话题写作 电子邮件
命题探索
分析日照近几年中考真题可知，“电子邮件” 写作是中考出现频率非常高的一种题型。
2016年，要求给David回复电子邮件介绍如何学好汉语；
2017年，要求给Tom写一封电子邮件邀请他到你家寄宿；
2018年，要求给Mike写电子邮件并把遗落的背包寄回并发出邀请。
典例剖析
(2018 日照) 假如你是李华，上周末到青岛拜访你的朋友美国留学生Mike Harris, 将背包遗落在他的房间里，包内有学生证、i-pad和英语词典。请你给他写一封电子邮件说明情况，让他尽快将背包寄回，并邀请他到黄海市共度暑假。邮寄地址：黄海市红星中学9年级1班
要求：
1.根据内容，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数90左右。
例文赏析
Dear Mike，
I really enjoyed my stay with you in Qingdao last weekend.
However, I left my backpack in your room. There is an ID card, an English dictionary and an i-pad in it. Will you please send my backpack to me as soon as possible? Please send it to Class 1 Grade 9 Red Star Middle School of Huanghai City. Thank you very much. Summer vacation is coming. Would you like to come to Huanghai for your vacation? I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours
Li Hua
常用开头句：
1. Thank you for your last letter.
2. I’m pleased to hear that you are coming to China for a visit/your holiday.
3. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble learning Chinese.
5. Our class plans to have/hold a party. I’m writing to invite you to join us.
6. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
常用结束句：
1. Best wishes (to you/with everything)!
2. I’m looking forward to your reply/coming.
3. If you can come, I’m sure you will have a good time./we’ll be very happy.
4. I hope you will enjoy your visit here.
5. I hope everything will be better soon.
写作练兵
假如你是班长李华，你们班计划举办一场告别初中生活的晚会。请你代表班级用英文写一篇邮件，邀请你的外教David参加。内容包括：
时间
6月29日晚上7:00
地点
本班教室
活动
1.分享过去三年的美好回忆；
2. 谈论未来的的梦想；
3. 向老师表达谢意；
4. 师生合影
Dear David，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
课件17张PPT。电子邮件话题写作 分析日照近几年中考真题可知，“电子邮件” 写作是中考出现频率非常高的一种题型。 2016年，要求给David回复电子邮件介绍如何学好汉语；
2017年，要求给Tom写一封电子邮件邀请他到你家寄宿；
2018年，要求给Mike写电子邮件并把遗落的背包寄回并发出邀请。
命题探索 电子邮件是因特网时代人们进行书面交流的主要文体，电子邮件可以是文字、图像、声音等多种形式，它的格式与书面信件的格式一样，常有称呼、正文、结束语、姓名和日期等。
文体概述How to write an e-mail?(2018 日照) 假如你是李华，上周末到青岛拜访你的朋友美国留学生Mike Harris, 将背包遗落在他的房间里，包内有学生证、i-pad和英语词典。请你给他写一封电子邮件说明情况，让他尽快将背包寄回，并邀请他到黄海市共度暑假。
邮寄地址：黄海市红星中学9年级1班
要求：
1.根据内容，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数90左右。典例剖析人称：文体：时态：
第一人称电子邮件一般现在时
一般过去式审Dear Mike，
I really enjoyed my stay with you in Qingdao last weekend.
However , I left my backpack in your room. There is an ID card, an English dictionary and an i-pad in it. Will you please send my backpack to me as soon as possible? Please send it to Class 1 Grade 9 Red Star Middle School of Huanghai City. Thank you very much. Summer vacation is coming. Would you like to come to Huanghai for your vacation? I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua美 文赏析salutation (称呼)Beginning: purpose
(点题,介绍，概括性,2-3句)signature(签名)Ending: expectationBody: when, where, what, how
(主体部分, 层次分明,4-6句； 1-2段)salutation (称呼)signature(签名)beginningendingbody:
1-2段Beginning1. Thank you for your last email.
2. I’m pleased to hear that you are coming to China for a visit.
3. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble ---.
5.We’ll--. I’m writing to invite you to ---.
6. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
7. Thanks for your invitation to the party.Ending期盼、祝愿
1. Best wishes (to you/with everything)!
2. I’m looking forward to your reply/coming.
3. If you can come, I’m sure you will have a good time./we’ll be very happy.
4. I hope you will enjoy your visit here.
5. I hope everything will be better soon.
2018柳州改编
假如你是班长李华，你们班计划举办一场告别初中生活的晚会。请你代表班级用英文写一篇邮件，邀请你的外教David参加。内容包括：写作练兵人称：———文体：———时态：————要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 2. 词数90左右。First…then…next…at last(last but not least)hope/if…/look forward tohave a party
invite---towhenExpectation
（1-2）Purpose of invitation
(2-3)beginning body endingwherewhatat…on…in…列谋篇布局任务要求1. 连词成句，连 句成篇
2. 美化全文，注意连词的运用。
3. 自我检查 ,然后改错：
要点是否遗漏
单词拼写是否有误
句子时态结构是否正确
核实标点是否正确
字数是否符合要求
评价标准Dear David，
Our class plans to have a party to say goodbye to our middle school life. I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The party will take place at 7:00 pm. on June 29th in our classroom. During the party, first, we’ll share our sweet memories in the past three years with each other. Then, we’ll talk about our future dreams. After that, we’ll give thanks to our teachers. Last but not least, we are going to take photos with our teachers.
we are expecting your coming. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua表示自己很期待。
(1—2句)
我班计划举行一场告别初中晚会。邀请你参加。（ 2-3句）要点一 时间：6月29日晚上7点。要点三 活动：1,2,3,4要点二 地点：本班教室范文复述语法正确
拼写无误审清题意
构建框架连词成句
衔接自然抓住要点
列关键词添加词句
美化文章书写规范
避免潦草1.Go on correcting your writing and copy it carefully.
2. Thy to recite the e-mail with the given information.
3.Try to remember the useful sentences for the beginning and the ending.
HomeworkThank you!
Good luck!
