中考英语书面表达写作技巧专项复习(28张PPT)

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(共28张PPT)
初中英语书面表达
写作技巧指导
To be able to write an English compositon
The ways of composition writing.
Use the ways to write a composition.
Discuss about this picture
(2018河北 ) 请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示 (1)What are the man and the woman doing
(2)What should you do when you see people litter like this Why
要求:(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:throw, environment, civilized(文明的)
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is_______________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
认真审题,分析背景,找出文章要表达的中心。
Step1

英语书面表达写作技巧
定人称、定时态:介绍图示中两个人在做的事情,人称为_______,时态为___________;介绍自己看到此类情况的做法,人称为_______,时态为_________
定主题:_____________
环保、爱护环境
第三人称
第一人称
现在进行时
一般现在时/一般将来时
Read the tips carefully to think about the topic , including the background.
For example, in this passage:
用核心词汇或短语列出文章要点。

Step2
英语书面表达写作技巧
The man: throw away ,everywhere
The woman: stop, ask…to …, put…in…
I: when,doesn’t listen to, pick up, myself, protect the environment
Ending : take action ,
a more beautiful place
What are you asked to write about
How many aspects (方面)?List the key words and expressions
将列出的核心词汇或短语整理成句子,使结构完整,符合表达习惯。
Step3

英语书面表达写作技巧
The man is throwing away the rubbish everywhere
The woman is stopping him.
She asks him to put the rubbish in the dustbin.
She tells the man that the city is our home.
I see other people throw away rubbish everywhere, I will also do as the woman does.
He doesn’t listen to me, I will pick it up myself and put in in the dustbin.
I think the city is my home.
we should protect the environment.
Everyone takes action to protect it, the city will be a more beautiful place to live.
,
1.表示并列或递进: and, both…and; not only…but also,
neither…nor;
2.表示条件: if
3.表示顺序: first , next,then, finally;
4.表示因果: because, so;
5.表示选择: or, either…or;
6.表示解释: for example, such as;
7.表示转折: but, however
英语书面表达写作技巧
Step 4:

恰当运用关联词句,使得文章层次清晰,各个部分衔接自然。
Use connectives to join sentences . Turn the sentences into a passage

修改词句,美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变句式或添加语句,展示自己的语言功底。
写作第六步:
英语书面表达写作技巧
检查人称、时态、单词拼写和大小写使用正确
写作第七步:

将草稿认真抄写到答题纸上,一定注意书写的注意事项。 Pay attention to your handwriting!
写作第五步:

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3
书写注意事项
3、一旦写错,规范修改——用一条斜线划掉即可。 eg:
He can speker English very well.
He can speker speak English very well.
1、规范书写,字母饱满圆润,格式正确。 作文答题纸一般为单线,我们应将单线作为“四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写,不要把它作为第四线,让字母吊在线上。
2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写——给人一种凌乱的感觉。
It’s your turn now!
某英文网站正在开展以 “建设绿色校园”为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,你们学校上周也进行了保护校园环境的实践活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对保护环境的认识,活动中你做了什么,以及你的感受
要点:(1)What do you think of protecting the environment
(2)What did you do in the activity
(3)How did you feel
要求:(1)短文必须包含所有提示内容,可作适当发挥。
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
At my school , we held a practical activity last week_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
 
  
思路点拨
1. 人称:________________________________
2.时态:________________________________
3.写作导图:
A practical activity of protecting the environment
Your opinions on this activity:__________________
The things you did in this activity:_______________
Your feelings at that time:____________________________________
整(成句):
审:
列:
美 (定稿):
连 (成篇) :
(write as many words and expressionsas possible)
查 (纠错):
誊写:
Summary——书面表达写作技巧





草稿纸
答题纸
抄 pay attention to your handwriting!

要求:1.短文必须包含所有提示内容,可作适当发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
3.词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
每年6月8号为“世界海洋日”(World Oceans Day),今年世界海洋日的主题是“清洁我们的海洋(Cleaning Our Oceans)”。假如你是李华,请你以“Say No To Plastics”为题,根据以下提示和要求,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的看法和建议。
提示:1. Why should we say no to plastics
2. What should we do in our daily life
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
English Writing Skills:
1. Read the tips carefully,including the background.
2. What are you asked to write about How many aspects (方面)?
3. Use connectives to join words, phrases and sentences.
4. Pay attention to your handwriting.
One possible version:
At my school, we held a practical activity last month. It's about protecting the environment. I think this activity is very necessary. It's important for everyone to take actions to protect our environment. After all, we have only one earth.
During the activity, we not only watered the trees and flowers around our school, but also collected the waste on the playground. What's more, we gave a speech to call on all people to realize the importance of protecting the environment. We encouraged students to do some small things to make a difference to our environment. It took us three hours to finish it.
We were very tired but happy. The school seemed more beautiful with our efforts. I love my school.
红色为“连”
蓝色为“美”
习作互改评价表
批改人姓名_____ 被改人姓名________
作文标题________ 批改日期___________
评价项目 得分(在相应处打ˇ)
语言 单词拼写和大小写使用正确 5 4 3 2 1
用词恰当,避免重复用词 5 4 3 2 1
主谓一致,时态、语态使用得当 5 4 3 2 1
字迹工整,标点规范 5 4 3 2 1
句法 固定搭配使用准确 10 8 6 4 2
句子结构完整,无残缺句 10 8 6 4 2
运用多种句式表达 10 8 6 4 2
总分:______ (语言________句法______)
文章的亮点:
待改进的地方:
4分
6
中考英语作文类 型
提示作文
表格提示 (Charts)
图文提示 (Pictures)
汉语提示 (Chinese)
英语提示 (English)
Ways of beginning:
1.At present,protecting the environment is the most
important.
2.It is everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
1.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
2.In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.
3.In my point of view, I’ll try my best to make our city
cleaner and more beautiful.
Ways of ending:
写作第四步

英语书面表达写作技巧
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing away the rubbish everywhere. the woman is stop him. She asks him to put the rubbish in the dustbin .She ( )tells the man that the city is our home.
( ) I see other people throw away rubbish everywhere, I will also do ( )the woman does. ( ) he doesn’t listen me, I will pick it up myself and put it in the dustbin. ( ) I think the city is my home. We should protect the environment.
( )everyone takes action to protect it, the city will be a more beautiful place to live in.
also
When
If
as
Because
If
写作第五步

英语书面表达写作技巧
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing away the rubbish everywhere. The woman is stopping him. She asks him to put the rubbish in the dustbin .She also tells the man that the city is our home.
When I see other people throw away rubbish everywhere, I will also do as the woman does. If he doesn’t listen to me, I will pick it up myself and put in the dustbin. Because I think the city is my home. We should protect the environment.
If everyone takes action to protect it, the city will be a more beautiful place to live in.

英语书面表达写作技巧
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing away the rubbish everywhere. The woman is stopping him. She not only asks him to put the rubbish in the dustbin , but also tells him that the city is our home.
When I see other people throw away rubbish everywhere, I will also do as the woman does. If he doesn’t listen to me, I will pick it up myself and put in the dustbin. Because I regard the city as my home. It is our duty to protect the environment.
In my opinion, if everyone takes action to protect it, the city will be a more beautiful place to live in.
写作第六步

英语书面表达写作技巧
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing away the rubbish everywhere. The woman is stopping him. She asks him to put the rubbish in the dustbin .She also tells the man that the city is our home.
When I see other people throw away rubbish everywhere, I will also do as the woman does. If he doesn’t listen to me, I will pick it up myself and put in the dustbin. Because I think the city is my home. We should protect the environment.
If everyone takes action to protect it, the city will be a more beautiful place to live in.
写作第四步

英语书面表达写作技巧
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing away the rubbish everywhere. the woman is stop him. She asks him to put the rubbish in the dustbin .She ( )tells the man that the city is our home.
( ) I see other people throw away rubbish everywhere, I will also do ( )the woman does. ( ) he doesn’t listen __me, I will pick it up myself and put it in the dustbin. ( ) I think the city is my home. We should protect the environment.
( )everyone takes action to protect it, the city will be a more beautiful place to live in.
also
When
If
as
Because
If