高考英语专题练习（九）
短文改错（练）
短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
第二节短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
【2014新课标Ⅰ】短文改错
Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted Some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
【2014新课标Ⅱ】短文改错
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework .Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities .For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
【2013新课标Ⅰ】短文改错
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
【2013新课标Ⅱ】短文改错
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry. 1 / 2
高考英语专题练习（九）
短文改错（练）
答 案
一、
76．think—thought
77．countryside前加the
78．or—and
79．on—with
80．been去掉
81．seriously—serious
82．airs—air
83．much—many
84．found—find
85．your—our
二、
71．parent改为parents
72．on改为in
73．very去掉
74．looks改为looking
75．where改为that或者去掉where
76．begun改为began
77．telling改为told
78．a改为the
79．saw后加his
80．terrible改为terribly
【2014新课标Ⅰ】
【小题1】before—ago
【小题2】by—of
【小题3】year—years
【小题4】had—has
【小题5】As/result—a
【小题6】somewhere—everywhere
【小题7】taste—tasty
【小题8】much—many
【小题9】but—yet或去掉but
【小题10】wonderfully—wonderful
【2014新课标Ⅱ】
【小题1】They—There
【小题2】didn’t—don't
【小题3】many—much
【小题3】many—much
【小题4】with—for
【小题5】hour—hours
【小题6】1ook—1ooks
【小题7】去掉the
【小题8】sat—sit
【小题9】listening后加to
【小题10】helpfully—helpful
【2013新课标Ⅰ】
1．holding—hold
2．passes—passed
3．much—well/clearly
4．shoulder—shoulders
5．towards—to/into
6．himself—him
7．he前加and
8．去掉fact前的a
9．during—when
10．never—ever
【2013新课标Ⅱ】
【小题1】去掉of
【小题2】have—having
【小题3】that—which
【小题4】becomes—became
【小题5】day前加the
【小题6】interesting—interestingly
【小题7】by改为with\to
【小题8】drank—drunk
【小题9】cup—cups
【小题10】grow改为growth
高考英语专题练习（九）
短文改错（练）
解 析
一
二
75．where改为that 或者去掉 where found后面的宾语从句是陈述句,故where改为that或者去掉where.
【2014新课标Ⅰ】
试题分析:本文叙述了五年前,在父亲的帮助下,作者和姐姐在后花园里种植了一些圣女果,这些年以来,它的种子我们没有管过,在院子里随处疯长,结果院子里到处都是圣女果,于是我们就把它们分给邻居吃.感觉心里很高兴.
【2014新课标Ⅱ】
listening 后加to.考查固定短语.or sat by the lake listening music.Listen是不及物动词,后面不能跟宾语,固定短语listen to 意思是“听”,所以在listening后加to.
helpfully →helpful考查形容词和副词.The teachers here are kind and helpfully .涉及知识:系动词后要跟形容词做表语,所以把helpfully改为helpful.
【2013新课标Ⅰ】
【2013新课标Ⅱ】
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高考英语专题练习（九）
短文改错（测）
1．【湖北省荆门市2017届高三元月调考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.
When I was in grade 5, I met an teacher who made me remembered her forever. Her family name is called Ding. And Miss Ding was a very kind women teacher. She often played games with us, and sometime she talked with us. He had a unique set of teaching methods. We students could get good marks without write so much homework. She was very so popular in the school that many teachers also liked to interact with her. There was always a big smile on face, and she seldom lost her temper. She was always patiently with us.
There are so many teachers in my heart. Whatever, Miss Ding is the most unforgettable.
2．【湖南省株洲市2017届高三上学期教学质量检测（一）】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.
Last month, I rode bus to my office ten miles away. I carried only a few cash to last each week. One night, as I walk to the usual bus stop, I met a beggar whom had no legs. I stopped and opened my wallet, but I was discovered that I had no money at all. I apologized to him immediate. I became worried so I had no way to get ho me. At my surprise, the beggar pulled out many coin from his broken bowl. Embarrassed, I took enough for his bus fare, and he said, “Good luck!”
3．【辽宁省铁岭市协作体2017届高三上学期第二次联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.
With the growing popularity of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to their health, especial their eyes, but also to their studies.
Comparing with online games, many traditional games, like hide-and-seek, benefits kids mentally and physically. They were ever popular with several generations, which not only learned anything valuable but also enjoyed playing the games. Therefore, the games are dying away now.
Personally, I think teachers and parents should take measure to limit their children’s Internet time. Let children to know the harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. Help children judge healthy and unhealthy games. What’s more, we should often organize events for children in which traditional games played.
4．【四川省成都市2017届高三第一次诊】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词.
2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.
During my second month of nursing school, our professors gave us a quiz. I had smoothly finished the others’ questions when I got stuck on the last one: “What’s the first name of the woman who clean the school?” I had seen, many times, the woman, tall and in her fifty, but how could I know her name? I handed in my paper, leave the last question blankly. After a class ended, one student asked for the answer for the question. The professor said, “As you know, that in your careers you will meet many people. You should respect them and care about them, even you just smile and say ‘hello’ to them.”
5．【河北省保定市2017届高三11月摸底考试】短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分）
请修改以下作文,短文共10处错误,每句最多有两处错误.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出改加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1．每处错误及其修改均限一词.
2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.
Nowadays more and more people would rather to look for a job on the Internet than in the job market. There are many reasons for my preference, one of which is that a job hunter can find job conveniently. He needn’t bother to get recommendations from friend. Besides, a job hunter can get one by simple sending resumes by e-mail but the success rate is very high. Even if one failed to make it, he won’t feel embarrassing.
I believe job-hunting on the internet will win favor in more and more jobless people for its convenient, efficiency and success rate. 1 / 2
高考英语专题练习（九）
短文改错（测）
答 案
1．
71．an改为a
72．remembered改为remember
73．women改为woman
74．sometime改为sometimes
75．He改为She
76．write改为writing
77．删除so之前的very
78．face前添加her
79．patiently改为patient
80．Whatever改为However
2．
1．rode和bus之间加a或the
2．few→little
3．walk→walked
4．whom→who/that
5．wasdiscovered中的was去掉
6．immediate→immediately
7．so→because/since/as/for
8．At→To
9．coin→coins
10．his→my
3．
1．play-playing
2．Especial-especially
3．Comparing-compared
4．Benefits-benefit
5．which-who
6．anything-something
7．Therefore-However
8．measure-measures
9．to去掉
10．加are（played）
4．
1．professors改为professor
2．others’改为other
3．clean改为cleans
4．fifty改为fifties
5．leave改为leaving
6．blankly改为blank
7．a改为the
8．for改为to
9．that去掉
10．even后加if/though
5．
1．去掉to look for中的to
2．my—their
3．find ∧ job加a/his
4．friend—friends
5．simple—simply
6．but—and
7．failed—fails
8．embarrassing—embarrassed
9．in—with/among
10．convenient—convenience
高考英语专题练习（九）
短文改错（测）
解 析
1．
74．sometime改为sometimes 考查副词.此处意为有时候,用sometimes.
75．He改为She 考查代词.此处人称用错,是女性,故用She.
76．write 改为writing 考查动名词.此处without是介词,后接动名词,故用writing.
77．删除so之前的very 考查副词.Very和so都是修饰词,只能用一个,而且此处是so……that句型,故去掉very.
78．face前添加her 考查代词.此处是指她的脸上,故加一个her.
79．patiently改为patient 考查副词.此处为系表结构,形容词做表语,故改为patient.
80．Whatever改为However 考查连词.此处前后句之间是转折关系,故用However.
2．
2:few→little.考查形容词.few 修饰可数名词,cash 为不可数名词,此处为“只携带一点的现金”,因此正确用法应为“I carried only a little cash …”.
3:walk→walked.考查时态.整个故事都是用的过去时,此处walk 表达的动作也发生了,因此要把walk 改为walked.
4:whom→who / that.考查定语从句.先行词beggar 在定语从句中充当主语,whom 只能用于先行词在从句中充当宾语,因此关系词应为who 或that.
5:was discovered 中的 was 去掉.考查语态.根据句意“我停下来打开钱夹, 但是发现我没带钱”,本句表示的discover“发现”应用主动语态,因此去掉was.
6:immediate→immediately.考查副词.此处表达的是“我立即向他道歉了”,修饰动词apologize 应用副词,所以immediate 改为immediately.
7:so→because / since / as / for.考查连词.根据本句句意“我担忧起来因为我没法回家了”,连词后面为原因状语从句而非结果状语从句,所以so 应改为because / since / as / for.
3．
3．comparing- compared 考查非谓语动词.Compare的逻辑主语是traditional games,它和online games都属于被比较的对象,故用过去分词,compared.
4．benefits - benefit 考查主谓一致.主语是games,是复数形式,所以谓语动词也要用复数形式,不能用三单,故改为benefit.
5．which-who 考查连词.此处为定语从句,先行词是指代人的,故用关系代词who.
6．anything-something 考查不定代词.此处意义为有价值的东西,而不是任何东西,故用something.
7．Therefore --However 考查连词.此处前后句之间是转折关系,而不是因果关系,故用however.
8．measure-measures 考查名词单复数.take measures to do 是固定搭配,采取措施做…….
9．to 去掉 考查固定搭配.此处为固定搭配:let sb do sth,故需要去掉to.
10．加are (played)考查语态.此处根据意思游戏是被玩,用被动语态,故加一个are.
4．
4．fifty改为fifties考查数词.此处为固定用法,in one’s fifties:某人50 多岁.
5．leave改为leaving考查非谓语.此处由于不是句子,须把动词leave 变成非谓语,它的逻辑主语是I,两者之间是主动关系,故变成leaving.
6．blankly改为blank考查固定结构.此处为leave 的固定结构,leave+宾语+宾补,此处需用形容词做宾补,故改为blank.
7．a改为the考查冠词.此处为特指上的这节课,用定冠词the.
8．for改为to考查介词.此处为固定用法,answer to a questions:问题的答案,故用介词to.
9．that去掉 考查连词.此处是主句,无需加连词,故去掉that.
10．even后加if/though考查固定搭配.此处意为即使,尽管,用even if/though.
5．
4．friend--- friends 句意:来自朋友们的建议.名词用复数形式,故把friend--- friends.
5．simple--- simply 副词修饰动词,故把simple--- simply.
6．but--- and 句意:通过发送简历得到工作,并且成功率很高.此处表示递进关系,故把but--- and.
7．failed --- fails 句意:即使一个人没有成功,他不会感到尴尬.根据句意可知用一般现在时态,故把failed --- fails.
8．embarrassing--- embarrassed 句意:他不会感到尴尬.故把embarrassing--- embarrassed.
9．in--- with/among 句意:我认为网上找工作会越来越受到没工作人的称赞.根据句意可知把in--- with/among.
10．convenient--- convenience 句意:因为它的方便和有效.可知用名词形式,故把convenient--- convenience.
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