Unit 9
What does he look like?
Section B(3a-self check)
ENJOY THE SONG
What is the song about?
Lead-in
Jack is Bill's best friend. Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
My best friend is Jack.Let me tell you what he ________ like.First of all，he is very tall and ________.He has ________ brown hair and he doesn't wear ________．He usually wears jeans，a T?shirt and sports ________.I like him because he is really cool and fun，and he is good at soccer.
handsome
straight
glasses
shoes
looks glasses straight shoes handsome
looks
3a
Let's Do It
Hair
long
Other Features
glasses
Build
thin
heavy
1 Write more words in the box.
DESCRIBING PEOPLE
short
black
blonde
straight
curly
beautiful
Height
tall
cute
handsome
of medium height
short
Self check
Let's Do It
Appearance
Personality
Hobbies
thin lips,thick lips,big nose,eye,round face,long face,fat,thin heavy,slim,plump,tall,short,of medium height,ot midium build，long hair,short hair,curly hair,……
funny,able,active,friendly,careful,clever,cute,brave,honest,dishonest,outgoing,easy-going,forgetful,
happy,hard-working,kind,
kindhearted,strict ,selfless,
selfish，
like,love,enjoy,be fond of,be good at,be interested in……
用上面的动词
说出你喜欢的句子
friends
Writing
I don't really care if my friends are the same as or different. My favorite saying is,“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.”
My best friend Carol is really beautiful.She has big eyes, a straight nose and blond hair.She has brown eyes. She is really kind and funny.In fact,she's funnier than anyone I know.She likes to tell jokes.Sometimes she makes jokes in class and gets into trouble.And I still remeber I broke my arm last year but she made me laugh and feel better.I know she cares about me because she's always there to listen. After class,Carol and I like to go to the movies and we like to talk about our favorite actors,singers...
In a word, I think good friends should not only help each other but also share happiness and sadness together.
My best friend
Writing
Questions
What is the passage about?
The passage is about friends.
Please divide the whole passage into three parts.
How to introduce your friend?
Writing
My best friend
I don't really care if my friends are the same as or different. My favorite saying is,“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.”
My best friend Carol is really beautiful.She has big eyes, a straight nose and blond hair.She has brown eyes. She is really kind and funny.In fact,she's funnier than anyone I know.She likes to tell jokes.Sometimes she makes jokes in class and gets into trouble.And I still remeber I broke my arm last year but she made me laugh and feel better.I know she cares about me because she's always there to listen. After class,Carol and I like to go to the movies and we like to talk about our favorite actors,singers...
In a word, I think good friends should not only help each other but also share happiness and sadness together.
Writing
I don't really care if my friends are the same as or different. My favorite saying is,“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.”
In a word, I think good friends should not only help each other but also share happiness and sadness together.
首段点明交友观点
尾段总结提升
语篇分析
1st part: introduce who the friend is
Sentence 1
4th part: activities they do together
Sentence 8
Sentence 2-4
Sentence 5-7
2nd part: appearance
3rd part: personality
Writing
1. 框架结构
总-分-总，首段点明交友观点，尾段总结提升，
中间段层次清晰；
2. 学会句子间概括与解释的关系；
3. 过渡词句的运用；
4. 文采好句
来自阅读文章的写作领悟
Writing
找出文中句子间概括与解释的关系的句子
1. Carol is really beautiful.-----She has big eyes, a straight nose and blond hair.She has brown eyes.
2. She is really kind and funny.----She likes to tell jokes.Sometimes she makes jokes in class and gets into trouble.And I still remeber I broke my arm last year but she made me laugh and feel better.I know she cares about me because she's always there to listen.
Writing
积累经典句和谚语
1. My mother told me a good friend is like a mirror.
2. I think friends are like books-you don’t need a lot of
them as long as they're good.
3. It’s not necessary to be the same.
4. My best friend Larry is quite different from me.
5. However, Larry often helps to bring out the best in me.
Writing
行文连贯自助餐
1.表因果 so,for,because,therefore;
2.并列型 as well as,and,also;
3.比较型 as...as,than;
4.举例型 for example,such as,and so on;
5.归纳型 in a word,in the end,
at last,finally;
6.转折型 however,but,though,although;
Writing
请以 My best friend 为题写一篇文章，从朋友的外貌、性格、爱好等方面描写朋友，同时写出交友观点。
要求：
a. 文章结构清晰，语言流畅：
b. 书写美观、大方；
c. 词数要求：不少于80词
Writing
Who …
Looks hair ________ eyes ________
nose ________ face ________
mouth _______ height ______
Clothes or glasses …
What do you think of him / her? …
Why do you like him / her? …
Writing
步骤 构思 列纲
1 引入话题 My favorite person is. . .
2 外貌描写 He / She has. . .
He / She is. . . .
3 性格特征 He / She is kind.
4 喜爱理由 He / She helps. . .
思路构建
Writing
1. 主要内容 ？
2. 时态？人称?
3. 首段？尾段？
4. 第二段中，层次？
5. 2-3个好句式
Groupwork
作文分析
关于朋友
一般现在时、第三人称、第一人称
用你积累的经典句和谚语来完成首段和尾段
Writing
Friends
Appearance
Personality
Hobbies
hair, face……
funny……
sports，food……
Writing
本节课主要学习掌握了如何写描述人物的作文，做了Self Check部分的练习题，巩固了所学知识。
Summary
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