
4. Have a dream and work hard for it.
要求：1.内容应包括以上提示，可适当发挥；
2.80~100词左右.
How to Live a Happy Life
Everyone hopes to live happily. But different people have different opinions about happiness.
How to live a happy life? First, you need to eat a balanced diet and take exercise to keep healthy. Second, making friends can also help you live happily. You will feel happy when you share joy and sadness with them. Third, you can help others often, for example, to be a volunteer. Last of all, you should always have a dream and work hard for it.
In fact, there’re lots of things you can do to live a happy life. So why not have a try?

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习作：假设你在学校论坛上看见一名初中生对于应该如何跟朋友相处感到很困惑，正在向大家征求好的建议。请根据以下提示，给他回帖，提出自己的建议。
提示：1.和朋友真诚、友好地相处；
2.朋友意味着付出而不是获取；
3.当朋友面对失败时要理解他们、支持他们，而不是嘲笑他们。
4…….
要求：1.根据提示可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.80~100词左右。
How to Get Along Well with Friends
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参考范文：How to Get Along Well with Friends
Here are my opinions about how to get along well with friends.
First, friends should believe in each other. You should be sincere to your friends, so that they will believe in you as well. Second, friends mean giving rather than receiving, so think more about your friends instead of yourself. Third, never laugh at your friends. Support them when they fail in something and try to help them when they are in need.
In short, making friends is a skill. Try to learn it and you will make true friends.
























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