课件21张PPT。M2 U6 Design
Communication Workshop
Writing: Describing Your Dream House
GOAL
At the end of this lesson, you will be able to describe your dream house using what you have leant today. Our House
I’ll light the fire, while you place the flowers.
In the vase that you bought today.
Staring at the fire for hours and hours,
While I listen to you play your love songs
All night long for me, only for me.
Our house, is a very, very, very fine house.
With two cats in the yard,
Life used to so hard.
Now everything is easy because of you.
Come to me now, and rest your head for just five minutes.
Everything is done.
Such a cozy(舒适的) room, the windows are illuminated(发光的).
By the evening sunshine through them.
Fiery(火似的) gems(宝石) for you, only for you.
Leading inWhat’s the most important thing about the house?
1. It’s very big and modern.
2. It’s very comfortable and pretty.
Look at some pictures and talk about the following questions.
1. What’s your dream house?
2. What’s it made of?
3. Where is your dream house?
4. How many rooms are there in your dream house? Which is the most important one?
5. Is there any special feature about your dream house?
Preparation for writing modern flat traditional house skyscraperdetached house wood cabincastlepalacecottageMy dream house is , which is made of .near the seaat the top of the mountainin the middle of forestin the city
in the countrysideWhere is your dream house?
It’s located/situated in/at /near
.
a study rooma living rooma kitchena bedroomThere is a study room
in my house I can
do some reading. so thatThere is a small bed room in my house I can sleep comfortably. The most important part is the kitchen I can cook delicious food there.The most important part
is the living room I can
have a good rest. so thatbecausewhereFill in the blanks with so that, because or where. There is a swimming pool in the front of my house I can swim in it in summer. a balconya swimming poola tennis lawnThere is a tennis lawn outside my house I can play tennis with my friends.so thatwhereReading and writing
My Dream House
My dream house is quite a large two-storey house located among green tall trees. The house has got special materials so that it is cool in summer and warm in winter.
On the ground floor is a big hall with comfortable sofas and a color TV. Around the hall there is a kitchen, a living room and a dining room. The most important part in the house is the study room upstairs, where there is a bookshelf, a desk and a piano.
On the roof there are solar panels, which can provide electricity. In front of my house there is a beautiful garden so that I can have tea parties with friends there. In the garden there is also a swimming pool so that I can swim in it in summer.
My house is very modern and environmentally-friendly. I would like to live in such a dream house forever because it can make me relaxed and comfortable.Task1: Match the four paragraphs (1-4) with the main ideas.
Task2: Can you find any good phrases and excellent sentences in my writing? Underline them, please!Para1
Para2
Para3
Para4 Outside the house
Conclusion
Inside the house
IntroductionTask1: Match the four paragraphs (1-4) with the main ideas.Para1
Para2
Para3
Para4 Outside the house
Conclusion
Inside the house
IntroductionLocation, kind of house what rooms, where they are, purposespecial features of the housewhy you want to live there My Dream House
My dream house is quite a large two-storey house located among green tall trees. The house has got special materials so that it is cool in summer and warm in winter.
On the ground floor is a big hall with comfortable sofas and a color TV. Around the hall there is a kitchen, a living room and a dining room. The most important part in the house is the study room upstairs, where there is a bookshelf, a desk and a piano.
On the roof there are solar panels, which can provide electricity. In front of my house there is a beautiful garden so that I can have tea parties with friends there. In the garden there is also a swimming pool so that I can swim in it in summer.
My house is very modern and environmentally-friendly. I would like to live in such a dream house forever because it can make me relaxed and comfortable.located过去分词短语做后置定语介词 with短语做后置定语where引导的定语从句which引导的定语从句so that引导的状语从句because引导的状语从句clear ideasA good passage should have advanced languagegood structuregood handwritingEvaluation (评价) 书面表达”五个档次”
第一档:漂漂亮亮(21-25)
--完全完成了试题规定的任务。
第二档:清清楚楚(16-20)
--完成了试题规定的任务。
第三档:马马虎虎(11-15)
--基本完成了试题规定的任务。
第四档:糊里糊涂(6-10)
--未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
第五档:一塌糊涂(1-5)
--未完成试题规定的任务。
Homework
Please polish your writing in your notebook.
“Two heads are better than one”, so you should help each other to improve your writing after class!