课件29张PPT。A letter to the mayor of BiJie?!how to write
a suggestive letter writing如何写建议信什么叫建议信? 建议信:就某一问题提出看法,建议或忠告。其对象可以写给个人,就其遇到的问题提出自己的看法和建议,也可以是写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务质量提出建议。写建议信,一定要注意礼貌当先。开门见山,表明写作意图。在本段中,表明写信的目的及原因。Sample: 以下是一封如何和儿子相处的建议信的范文Dear Mr. Liu,
I am very sorry to hear that you can't get along well with your son. Here I want to give you some advice, I wish it could be helpful for you.首段常用句式1.I’m writing to share some advice with you.
2. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on…
3.I’m writing to express my views about..
4.I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. Here I’d like to give some suggestions. 委婉地提出建议及改进措施,或提出忠告。 Firstly, you should be not only strict but also kind to him. Treat him as an adult. You mustn't always shout at him. Respect him and his advice. Maybe his advice is of value. Secondly, you may try to enjoy what he likes, such as music and DVDs. Take more notice of what he thinks. On one hand, you can understand him further, on the other hand you can narrow the gap between you. Thirdly, you can turn to your son's close friends for help. They can understand what your son thinks and needs better.正文常用句式 1. First of all. I think it would be better if….
2. As is known to all ,It would be a good idea to…
3.What’s more, I would like to suggest that…
4. I think it would be more beneficial if you could …
5. In my opinion, it would be wise to take action to….
6. Last but not least, It’s necessary to…礼貌地总结并给于对方的衷心的祝愿。 I believe you can solve the problem satisfactorily, and everything will go well. Good luck to you!建议信结尾常用句式1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
3. I'm sure if you take my advice, you will …
4. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.
5. Thank you for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions.Practice!包括以下要点 :第一步:审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的,但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例,谈谈如何审题:第一人称建议信建议原因
建议内容说理逻辑性一般现在时第二步:搜索相关词组或句型问题建议1.花节期间游客量急剧增加.
2.近几年私家车增长速度很快.
3.景区停车场无法容纳下蜂拥而至的私家车导致景区的交通拥堵现象严重。1.建议游客乘坐公交车进景区2.修建大型停车场.3.景区安排警察值班处理紧急事件.4.拓宽景区道路避免交通事故的发生
........杜鹃花节 The Azalea Festival
游客 tourist
停车场 parking lot
私家车 private car
紧急事件 emergency
景区 the scenic spot
拓宽 widen
交通堵塞 traffic jam
交通事故 traffic accident相关词汇1.表示添加信息的过渡词:in addition,what is more,moreover,what is worse,besides....
2.表示转折关系的常用过渡:however,yet,but.
on the contrary,on the other hand.....
3.表示因果关系的过渡词:therefore,as a result ,thank to ,so.....
as a matter of fact ,that is to say,as follows.第三步:连句成文,但要注意篇章的连贯性A good handwriting is a must
Structure:
* Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
*Well organized and smoothly developed(结构合理,行文流畅)
Language:
* No Chinese English (避免中文式英文)
* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)
* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)What is a good writing?反面范例太潦草了中式英语反面案例What is a good writing?What is a good writing?Compositions-Check Grade your compositions in pairs according to the general rules on the blackboard第一档:0-5分(只能写出与内容相关的词语,没有有效信息 ;抄写其他文章或只写出与作文无关的内容)
第二档:6-10分(内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题,能够写出少数与内容相关的可读词)
第三档:11-15分(虽漏掉一些内容但覆盖主要内容,有较多的语法或词汇错误但不影响理解,多数句子基本正确)
第四档:16-20分(内容基本齐全,语法结构,词汇运用基本准确,尝试了较复杂的语法结构,语言有少量错误)
第五档:21-25分(覆盖所有内容要点,运用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效的运用语句间的连接成分,全文结构紧凑,显示出较强的语言运用能力)
注:如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次5分。高考英语作文个五个档次的给分范围和要求: