课件29张PPT。基础写作训练(Basic Writing)
---训练对unit10重点句型的
运用What makes
a good essay? 卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言 错误多;层次不清;得 分5——篇章层面书写潦草、字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息,得 分 0Not good!Good!excellentConclusion: what makes a good essay?
1. neat and clean 卷面整洁2. complete content 内容完整What else makes a good essay?Advanced words and sentence patterns
高级词汇和句型advanced words(高级词汇)v. 喜欢 like enjoy be fond of prefer——词汇层面1adj. 开心的,高兴的
→cheerful
→pleased
→enjoyablehappy →delightedvt. 鼓舞,激励
encouragev.吸引attractmotivateappeal to翻译:他很有礼貌He is always politeHe always behaves himself.
advanced wordsbehave oneself—词汇层面polite高级I like to take part in many kinds of activitiesI like to take part in a variety of/varieties of activities.variety翻译:我决定要努力学习decide to dobe determined to domake a decision to domake up one’s mind to do—词汇层面advanced words1.Computers are very important in our life.2.Computers are of great importance in our life.电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。be of importance3.Computers play an important role in our life.play a role in英语老师要我们立刻交作业Our English teacher asked us to hand in the homework at onceask sb to do demand thatOur English teacher demanded that we should hand in the homework at onceadvanced sentence patterns 使用高级句型①He is Tom. He is an exchange student.②He is Tom who is an exchange student.——句型层面1想一想定语从句高级It作形式主语或形式宾语句型.② It is our duty to protect the environment③学习英语是一件很有趣的事
find it +adj to do
④I find it interesting to learn English.① Protecting the environment is our dutyIf you study hard, you will make great progress.(一般)the +比较级,the+比较级The harder you study, the greater progress you will make我的父母抚养我长大。bring sb upMy parents bring me up想一想强调句型
It is/was+被强调部分+that/whoIt is my parents that/who bring me up.Conclusion: what makes a good essay?
1.exactly used advanced words
准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇
2.various sentence patterns 用较丰富的 句式
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Let's try!微写作
根据提示,利用本单元所学句型,完成一篇60字左右的小作文.
Mother’s Day is coming. Please write a
letter to your mum to express your love.微写作微写作
亲爱的妈妈:
我写这封信是为了感谢你。是你养育了我。你是一位伟大的女性,深深地影响着我。在我小时候,你就鼓励我做一个诚实的人。你要求我善良并且有礼貌。你一直告诉我学习知识的重要性。因为你,我下定决心努力学习考上大学。妈妈,我爱你!微写作Task1.Discuss with your partner to make a list of (列举)the phrases and sentence patterns that will be used in writing.我写这封信是为了感谢你。是你养育了我。你是
一个伟大的女性,深深地影响着我。在我小时候
你就鼓励我做一个诚实的人。你要求我善良并且有
礼貌。你一直告诉我学习知识的重要性。因为你,
我下定决心努力学习去考取大学。妈妈,我爱你!
强调句型behave oneselfencourage/motivatebe important/be
of importance todemand that①②③④定语从句⑤⑥⑦what makes a good essay?1. neat and clean 卷面整洁
2. complete content 内容完整
3. exactly used advanced words
准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇
4.various sentence patterns用较丰富的 句式HomeworkPolish the essay after class.