2019中考英语作文复习 课件
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Impove Your Writing
2019年英语中考作文复习
Enjoy some wonderful compositions!
中考写作评分标准
Level 3
Level 4
Level 5
Level 1
Level 2
一档文17-20分:写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅
有句式变化，有复杂结构（至少2-3个）,基 本无语
法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结
构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。
二档文13-16分:基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语
言流畅，有少量语法错误（3-4个错误）。
三档文9-12分:写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺，
有一些语法和拼写错误，基本不影响意思表达。
四档文5-8分:写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不太
通顺，语法结构单调，错误较多，只有少数句子可
读，影响理解。
五档文0-4分:言不达意，不知所云，只有2-3个短语可读。
How to get higher marks in writing?
1.To cover all the______________.
2.To ________ sentences well.
3.To combine(结合) __________ well.
4.To _______ the composition carefully.
5.To ________ neatly(整洁地).
一档文17-20分：
写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构（至少2-3个），基本无语法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。
main points
write
sentences
check
write
Task1.To cover all the main points
审题
体裁
人称
时态
要点
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
…
体裁
人称
时态
分段
一般现在时
说明文
假如你是王磊，你是第一中学的学生。请你围绕“假设节约型社会（a conservation-oriented society),从我做起”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全国的学生写一份倡议书。注意内容可适当发挥。词数90左右。
要点提示（1）节约用水，……（至少举两例）；
（2）节约用电，……（至少举两例）；
（3）节约纸张，重复使用旧课本等；
（4）其它节约的行为或者宣传节约的想法（举一到两例）；
Dear students,
Our government is aiming to build “a conservation-oriented society ”, I think it is every citizen’s duty to achieve this goal.
As middle school students, what should we do?
Dear students , let’s start right now to make our society more beautiful!
Wang Lei
From No. 1 Middle School.
第一人称
要点提示（1）节约用水，……（至少举两例）；
（2）节约用电，……（至少举两例）；
（3）节约纸张，重复使用旧课本等；
（4）其它节约的行为或者宣传节约的想法（举一到两例）；
Save water（2点）
Para 1
Save power （2点）
Para 2
Save paper（2点）
Para 3
Other action or thoughts
（1到2点）
Para 4
分段,列要点
?
?
?
?
?
?
?
?
Well-paragraphed
段落分明的
Task2. To write sentences well
优化句子结构
1. We can use old textbooks
We can use the textbooks which are used by others.
2. We can’t use plastic bags when shopping , we can take our bags.
We can take our own bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags.
一档文17-20分：有句式变化，有复 杂结构（至少2-3个）
Have a try: Improve these sentences
1.They speak English in class，they also speak English at home. (使用并列连词)
2. She is a tall woman. She wears thick glasses.
(使用with复合结构)
3. The person is my English teacher.
I never forget him. (使用定语从句)
4. I found learning English is hard.
(使用it做形式宾语或形式主语句型 )
They speak English not only in class but also at home.
She is a tall woman with thick glasses.
I found it hard to learn English.
The person who I never forget is my English teacher.
Task3. To combine(结合) sentences well
过渡词
Useful expressions (transitions过渡 between ideas):
First of all, Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second,
… next …, and then,
finally/in the end/ at last
What’s more, especially, not only …but also
at the same time, and, also, too, again,
and then, Either, moreover
On one hand… On the other hand…,Some…, while others…
however, but, though
/although
because;
since; as;
so; as a result
As far as I know ,
In my opinion,
to tell the truth,
I suggest/think that…
1.表文章结构顺序： 4.陈述正反方的观点：
2.表示补充、增加信息的： 5.表示原因和结果的：
3.表转折对比关系的： 6.表达自己观点：
A
B
C
D
F
B
E
F
D
C
E
A
Task4. To check the composition(作文) carefully
检查
Group work
check the composition and try to make it better.
We should save water. Water is very important for us in our daily life. We can turn off the tap when brushing our teeth. We should save power. Don’t forget turn off the lights when we leave a room. When you don’t use compaters , you should turn them off. We also need to save paper. We can reuse the textbooks. We can use both sides of the paper. I think it’s good. I think we should save food. Because there are many people in the world don’t have enough food to eat. so we shouldn’t waste food.
We
We
computers
少一点
I think it’s good for us to save food.
to
to
Task5. To write neatly
书写
Try your best to write a wonderful composition.
危险无处不在，我们学生应当处处注意安全，远离危险。请你根据下面表格所提供的信息。写一篇“Always be careful ”英语短文。
要求： ( 1 ）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
( 2 ）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
( 3 ）词数：100词左右
( 4 ）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Always be careful
As a middle school students, we should try to stay away from danger as the problem of safety is becoming more and more serious.
If all these are kept in mind , you are sure to enjoy a much safer life.
在家 1.看完电视后，及时关机。
2.独自在家时，不要让陌生人进屋。
……
在学校 1.不要在教室里互相追逐 。
2.做体育运动时，注意保护自己。
……
在路上 1. 遵守交通规则。
……
Discussion:
审题 ：体裁
人称
时态
分段 ： 段，共 点
第一人称
说明文
一般现在时
3
8
Rewrite your compositions.
祝同学们在中考中取得理想的成绩！
谢谢
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2019年英语中考作文复习
Enjoy some wonderful compositions!
中考写作评分标准
Level 3
Level 4
Level 5
Level 1
Level 2
一档文17-20分:写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅
有句式变化，有复杂结构（至少2-3个）,基 本无语
法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结
构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。
二档文13-16分:基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语
言流畅，有少量语法错误（3-4个错误）。
三档文9-12分:写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺，
有一些语法和拼写错误，基本不影响意思表达。
四档文5-8分:写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不太
通顺，语法结构单调，错误较多，只有少数句子可
读，影响理解。
五档文0-4分:言不达意，不知所云，只有2-3个短语可读。
How to get higher marks in writing?
1.To cover all the______________.
2.To ________ sentences well.
3.To combine(结合) __________ well.
4.To _______ the composition carefully.
5.To ________ neatly(整洁地).
一档文17-20分：
写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构（至少2-3个），基本无语法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。
main points
write
sentences
check
write
Task1.To cover all the main points
审题
体裁
人称
时态
要点
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
…
体裁
人称
时态
分段
一般现在时
说明文
假如你是王磊，你是第一中学的学生。请你围绕“假设节约型社会（a conservation-oriented society),从我做起”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全国的学生写一份倡议书。注意内容可适当发挥。词数90左右。
要点提示（1）节约用水，……（至少举两例）；
（2）节约用电，……（至少举两例）；
（3）节约纸张，重复使用旧课本等；
（4）其它节约的行为或者宣传节约的想法（举一到两例）；
Dear students,
Our government is aiming to build “a conservation-oriented society ”, I think it is every citizen’s duty to achieve this goal.
As middle school students, what should we do?
Dear students , let’s start right now to make our society more beautiful!
Wang Lei
From No. 1 Middle School.
第一人称
要点提示（1）节约用水，……（至少举两例）；
（2）节约用电，……（至少举两例）；
（3）节约纸张，重复使用旧课本等；
（4）其它节约的行为或者宣传节约的想法（举一到两例）；
Save water（2点）
Para 1
Save power （2点）
Para 2
Save paper（2点）
Para 3
Other action or thoughts
（1到2点）
Para 4
分段,列要点
?
?
?
?
?
?
?
?
Well-paragraphed
段落分明的
Task2. To write sentences well
优化句子结构
1. We can use old textbooks
We can use the textbooks which are used by others.
2. We can’t use plastic bags when shopping , we can take our bags.
We can take our own bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags.
一档文17-20分：有句式变化，有复 杂结构（至少2-3个）
Have a try: Improve these sentences
1.They speak English in class，they also speak English at home. (使用并列连词)
2. She is a tall woman. She wears thick glasses.
(使用with复合结构)
3. The person is my English teacher.
I never forget him. (使用定语从句)
4. I found learning English is hard.
(使用it做形式宾语或形式主语句型 )
They speak English not only in class but also at home.
She is a tall woman with thick glasses.
I found it hard to learn English.
The person who I never forget is my English teacher.
Task3. To combine(结合) sentences well
过渡词
Useful expressions (transitions过渡 between ideas):
First of all, Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second,
… next …, and then,
finally/in the end/ at last
What’s more, especially, not only …but also
at the same time, and, also, too, again,
and then, Either, moreover
On one hand… On the other hand…,Some…, while others…
however, but, though
/although
because;
since; as;
so; as a result
As far as I know ,
In my opinion,
to tell the truth,
I suggest/think that…
1.表文章结构顺序： 4.陈述正反方的观点：
2.表示补充、增加信息的： 5.表示原因和结果的：
3.表转折对比关系的： 6.表达自己观点：
A
B
C
D
F
B
E
F
D
C
E
A
Task4. To check the composition(作文) carefully
检查
Group work
check the composition and try to make it better.
We should save water. Water is very important for us in our daily life. We can turn off the tap when brushing our teeth. We should save power. Don’t forget turn off the lights when we leave a room. When you don’t use compaters , you should turn them off. We also need to save paper. We can reuse the textbooks. We can use both sides of the paper. I think it’s good. I think we should save food. Because there are many people in the world don’t have enough food to eat. so we shouldn’t waste food.
We
We
computers
少一点
I think it’s good for us to save food.
to
to
Task5. To write neatly
书写
Try your best to write a wonderful composition.
危险无处不在，我们学生应当处处注意安全，远离危险。请你根据下面表格所提供的信息。写一篇“Always be careful ”英语短文。
要求： ( 1 ）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
( 2 ）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
( 3 ）词数：100词左右
( 4 ）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Always be careful
As a middle school students, we should try to stay away from danger as the problem of safety is becoming more and more serious.
If all these are kept in mind , you are sure to enjoy a much safer life.
在家 1.看完电视后，及时关机。
2.独自在家时，不要让陌生人进屋。
……
在学校 1.不要在教室里互相追逐 。
2.做体育运动时，注意保护自己。
……
在路上 1. 遵守交通规则。
……
Discussion:
审题 ：体裁
人称
时态
分段 ： 段，共 点
第一人称
说明文
一般现在时
3
8
Rewrite your compositions.
祝同学们在中考中取得理想的成绩！
谢谢
21世纪教育网（www.21cnjy.com) 中小学教育资源网站
有大把高质量资料？一线教师？一线教研员？
欢迎加入21世纪教育网教师合作团队！！月薪过万不是梦！！
详情请看：
https://www.21cnjy.com/help/help_extract.php
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