Unit 8 Our Clothes Topic 2 We can design our own uniforms.（英语写作指导技巧）课件35张缺少音视频

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Unit 8 Our Clothes
英语写作技巧指导
Topic 2 We can design our own uniforms.
1.知识目标
复习有关衣服的单词,词组，句型。
2.能力目标
1）我能根据问题、图表描述怎样设计校服。
2）我能写一篇关于如何设计校服的文章。
3.情感目标。
通过设计自己的校服发挥想象力和提高自己的
创新能力，使我爱校服、更爱培养我的学校。
学习目标
brainstorm
school uniforms
discipline
amazing
look handsome/
beautiful /great
young
ugly
active
uncomfortable
unfashionable
What do you think of your school uniforms
pleated skirt 百褶裙
dress
Speak out the names of these clothes.
shirt
T-shirt
shorts
windbreaker
［ｉ:］
jeans 牛仔裤
sweater毛衣，
blouse
（女式）短上衣
coat 大衣
jacket 夹克
pants 长裤
stockings长筒袜
bowknot 蝴蝶结
school badge
学校徽章
tie 领带
hat 帽子
leather shoes 皮鞋
传统校服
私立学校校服
suit
school badge
bowknot
How can we write a good composition(作文)
Can you write a composition(作文) about school uniforms
校服对我们来说很重要我们在校每一天都穿校服。同学们是如何看待校服的呢？我们对此作了一次调查，右图是我们此次的调查结果。根据我们所得的信息，我们为学校写一篇完整的调查报告,并向学校提出重新设计校服的建议。
good discipline
ugly；no style
expensive
free to wear
写作第一步
审
U8 T2 P94 ----- 2
根据以下关键词及图表用简单的
句子列出文章的要点
如何看待校服
调查报告
建议重新设计校服
用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。
列
写作第二步:
good discipline
ugly；no style
expensive
free to wear
A lot of students wear school uniforms.
Some students say school uniforms are ugly.
A few students think school uniforms are expensive.
A few students think they should be free to wear .
Design our new school uniforms .
列
A lot of students wear school uniforms because they can not only show good discipline but also make us look good.Some students say school uniforms are ugly. They think that school uniforms have no style. A few students think school uniforms are expensive.A few students think they should be free to wear .
What do students think of their school uniforms We made a survey and here is our survey report.
In my opinion, I want to design our new school uniforms. So we should advise our school to design new school uniforms.
a nice head
a nice tail
a nice body
美
3. 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。
写作第三步：
1. 加首尾，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。
2. 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and,
not only…but also, neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or;
3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all,
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, on the one hand…on the other hand;
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words;
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next,
later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;
9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually, in fact,
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
关联词
What do students think of their school uniforms We interview some students and made a survey , here is our survey report.
According to it, we found that a lot of students wear school uniforms because they can not only show good discipline but also make us look good. And some students say school uniforms are ugly.They think that school uniforms have no style. Also a few students think school uniforms are expensive. However, a few students think they should be free to wear any clothes .
In my opinion, I want to design our new school uniforms. So we should advise our school to design new school uniforms.Then we'll look great and fashionable .
　　
查体裁格式是否正确符合要求、查内容是否符合题意、查行文是否连贯流畅、查语法是否有错误(包括时态、语态、主谓一致、单复数等)、查单词拼写和标点符号、查词数是否符合要求。
写作第四步：
查
评分标准：
（一）评分档次：
第一档（8-10分）
信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档（6 - 8分）
信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表
达。
第三档（4 - 6分）
能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读
第四档（2 - 4分）
只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读
第五档（1- 2分）
只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
评分标准：
（二）语言：
① 拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。
② 语法：同①。
③ 标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但 标点符号和大小写的扣分总和均不得超过一分。
（三）词数：以60词为例
① 词数不足30词者，得分最多不得超过4分；
② 词数不足40词者，得分最多不得超过6分；
③ 词数不足50词者，得分最多不得超过8分；
④ 词数在50-59词之间者，每少5个词扣0.5分；
⑤ 只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。
Title: our new school uniform
运用小组校服设计图，4人一组进行讨论，运用写作四部曲审--列--美--查，迅速完成以下任务：
(1) 各自在作文部上写出你认为最好的开头句和结束句；
(2) 组内讨论，简要列出关键词或句；写出正文初稿，修改完善，工整誊写在作文部上；
(3) 各组发言人交流发言。
Let's pratice
U8 T2 P96 ----- project
How much do you know the school uniforms
1. Why do you want to design your new school uniforms
2. What kind of school uniforms do you like ( formal/ casual /sports ...)
3. What kind of material do you want (cotton/ silk/ nylon ...)
4. What color do you like ( red, yellow, blue,white,green ...)
5. Do you want any accessories(配饰）？( tie,bowknot,school bedge ...)
School uniform
clothes shirt,suit,pants,（pleated）skirt百褶裙,
blouse,sweater, waistcoat（马甲）...
material cotton,silk,leather，wool nylon（尼龙），
color white，black，yellow， blue， red ...
style fashion, simple,casual，sports ...
accessory(配饰） tie,bownot(蝴蝶结）,silk scarf,leather shoes，
socks,stocking ,school badge(学校徽章）...
Useful phrases(有用的短语）：
I'd like to ..., favorite, be made of , so that，in my opinion,
feel uncomfortable, so...that..., fashionable,look formal(看起来正式）, be suitable for sb. to do sth., ...
Useful sentences(有用的句子）:
eg: 1. Different students have different opinions about school uniforms.
2. It's important for us to wear school uniforms
at school.
3. It's true that school uniforms can show good discipline.
范文:
Different students have different opinions about school uniforms.in my opinion, I don't like our school uniform,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I like my new school uniform,it'll make me look great and fashionable .
范文:
Different students have different opinions about school uniforms.in my opinion, I don't like our school uniforms because we look ugly in them. I like to look cool. I have to wear uniforms on weekdays. It makes me bored. If I can design my own school uniforms, I will choose a blue T-shirt, a pair of dark jeans, a pair of running shoes. Oh, the shoes must be white. It is my favorite color. Maybe I can have a sweater and a windbreaker in winter.I like my new school uniform,it'll make me look cool and fashionable .
范文:
I have some opinions about how to design our school uniforms. I think that boys should wear shirts and pants. The shirts should be white so that we could wear them with blue ties. Black pants are really suitable for us to wear. As for girls, I think they should wear blouses and skirts. The color of the blouses should be white. The blouses should be made of silk. The skirts should be pink or purple.
I think most of us would like to wear this kind of school uniforms.And we're proud of our school.
Let’s enjoy our own compositions!
Summary:书面表达写作技巧
审
列
美
查
Homework：
After class, write your own compositions
about ”My favorite school uniform”.