人教版英语必修5Unit2 The United Kingdom写作——投诉信 课件 （共29张PPT）
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| 名称 | 人教版英语必修5Unit2 The United Kingdom写作——投诉信 课件 （共29张PPT） |  | |
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| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2019-05-23 17:19:48 | ||
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(共29张PPT)
Lead-in
Watch the video.
What is the lady doing in a restaurant
situation:
How to make a complaint:
School library
Pre-writing
Reading Task
A Letter to the Headmaster about the Library Service on Campus
Dear Madam,
My name is Li Ming. I am a senior student in our school. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the Library service on the campus.
In the first place, as a senior student, I find that some of the books in the library are outdated. Second, the light in the reading room is not bright, which is harmful to our eyes. Third, there is no air-conditioning and we are sweating heavily while reading.
All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope my problems receive more attention. I am looking forward to an early reply. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Head
(Introduction)
Body
(supporting ideas)
Tail
(Conclusion)
Reading Task
A Letter to the Headmaster about the Library Service on Campus
Dear Madam,
My name is Li Ming. I am a senior student in our school. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the Library service on the campus.
In the first place, as a senior student, I find that some of the books in the library are outdated. Second, the light in the reading room is not bright, which is harmful to our eyes. Third, there is no air-conditioning and we are sweating heavily while reading.
All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope my problems receive more attention. I am looking forward to an early reply. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
自我介绍
投诉事由
投诉具体问题
对抱怨或投诉的总结句
Reading Task
A Letter to the Headmaster about the Library Service on Campus
Dear Madam,
My name is Li Ming. I am a senior student in our school. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the Library service on the campus.
In the first place, as a senior student, I find that some of the books in the library are outdated. Second, the light in the reading room is not bright, which is harmful to our eyes. Third, there is no air-conditioning and we are sweating heavily while reading.
All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope my problems receive more attention. I am looking forward to an early reply. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
题材格式Form：
主体时态Tense：
中心人称person
一般现在时或过去时
Beauty
be attractive, completed in a limited time!
你是一名乘客，名叫张萍雨，对这次航班不满意，理由有如下三个：
（1）上周航空公司弄丢了你的一个重要的包，内有重要物品；
（2）飞机迟到一个半小时；
（3）飞机上的食物很差；
请你就此事给航空公司写一封投诉信。100词左右。
While-writing
Please learn to
Your composition
when you finish it from now.
While-writing
After-writing
书面表达评价表
项目 自评 他评
1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划
2.句子开头注意大小写了吗
3.有没有注意标点符号
4.将文章分段了吗 分成了几段
5.有单词拼写错误吗 几个
6.有时态错误吗 误用了哪种时态
7.注意主谓一致了吗
8.有没有语态的错误
9.有没有使用关联词 使用得当吗
10.有没有词性的错误 哪一种
11.简单句表达正确吗
12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构
13.表达方式是否多样化 注意长短句搭配了吗
14.有没有用好词好句 用了哪些
Model essay
Dear Manager,
My name is Li Hua. I am a passenger of your
airline. I am writing this letter to complain about your bad service. I have to say that I’m very unhappy about your airline.
First of all, your airline lost one of my bags in which there is secret paper. Second, my plane was one and a half hours late. As a result, I was late for an important meeting. Third, The food on the plane was terrible.
All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope my problems receive more attention. I am looking forward to an early reply. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
If you don’t feel satisfied with your life, please……
Further-thinking
...Relax...
… Play games...
...Enjoy the fields...
…Get some sun…
...Don’t unload your anger on others...
…Don’t be afraid of others just because they are bigger than you. The real size could be measured in the wisdom.
keep smiling
In a word, you should develop a sense of humor and have a positive attitude towards life.
And finally look in the mirror and
think “I’m beautiful”
Now, enjoy your day!!!
假如你是李雷，请你就本校食堂（canteen）
的状况，给校长(principal)写一封抱怨信, 内容
要求如下：
1.饭菜贵质量差
2.服务不好
3.环境嘈杂拥挤
巩固练习:
Lead-in
Watch the video.
What is the lady doing in a restaurant
situation:
How to make a complaint:
School library
Pre-writing
Reading Task
A Letter to the Headmaster about the Library Service on Campus
Dear Madam,
My name is Li Ming. I am a senior student in our school. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the Library service on the campus.
In the first place, as a senior student, I find that some of the books in the library are outdated. Second, the light in the reading room is not bright, which is harmful to our eyes. Third, there is no air-conditioning and we are sweating heavily while reading.
All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope my problems receive more attention. I am looking forward to an early reply. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Head
(Introduction)
Body
(supporting ideas)
Tail
(Conclusion)
Reading Task
A Letter to the Headmaster about the Library Service on Campus
Dear Madam,
My name is Li Ming. I am a senior student in our school. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the Library service on the campus.
In the first place, as a senior student, I find that some of the books in the library are outdated. Second, the light in the reading room is not bright, which is harmful to our eyes. Third, there is no air-conditioning and we are sweating heavily while reading.
All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope my problems receive more attention. I am looking forward to an early reply. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
自我介绍
投诉事由
投诉具体问题
对抱怨或投诉的总结句
Reading Task
A Letter to the Headmaster about the Library Service on Campus
Dear Madam,
My name is Li Ming. I am a senior student in our school. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the Library service on the campus.
In the first place, as a senior student, I find that some of the books in the library are outdated. Second, the light in the reading room is not bright, which is harmful to our eyes. Third, there is no air-conditioning and we are sweating heavily while reading.
All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope my problems receive more attention. I am looking forward to an early reply. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
题材格式Form：
主体时态Tense：
中心人称person
一般现在时或过去时
Beauty
be attractive, completed in a limited time!
你是一名乘客，名叫张萍雨，对这次航班不满意，理由有如下三个：
（1）上周航空公司弄丢了你的一个重要的包，内有重要物品；
（2）飞机迟到一个半小时；
（3）飞机上的食物很差；
请你就此事给航空公司写一封投诉信。100词左右。
While-writing
Please learn to
Your composition
when you finish it from now.
While-writing
After-writing
书面表达评价表
项目 自评 他评
1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划
2.句子开头注意大小写了吗
3.有没有注意标点符号
4.将文章分段了吗 分成了几段
5.有单词拼写错误吗 几个
6.有时态错误吗 误用了哪种时态
7.注意主谓一致了吗
8.有没有语态的错误
9.有没有使用关联词 使用得当吗
10.有没有词性的错误 哪一种
11.简单句表达正确吗
12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构
13.表达方式是否多样化 注意长短句搭配了吗
14.有没有用好词好句 用了哪些
Model essay
Dear Manager,
My name is Li Hua. I am a passenger of your
airline. I am writing this letter to complain about your bad service. I have to say that I’m very unhappy about your airline.
First of all, your airline lost one of my bags in which there is secret paper. Second, my plane was one and a half hours late. As a result, I was late for an important meeting. Third, The food on the plane was terrible.
All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope my problems receive more attention. I am looking forward to an early reply. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
If you don’t feel satisfied with your life, please……
Further-thinking
...Relax...
… Play games...
...Enjoy the fields...
…Get some sun…
...Don’t unload your anger on others...
…Don’t be afraid of others just because they are bigger than you. The real size could be measured in the wisdom.
keep smiling
In a word, you should develop a sense of humor and have a positive attitude towards life.
And finally look in the mirror and
think “I’m beautiful”
Now, enjoy your day!!!
假如你是李雷，请你就本校食堂（canteen）
的状况，给校长(principal)写一封抱怨信, 内容
要求如下：
1.饭菜贵质量差
2.服务不好
3.环境嘈杂拥挤
巩固练习: