中考英语冲刺专题复习课件：书面表达写作指导（作文注意事项）

中考英语专题复习
书面表达写作指导
写作，找要点
tall/short
thin/heavy
Yao Ming is taller than Zeng Zhiwei.
Zeng Zhiwei is shorter than Yao Ming.
Liu Yifei is thinner than Han Hong.
Han Hong is heavier than Liu Yifei.
Xie Na is funnier than Wang Ning.
Wang Ning is more serious than Xie Na.
as …as
Lucy is as beautiful as Lily.
用心比较
funny/serious
much
much
Make sentences using the words given.
Watch and think.
观察与思考
much /a lot/a little/even 修饰形容词或副词的_______
比较级
※ 写作方法指导
一、审题，找要点。
简要介绍一位家人或朋友这几年来的变化，包括外形、性格、喜好、生活方式等几个方面的变化。必须要写到上述这四点！
二、怎样写？
开头总写: People sure change! My best friend, Mary has changed a lot in the last few years.
第一点: She used to be_______, but now ______ .第二点: She used to be _______, but now ______ __第三点: She used to like _______, but now she likes _____
第四点: She used to get up at 7:00, but now she gets up at 6:00. She used to _______, but now she
__________________（在日常生活方面拓展。）
结尾：As Time goes by, it’s amazing how she’s changed and she is never a child.
People sure change! My best friend, Mary has changed a lot in the last few years.
She used to be fat but now she is thin. She used to have short hair but now she grows it long. She used to be really quiet but now she is outgoing. She used to spend a lot of time playing computer games, but now she has to study all day. She used to do morning exercises and some other activities every day, but now she is used to studying all the time and spend little time on her hobbies. In the evening, she used to watch TV?with her family, but now she must?go to bed early, because she has to?get?up early in the morning to read the text books.
Time goes by, it’s amazing how she’s changed and she is never a child.
※ 写作方法指导
一、审题，找要点。
1．生活在社区里的孩子不认识周围的邻居，没有兄弟姐妹（没朋友）①。
2．提出自己的建议：吸引孩子们参加上文提到的社区青年俱乐部并参加其组织的活动②；
给孩子们提供一个娱乐交流的地方③；
组织社区里的孩子参加清洁本小区的公益劳动④。
必须要写到上述这四点！
二、怎样写？
第一点: 开头：Thank you for reading my E-mail! ______________(过渡句子：Luckily, you want to help us. Here are my suggestions.)
第二点: First, I think we can__, We can___, such as ___
第三点: Second, I think we can ______, and then_______
第四点: Third, I think we can_________________.
结尾：Our life will be fun and colorful
Dear Uncle Huang,
Thank you for reading my e-mail! I am living in this community. I don’t have any sister or brothers. I also have no friends here. Luckily, you want to help us. Here are my suggestions.
First, we can organize the children in this community to clean up our neighborhood. Through this activity, we can know each other and make new friends.
Second, I hope we can be offered a room to do homework, and then we can help and learn from each other.
Third, I think we can ask children to join our Youth Club. We can take part in a lot of interesting activities, such as holiday camps and discos, regular visit to the old people, evening parties and concerts. Our life will be fun and colourful.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Ping
B．书面表达：
2013年1月，我国政府号召全民“拒绝浪费，文明用餐”，加入“光盘行动”。我们作为中学生应当为光盘行动做一些事情。请根据下面提示，联系实际，适当发挥，以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
内容包括：
1．在节约食物方面，至少给出两条建议，并说明原因。
2．在健康饮食方面，至少给出两条建议，并说明原因。
文章开头已给出，不计入总数。

一、审题，找要点。
1．在节约食物方面,至少给出两条建议 ①②
2．并说明原因 ③
3．在健康饮食方面,至少给出两条建议 ④⑤
4．并说明原因 ⑥ 最少要写到上述这六点！
二、怎样写？
Save Food and Eat Healthily
开头：Our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life.(已给出)
第一、二、三点：We middle school students should do something for it.（过渡句子）To save food, we should（shouldn’t）_______.because________.
第四、五、六点：To eat healthily, we should（shouldn’t）__________. Because___________.
结尾：Let’s work together from now on!
Our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.
To save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food. We should eat up all the food. We shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while dining out. Because many people in the world don’t have enough to eat.
To eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food. It’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet. We’d better not eat in small restaurants. Because the food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough. We’d better eat at school or at home if we have time. Let’s work together from now on!
Save Food and Eat Healthily
B．书面表达：
现在社会普遍对90后有不同程度的误解，认为他们自私、无礼，所以不能很好地与人沟通……那么，作为一名90后学生，你又是怎么看待这个问题的呢？
请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，分别列举至少三条优点和两条不足之处进行描述。
As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently.
On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways; sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t communicate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.
B．书面表达：
假设你们班级即将召开以“感恩”为主题的班会，要求向大家介绍一下你最想向谁表达感恩之情，他或她为你做了什么，你又将怎样回报他或她的付出。请结合上文内容，以“Thank you, my…”为题写一篇发言稿。
要求：
1．句子通顺，语意连贯。
2．包括所有提示内容。
3．不少于80词。
※ 写作方法指导
一、审题，找要点。
1．你最想向谁表达感恩之情。①
2．他或她为你做了什么。②
3．你又将怎样回报他或她的付出。③
必须要写到上述这三点！
二、怎样写？
Thank You, My Mother
第一点: 开头：Wherever we are today , whatever we are, we owe it to our parents who have given and taught us so much（这是信息归纳的第一句），so we should thank them, especially, thank our mother. I think my mother is one of the best mothers in the world.
第二点: She is the busiest one in my family. She ____. She ______. She ___. She ____.（可以多写几件事情来拓展哦！）
第三点: How will I show my thanks to my mother.（信息归纳的第一段最后一句话改一下人称即可。）
First,_________. Second, ________. Third, _______.（可以参照信息归纳所提到的五个感谢方式。）
结尾：In a word, I love my mother.
Thank You, My Mother
Wherever we are today, whatever we are, we owe it to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should thank them, especially, thank our mother. I think my mother is one of the best mothers in the world.
She is the busiest one in my family. She does chores for the family and cares about my study. She has taught me a lot. She does lots of things for me. But she never wants anythings in return.
How will I show my thanks to my mother? First, this year, I am going to give her a surprise birthday party and buy her a special present. Second, I’ll do well in school. Third, I’ll help her do housework when I’m free. I want to make her happy.
In a word, I love my mother. I’m thankful for what my mom have done for me.
B．书面表达：
历史上有很多发明，起着很重要的作用，其中一些改变了世界。依你之见，什么是最重要的发明，并说明原因，也就是它起的作用（不少于三点）。80词左右。

一、审题，找要点。
1．什么是最重要的发明。①
2．重要的原因（三点）。②③④
最少要写到上述这四点！
二、怎样写？
开头：There are a lot of inventions in the history. Some of them play an important role in people’s life and some have greatly changed the world.
第一点：In my opinion, I think__________________.
第二点：First, __________________________
第三点：Second, ____________________.
第四点Third, __.（还可以多写几个原因来拓展字数。
结尾：In a word, I do agree that ______ are the most important invention.
The Most Helpful Invention
There are a lot of inventions in the history. Some of them play an important role in people’s life and some have greatly changed the world.
In my opinion, I think the most important invention is the car. First, people used to travel by train or by plane. But now, they can go any place by car. Second, when holiday comes, they can visit their family and friends by car. Third, they can also go to many places of interest to enjoy themselves.
In a word, I do agree that cars are the most important invention.
When we talk about a balanced diet, we are supposed to eat healthy food regularly and scientifically. ______________________________(每天和牛奶是有益的）, so as to having different kinds of fruits and vegetables.________________________________________(远离垃圾食品也是个好方法）, most of it is unhealthy.
Drinking milk every day is helpful
Staying away from junk food is also a good idea
__________________________________(吃干净的食物是很重要的）. It’s a good choice to eat at school or at home if we have time.________________________________(在小餐馆吃也不怎么好），the food and the oil they use maybe not healthy enough.
It’s not fine to eat in small restaurants.
It’s important to eat clean food.
All in all, __________________________________________ (良好的饮食习惯有益于你和我）
good eating habits are good for you and me.
it’s good for us to have good eating habits.

假设你叫陈涛，上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请根据下面的提示信息写一篇题为“A Pleasant Outing”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。
提示：(1) last weekend
(2) Go with
(3) (the North Hill Park)
(4) Ride bikes, climb mountains, picnic, play games……
(5) Feel
人称：第一人陈 I we
时态： 一般过去时，注意规则不规则过去式形式
布局：三段，总分总
Last weekend, I had an outing with my classmates.
We went to the….
We did many things that day. First , we …. Then , after that, finally……
I felt really…./ It was a …outing. I had lots of fun.
Last weekend, I went for an outing with my
classmates. We did lots of fun things.
At 7：30 in the morning, we met at our school
gate. Then ,we went the North Hill Park by bike.
On the way, we were so excited that we sang
loudly. As soon as we arrived there, we began to
climb the hill at once. And we had a picnic on the
top of the hill. After that, we walked down the
path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced
under the trees and some boys played games
happily. We didn’t go back until 4 o’clock pm.
We were tired but very happy.
What a pleasant outing we had together!
中考注意四项
审题（男女名字，时态，选项的差别，关键字眼的标注）
预测听力内容，有可能怎么考你。一般来说数字，日期，时间的题都是算数题）
预防题目顺序与对话不一致
总之，审题和预测做好了，能帮助你获得更多的分。
听力：语速较快，题型灵活，特别是最后第三节，要有足够的防备。
一浏览大意，二细填，三检查。
关注上下文，关注文意，仔细推理推敲，切忌当成句子填空来填。
完型填空
阅读
一看题，包括有些题的选项，心中有考点，带题浏览全文，能选的先选
二细阅读，仔细排除选项，遇到模棱两可，自己都不确定的，一定要遵从文意，甚至要对相关句子，段落再梳理。
严防有个把单词或者语句很像的选项，对语意进行改变。
依据文本，推敲是否变形，何种变形，是否需要跨词性
特别注意书写格式，以及有时候中英文的不对等

词汇
任务型阅读
有点灵活，难度不大
只要仔细一点都能全对，这种题型不可以失分
特别注意，如果写的，对格式以及偶尔的变形要关注
审题仔细，看清要求

作文
格式， 人称，时态，要点

布局写作，注意详略得当，分段得当

每段段首段尾句要好，体现中心的，别忘了过渡句以及连接词的运用。

仔细检查语病，包括人称，时态，单复数，词组及动词搭配是否正确
抄写在答卷上，不要涂改，字迹美观

其他事项
考试需要的东西不要忘记携带，不要迟到。
涂卡要规范，修改答案时，小心涂干静，不然会当你是多选
别漏题目不涂，
注意答案与题号的一致
自己的个人信息千万别填错！
考试时候是下午，对抗号疲劳与瞌睡虫，（最好考前睡一小会）沉着冷静，超水平发挥出来。
在家的这点时间你还要做好下列事情
不熟悉的单词词组再看一下
不规则表再复习一下
作文好句积累
自己再练一份试卷，测速度测准确率，练练手！
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