定语从句在高考英语写作中的应用课件（共34张）
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The Attributive clause in Writing
定语从句在高考英语写作中的应用
God helps those who help themselves.
All that glitters is not gold.
He who laughs last laughs best.
Those who live in glass houses should not throw stones.
自助者天助。
闪闪发光者，未必皆黄金。
谁笑在最后, 谁笑得最好。
家居玻璃房，切忌乱扔石。
（自己有弱点，勿揭他人短。）
环节 一：我来描述你来猜 ！！！
1. I’ll never forget the days _____________ we worked together.
2. I’ll never forget the days ______ we
spent together.
3. I went to the place ______________ I worked ten years ago.
4. I went to the place _______ I visited ten years ago.
when /in which
which
where/ in which
Revision
及物动词
及物动词
which
5. This is the reason _____________ he was late.
6. This is the reason __________ he gave.
why/ for which
that/which
及物动词
第五档
（ 21--25 ） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
-覆盖所有内容要点。
-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
-语法结构或词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强语言运用能力。
-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构，
使全文结构紧凑。
第四档
(16--20) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
-虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
-应用的语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
-应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
-达到了预期的写作目的。
定语从句在
写作中的作用
1.增加词数
连接两个包含同一事物的句子， 避免单词的重复和句式单一。
3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容。
环节二：团结力量大
The
functions
To add
more words
To avoid
simple
structures
To enrich
language
如何写出
定语从句
1.合
2.扩
1.两个简单句中出现同一事物
2.其中一句改写成由关代或关副引导的句子，修饰另一句中相同事物
1.题干中只有一个孤立的简单句
2.找到简单句中心词，用定语从句
将其丰富
1.我们班是一个大家庭。
2.这个大家庭包括22个男生和18个女生。
我们班是一个包括22个男生和18个女生的大家庭。
1.合
定语从句在写作中的应用
1.我们班是一个大家庭。
2.这个大家庭包括22个男生和18个女生。
1. Our class is a big family .
2.The family consists of 22 boys and 18 girls.
先行词
关系代词
1.Our class is a big family which/that consists of 22 boys and 18 girls.
2.Our class is a big family ,which consists of 22 boys and 18 girls.
先行词
关系代词
1.这是一部精彩的电影。
2.这部电影深深的吸引了我们。
这是一部深深吸引了我们的精彩电影。
1.这是一部精彩的电影。
2.这部电影深深的吸引了我们。
1.It is a wonderful film.
2.The film attracts us deeply.
It is a wonderful film that/which attracts us deeply.
It is a wonderful film,which attracts us deeply.
The film,which is wonderful,attracts us deeply.
1.中国女排赢得了奥运冠军。
2.这让我们为之高兴。
1.中国女排赢得了奥运冠军.
2.这让我们为之高兴。
1.Chinese women’s volleyball team has got the
championship.
2.It made us delighted.
Chinese women’s volleyball team has got the
championship ,which made us delighted.
1.Learning is one’s own business, and it can not rely on others.
Learning is one’s own business,
which can not rely on others.
用定语从句改写句子
2. A successful learner is an independent one, and he has a strong will.
A successful learner is an independent one, who has a strong will ..
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文
1.家庭
2.工作
3.业余生活
学生习作探讨：尝试应用定语从句(中间段落部分内容截取）
1. I will also have a job ,and I will enjoy my job very much .
2. In my free time, I will go traveling,and it will give me much pleasure.
3. I will have a family. My family will be warm.
1.I will also have a job and I will enjoy my job very much .
I will also have a job which /that I enjoy very much.
2.In my free time, I will go traveling,and it will give me much pleasure.
In my free time, I will go traveling,which will give me much pleasure.
3.I will have a family. My family will be warm.
I will have a family, which will be warm.
1.Sb. do/does/did sth, which...(指代整个前文内容）
我们取得了很大的进 步，这......
扩
1.Sb. do/does/did sth, which...(指代整个前文内容）
我们取得了很大的进 步，这......
We made great progress,
which made our teacher/parents very happy.
which made us excited.
which was inspiring.
北京是一座美丽的城市。(famous for, famous as)
Beijing is a very beautiful city .
2. Sth.,which is/was/ ..., is /was...
Sth. which has……,is
（指代前面的先行词sth.）
北京是一座美丽的城市。(famous as/ famous for )
Beijing is a very beautiful city .
Beijing,which is the capital of China, is a very beautiful city.
Beijing, which is famous for its scenery, is very beautiful.
春节是中国的传统节日. The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival.
节日如何庆祝
The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival,
which is celebrated by the Chinese.
which is the most important festival in China.
at which/when people eat dumplings,fish and meat and may give children lucky money in red paper.
孙毓阳是一个热心的人。
孙毓阳是一个热心的人。
Sun Yuyang is a warm-hearted person.
具体化
Sun Yuyang is a warm-hearted person，
who is always willing to help those in need.
She is our English teacher (who/whom/whose ……)
1.I will support a family which is warm and active.(郭明鑫）
2.I will have a job which I really love.(赵业成）
3.I can take photos for my kid every year,which is a happy thing.(赵铭）
4.I will have a wife that is gentle and perfect.(时煜博）
5.Maybe I will meet a girl who is elegant and beautiful.侯贺文
6.I will be a successful man ,who has a wonderful job.宁酉淦
7.I will have a satisfying job,which I am interested in.张舒欣
8.I will get married with a handsome boy,who can let me depend on.管营
环节三：赏析与提升
分析典型错误，总结定语从句注意事项
1. I will have the one who love me most.
2. I can cure many people which are injured.
3.There are some companies that they want to hire me.
4.I can go to the place which I can enjoy myself.
loves
who
where
总结定语从句注意事项：主谓一致，关代和关副的
正确选择， 避免重复
描述你的假期打算 （包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）
（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）
I would like to do a part- time job,
which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.
Traveling is one of my choices,
which will enrich my life and broaden my horizons.
I would like to do voluntary work,
which will make a great contribution to the society.
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文
1.家庭
2.工作
3.业余生活
（用定语从句增添这几方面的具体描述）
I will have my own family,______________________
I will enjoy my work,__________________________
In my free time ,traveling (...)will be my choice,
____________________________________________
请针对主段落对自己的文章进行修改（要求定语从句1-2处定语从句）
(从家庭；工作；业余生活三方面描述十年后的我）要求定语从句1-2处定语从句
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different.
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
Homework
Review the rules of the attributive
clause and finish relevant exercises.
Thank you~~~
The Attributive clause in Writing
定语从句在高考英语写作中的应用
God helps those who help themselves.
All that glitters is not gold.
He who laughs last laughs best.
Those who live in glass houses should not throw stones.
自助者天助。
闪闪发光者，未必皆黄金。
谁笑在最后, 谁笑得最好。
家居玻璃房，切忌乱扔石。
（自己有弱点，勿揭他人短。）
环节 一：我来描述你来猜 ！！！
1. I’ll never forget the days _____________ we worked together.
2. I’ll never forget the days ______ we
spent together.
3. I went to the place ______________ I worked ten years ago.
4. I went to the place _______ I visited ten years ago.
when /in which
which
where/ in which
Revision
及物动词
及物动词
which
5. This is the reason _____________ he was late.
6. This is the reason __________ he gave.
why/ for which
that/which
及物动词
第五档
（ 21--25 ） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
-覆盖所有内容要点。
-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
-语法结构或词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强语言运用能力。
-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构，
使全文结构紧凑。
第四档
(16--20) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
-虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
-应用的语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
-应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
-达到了预期的写作目的。
定语从句在
写作中的作用
1.增加词数
连接两个包含同一事物的句子， 避免单词的重复和句式单一。
3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容。
环节二：团结力量大
The
functions
To add
more words
To avoid
simple
structures
To enrich
language
如何写出
定语从句
1.合
2.扩
1.两个简单句中出现同一事物
2.其中一句改写成由关代或关副引导的句子，修饰另一句中相同事物
1.题干中只有一个孤立的简单句
2.找到简单句中心词，用定语从句
将其丰富
1.我们班是一个大家庭。
2.这个大家庭包括22个男生和18个女生。
我们班是一个包括22个男生和18个女生的大家庭。
1.合
定语从句在写作中的应用
1.我们班是一个大家庭。
2.这个大家庭包括22个男生和18个女生。
1. Our class is a big family .
2.The family consists of 22 boys and 18 girls.
先行词
关系代词
1.Our class is a big family which/that consists of 22 boys and 18 girls.
2.Our class is a big family ,which consists of 22 boys and 18 girls.
先行词
关系代词
1.这是一部精彩的电影。
2.这部电影深深的吸引了我们。
这是一部深深吸引了我们的精彩电影。
1.这是一部精彩的电影。
2.这部电影深深的吸引了我们。
1.It is a wonderful film.
2.The film attracts us deeply.
It is a wonderful film that/which attracts us deeply.
It is a wonderful film,which attracts us deeply.
The film,which is wonderful,attracts us deeply.
1.中国女排赢得了奥运冠军。
2.这让我们为之高兴。
1.中国女排赢得了奥运冠军.
2.这让我们为之高兴。
1.Chinese women’s volleyball team has got the
championship.
2.It made us delighted.
Chinese women’s volleyball team has got the
championship ,which made us delighted.
1.Learning is one’s own business, and it can not rely on others.
Learning is one’s own business,
which can not rely on others.
用定语从句改写句子
2. A successful learner is an independent one, and he has a strong will.
A successful learner is an independent one, who has a strong will ..
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文
1.家庭
2.工作
3.业余生活
学生习作探讨：尝试应用定语从句(中间段落部分内容截取）
1. I will also have a job ,and I will enjoy my job very much .
2. In my free time, I will go traveling,and it will give me much pleasure.
3. I will have a family. My family will be warm.
1.I will also have a job and I will enjoy my job very much .
I will also have a job which /that I enjoy very much.
2.In my free time, I will go traveling,and it will give me much pleasure.
In my free time, I will go traveling,which will give me much pleasure.
3.I will have a family. My family will be warm.
I will have a family, which will be warm.
1.Sb. do/does/did sth, which...(指代整个前文内容）
我们取得了很大的进 步，这......
扩
1.Sb. do/does/did sth, which...(指代整个前文内容）
我们取得了很大的进 步，这......
We made great progress,
which made our teacher/parents very happy.
which made us excited.
which was inspiring.
北京是一座美丽的城市。(famous for, famous as)
Beijing is a very beautiful city .
2. Sth.,which is/was/ ..., is /was...
Sth. which has……,is
（指代前面的先行词sth.）
北京是一座美丽的城市。(famous as/ famous for )
Beijing is a very beautiful city .
Beijing,which is the capital of China, is a very beautiful city.
Beijing, which is famous for its scenery, is very beautiful.
春节是中国的传统节日. The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival.
节日如何庆祝
The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival,
which is celebrated by the Chinese.
which is the most important festival in China.
at which/when people eat dumplings,fish and meat and may give children lucky money in red paper.
孙毓阳是一个热心的人。
孙毓阳是一个热心的人。
Sun Yuyang is a warm-hearted person.
具体化
Sun Yuyang is a warm-hearted person，
who is always willing to help those in need.
She is our English teacher (who/whom/whose ……)
1.I will support a family which is warm and active.(郭明鑫）
2.I will have a job which I really love.(赵业成）
3.I can take photos for my kid every year,which is a happy thing.(赵铭）
4.I will have a wife that is gentle and perfect.(时煜博）
5.Maybe I will meet a girl who is elegant and beautiful.侯贺文
6.I will be a successful man ,who has a wonderful job.宁酉淦
7.I will have a satisfying job,which I am interested in.张舒欣
8.I will get married with a handsome boy,who can let me depend on.管营
环节三：赏析与提升
分析典型错误，总结定语从句注意事项
1. I will have the one who love me most.
2. I can cure many people which are injured.
3.There are some companies that they want to hire me.
4.I can go to the place which I can enjoy myself.
loves
who
where
总结定语从句注意事项：主谓一致，关代和关副的
正确选择， 避免重复
描述你的假期打算 （包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）
（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）
I would like to do a part- time job,
which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.
Traveling is one of my choices,
which will enrich my life and broaden my horizons.
I would like to do voluntary work,
which will make a great contribution to the society.
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文
1.家庭
2.工作
3.业余生活
（用定语从句增添这几方面的具体描述）
I will have my own family,______________________
I will enjoy my work,__________________________
In my free time ,traveling (...)will be my choice,
____________________________________________
请针对主段落对自己的文章进行修改（要求定语从句1-2处定语从句）
(从家庭；工作；业余生活三方面描述十年后的我）要求定语从句1-2处定语从句
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different.
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
Homework
Review the rules of the attributive
clause and finish relevant exercises.
Thank you~~~