中考英语冲刺专题复习课件：书面表达写作指导（美化篇章高分写作）
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中考英语专题复习
书面表达写作指导
美化篇章高分写作
Dear Jenny,
I want to share something about Jean with you. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She smiles a lot. I was too shy to make friends with others. What should I do? I didn’t know. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. I felt happy.
She is patient and caring. English used to be hard for me. So I decided to give it up. She didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me. She tried her best to encourage me. She tried her best to change me. I was moved. I worked harder. My English has improved a lot. Work hard at school. It was important. I realized it.
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
Jack
Beginning
Dear Jenny,
I want to share something about Jean with you. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She smiles a lot. I was too shy to make friends with others. What should I do? I didn’t know. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. I felt happy.
She is patient and caring. English used to be hard for me. So I decided to give it up. She didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me. She tried her best to encourage me. She tried her best to change me. I was moved. I worked harder. My English has improved a lot. Work hard at school. It was important. I realized it.
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
Jack
Example
Beginning
Dear Jenny,
I want to share something about Jean with you. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She smiles a lot. I was too shy to make friends with others. What should I do? I didn’t know. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. I felt happy.
She is patient and caring. English used to be hard for me. So I decided to give it up. She didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me. She tried her best to encourage me. She tried her best to change me. I was moved. I worked harder. My English has improved a lot. Work hard at school. It was important. I realized it.
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
Jack
Example
Example
Ending
Beginning
Dear Jenny,
I want to share something about Jean with you. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She smiles a lot. I was too shy to make friends with others. What should I do? I didn’t know. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. I felt happy.
She is patient and caring. English used to be hard for me. So I decided to give it up. She didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me. She tried her best to encourage me. She tried her best to change me. I was moved. I worked harder. My English has improved a lot. Work hard at school. It was important. I realized it.
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
Jack
She smiles a lot.
Tip1:Use vivid words and phrases.用生动的词
She always wears a bright/big/… smile on her face.
She always wears a smile on her face.
She worked harder.
She worked harder even/much harder.
She is a teacher who/that always wears a smile on her face.
She always wears a smile on her face. English used to be hard for me. What should I do? I don’t know….Work hard at school! It was important. I realized it.
Parts of Body:
正文(节选)
I don’t know what I should do.
I realized (that) it was important to work hard at school.
Tip2:Use complex sentences. (运用复合句）
have problems/difficulties/trouble/
a hard time doing sth.
Doing/To do…be +adj. for me.
It be+ adj. + for sb. to do sth.
find it +adj.+for sb. to do sth.
English used to be hard for me. What should I do? I don’t know. I decided to give it up. ….
Parts of Body:
正文(节选)
Tip3:Use different expressions. 句子表达方式多样，不单一。
…. She tried her best to care for me. She tried her best to encourage me. She tried her best to change me.
She went out of her way to….
She made great efforts to….
….
Parts of Body:
正文(节选)
I felt happy.
How happy I felt!
You can never imagine how happy I felt!
…. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She is a teacher who always wears a smile on her face. I was too shy to make friends with others. I didn’t know what I should do. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. How happy I felt!
She is also patient and caring. I used to have problems learning English. I decided to give it up. She didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me. She went out of her way to encourage me. She made great efforts to change me. I was moved. I worked even harder. My English has improved a lot. I realized how important it was to work hard at school!
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
Tip4:Use linking words properly 连接词使用恰当
(
)
Coherent (连贯的)?
Coherent (连贯的)?
写作当中句子和句子之间比较常用的连接词
1.表示并列/递进关系：
2.表示转折关系：
3.表示因果关系：
4.表示结果：
5. 其它常用连词：
and, besides, what’s more, also, not only…, but also…,
at the same time,…
but, however,…
because, since, so, therefore,…
as a result, so…that…,…
of course, in fact, actually, after that, from then on,…
…. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She is a teacher who always wears a smile on her face. I was too shy to make friends with others. I didn’t know what I should do. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. How happy I felt!
She is also patient and caring. I used to have problems learning English. I decided to give it up. __,she didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me, she went out of her way to encourage me. , she made great efforts to change me. I was moved I worked even harder. __________, my English has improved a lot. I realized how important it was to work hard at school!
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
But
However
and
so
that
As a result
so…that…; besides; and; but; as a result; however; besides
Besides
Polish(美化) the writing.
1、Discuss in a group.
2、Use tips to polish the writing.
have problems doing sth.
It is+adj. for sb. to do sth.
make efforts to do sth./go out of one’s way to do sth.
be ready to do...
get on well with...
play an important role
do well in...
bring out the best...
spend time in doing...
not only...but also...
....
Polish your own writing.
Homework
谢谢
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书面表达写作指导
美化篇章高分写作
Dear Jenny,
I want to share something about Jean with you. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She smiles a lot. I was too shy to make friends with others. What should I do? I didn’t know. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. I felt happy.
She is patient and caring. English used to be hard for me. So I decided to give it up. She didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me. She tried her best to encourage me. She tried her best to change me. I was moved. I worked harder. My English has improved a lot. Work hard at school. It was important. I realized it.
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
Jack
Beginning
Dear Jenny,
I want to share something about Jean with you. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She smiles a lot. I was too shy to make friends with others. What should I do? I didn’t know. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. I felt happy.
She is patient and caring. English used to be hard for me. So I decided to give it up. She didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me. She tried her best to encourage me. She tried her best to change me. I was moved. I worked harder. My English has improved a lot. Work hard at school. It was important. I realized it.
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
Jack
Example
Beginning
Dear Jenny,
I want to share something about Jean with you. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She smiles a lot. I was too shy to make friends with others. What should I do? I didn’t know. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. I felt happy.
She is patient and caring. English used to be hard for me. So I decided to give it up. She didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me. She tried her best to encourage me. She tried her best to change me. I was moved. I worked harder. My English has improved a lot. Work hard at school. It was important. I realized it.
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
Jack
Example
Example
Ending
Beginning
Dear Jenny,
I want to share something about Jean with you. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She smiles a lot. I was too shy to make friends with others. What should I do? I didn’t know. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. I felt happy.
She is patient and caring. English used to be hard for me. So I decided to give it up. She didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me. She tried her best to encourage me. She tried her best to change me. I was moved. I worked harder. My English has improved a lot. Work hard at school. It was important. I realized it.
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
Jack
She smiles a lot.
Tip1:Use vivid words and phrases.用生动的词
She always wears a bright/big/… smile on her face.
She always wears a smile on her face.
She worked harder.
She worked harder even/much harder.
She is a teacher who/that always wears a smile on her face.
She always wears a smile on her face. English used to be hard for me. What should I do? I don’t know….Work hard at school! It was important. I realized it.
Parts of Body:
正文(节选)
I don’t know what I should do.
I realized (that) it was important to work hard at school.
Tip2:Use complex sentences. (运用复合句）
have problems/difficulties/trouble/
a hard time doing sth.
Doing/To do…be +adj. for me.
It be+ adj. + for sb. to do sth.
find it +adj.+for sb. to do sth.
English used to be hard for me. What should I do? I don’t know. I decided to give it up. ….
Parts of Body:
正文(节选)
Tip3:Use different expressions. 句子表达方式多样，不单一。
…. She tried her best to care for me. She tried her best to encourage me. She tried her best to change me.
She went out of her way to….
She made great efforts to….
….
Parts of Body:
正文(节选)
I felt happy.
How happy I felt!
You can never imagine how happy I felt!
…. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She is a teacher who always wears a smile on her face. I was too shy to make friends with others. I didn’t know what I should do. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. How happy I felt!
She is also patient and caring. I used to have problems learning English. I decided to give it up. She didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me. She went out of her way to encourage me. She made great efforts to change me. I was moved. I worked even harder. My English has improved a lot. I realized how important it was to work hard at school!
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
Tip4:Use linking words properly 连接词使用恰当
(
)
Coherent (连贯的)?
Coherent (连贯的)?
写作当中句子和句子之间比较常用的连接词
1.表示并列/递进关系：
2.表示转折关系：
3.表示因果关系：
4.表示结果：
5. 其它常用连词：
and, besides, what’s more, also, not only…, but also…,
at the same time,…
but, however,…
because, since, so, therefore,…
as a result, so…that…,…
of course, in fact, actually, after that, from then on,…
…. She is the teacher I will never forget.
She teaches me many things. She is a teacher who always wears a smile on her face. I was too shy to make friends with others. I didn’t know what I should do. She taught me to smile more and enjoy life. I tried and found many friends. How happy I felt!
She is also patient and caring. I used to have problems learning English. I decided to give it up. __,she didn’t give me up. She tried her best to care for me, she went out of her way to encourage me. , she made great efforts to change me. I was moved I worked even harder. __________, my English has improved a lot. I realized how important it was to work hard at school!
I think a good teacher should bring out the best in a student, just like Jean. Do you agree? Please reply soon.
But
However
and
so
that
As a result
so…that…; besides; and; but; as a result; however; besides
Besides
Polish(美化) the writing.
1、Discuss in a group.
2、Use tips to polish the writing.
have problems doing sth.
It is+adj. for sb. to do sth.
make efforts to do sth./go out of one’s way to do sth.
be ready to do...
get on well with...
play an important role
do well in...
bring out the best...
spend time in doing...
not only...but also...
....
Polish your own writing.
Homework
谢谢
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