Module 10 A holiday journey Unit 3 Language in use课件26张缺少音频

1.能按活动发生的时间先后顺序描述周末活动；
2.能正确使用一般过去时描述过去发生的事情；
3.能掌握记叙文的写作技巧。
What did Ms Wu do ?
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He nan’an Middle School
Huizhou City, Guangdong Province
Here are some photos of her last weekend
Ms Wu’s
weekend
had a picnic
swam
on Saturday
watched TV
took a boat tour
made sandcastles
on Sunday
went fishing
returned home
What did Ms Wu do last weekend?
Brainstorm: : weekend activities

My weekend
read a book
clean the house
on Saturday morning
watch TV
in the afternoon
Let’s talk!
A: What did you do last weekend?
B: I
saw a movie.
watched TV.
helped with the housework
went shopping.
rode a bike with my family.
had a picnic on the beach with my friends.
visited my grandparents.
did my homework.
clean my room
do my homework
help my mum
Look at the pictures and complete the passage.
On ________ morning, I ________ my________.
In the afternoon, I_____ my __________.
On Saturday night, I stayed at home
and ________ my _______cook dinner.
Saturday
cleaned
room
helped
did
homework
mom
Look at the pictures and complete the passage.
go to the library
play football
watch TV
On Sunday morning, I _____ ____ ____ ________.
Then in the afternoon, I _______ _______ with my
friends.
On Sunday night, I ________ ____.
went
to
the
library
played
football
watched
TV
★ I should use the__________________
simple past tense!
On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I did my homework. On Saturday night, I stayed at home and helped my mom cook dinner. On Sunday morning, I went to the library. Then in the afternoon, I played football with my friends. On Sunday night, I watched TV.
Put the sentences in order as quickly as you can.
(比一比，看看哪组又快又对？)
On Sunday night, I watched ... I saw ...
Then in the afternoon, I played …
On Sunday morning, I went ... I read ...
In the afternoon, I did ... It was ...
On Saturday morning, I cleaned ...
On Saturday night, I stayed …and helped ...
Time line
时间线

How can you find out the orders ?
★ I should write according to the __________
time line 时间线
On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I did my homework. It was a little difficult. On Saturday night, I stayed at home and helped my mom cook dinner. On Sunday morning, I went to the library. I read a book about history. Then in the afternoon, I played soccer with my friends. On Sunday night, I watched TV. I saw an interesting talk show.
Find out the differences
On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I did my homework. On Saturday night, I stayed at home and helped my mom cook dinner. On Sunday morning, I went to the library. Then in the afternoon, I played soccer with my friends. On Sunday night, I watched TV.
Underline
different sentences
in 1 minute.
How to make content(内容）of passage much richer(丰富）？
I did my homework. It was a little difficult.
I did my homework.
+more details
★I should ________________ .
On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I did my homework. It was a little difficult. On Saturday night, I stayed at home and helped my mom cook dinner. On Sunday morning, I went to the library. I read a book about history. Then in the afternoon, I played soccer with my friends. On Sunday night, I watched TV. I saw an interesting talk show.
My last weekend was very busy but I enjoyed it a lot.
I had a busy weekend.
content
(内容)
Body: Time line
正文：时间线
Beginning: Topic sentence
开头：主题句
Ending: Feelings
结尾：个人感受
Better the layout.
★ I should begin with ________________
and end with ________________.
a topic sentence
my feelings
你的老师Ms Wu给你写了一封信，请你回信谈一谈你上周末的活动。
1、可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2、60词左右，书信格式已给出。











____________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
On Saturday morning,
In the afternoon,
On Saturday night,
On Sunday morning,
In the afternoon,
On Sunday night,
I had a / an _____________weekend.
I had a good time last weekend.
Dear Ms Wu，
Yours，
Betty
★ I should ______________ before writing.
make an outline
1 min
★ I should _______ by myself after writing.
check
Is there a topic sentence(主题句) and an ending?
Is there a timeline?（时间轴）
Did you use the Simple Past Tense? （一般过去时）
Are there any spelling mistakes? (拼写错误)
Are there any grammatical mistakes? （语法错误）
Is your handwriting good?（书写工整）
请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，相互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习作打分。
Check with your partner
修改习作时可使用这些符号：

优美句子～； 漏词∧；
错处：○； 删除／；
第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。
第二档：11-12分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。
第三档：8-10分 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚 ,但有一些语言错误。
（以上为及格线）
第四档：4-7分 内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。
第五档：0-3分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。
评分档次和要求：
小组活动：小组选出一篇作文进行欣赏并打分。（15分标准）
欣赏角度：
1.写作基本要求：人称，时态
2.要点齐全
3.结构：开头，正文，结尾
4.好词好句
Writing talent
写作达人：

I had a wonderful weekend.
On Saturday morning, I went to my uncle’s farm with my parents. I rode a horse and fed chickens there. They were very funny. In the afternoon, we climbed a mountain and took a lot of photos. On Saturday evening, we went to KFC to have our dinner. In fact, the food there was unhealthy but very delicious. After dinner, we went home. On Sunday morning, I went shopping with my friends. I bought a gift for my mother. On Sunday afternoon, I listened to the music. It was very relaxing. Then I played ping-pong. In the evening, I watched TV and went to bed early.
I had a good time last weekend.
Summary
How to write an article about
the weekend. (three parts)


2. Learn some of the writing
skills.(put them in orders)
Beginning
Body
Ending
列
查
审
评
审
列
写
查
写
评
Rewrite your article.