课件21张PPT。课题名称学科:英语
版本:北师大
年级:高三
Look at the following pictures高考模拟作文题 假设你是星光中学的李华。全国英语速写大赛将举行主题为”Greener City, Greener Life”的写作比赛, 你们学校将举行选拔赛。请你参加比赛,按提纲进行写作。
内容提示:
1. 因车流量过大所带来的交通拥堵等;
2. 所导致的全球变暖问题等;
3. 自行车出行的好处;
4. 总结;
参考词汇:二氧化碳 carbon dioxide
要求:1.词数不少于100词;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Composition Appreciation Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinguang high school. As we all know, people are faced great challenges, the most terrible one of which is global warming.
When on the street, we are often caught in traffic jams. It is the cars which pollute our surrounding and contribute for this problem. Furthermore, the cars can release a great amount of carbon dioxide to the atmosphere, but cause the temperature to go up! Nevertheless, we can ride bicycles to reduce the emission of carbon dioxide. Ride bicycles in the city can save energy and is environmental friendly. In addition, it can build up their body and therefore is conducive to our healthy.
Obviously, it’s a high time that we should ride bicycles instead of driving when unnecessary. Only when we do so, we make a greener city and a greener life.
专题复习---- 短文改错
(Proofreading)改错一般会涉及:名词,动词,形容词副词,连词,介词,冠词,代词,从句等。
eg. 1. 名词:单复数名词错用;区分名词是可数还是不可数。
常考的不可数名词:fun, advice, equipment, information, furniture, progress, baggage, luggage,word等
高频名词复数的特殊变化:
beliefs, thieves, photos, pianos, heroes, volcanoes, feet, Germans, Americans, peoples(民族,种族)
1) Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far, I really appreciate your support.
2) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.
2. 冠词(注usful/ honest/ unbrella/ hour 前)1) As student, I think we should know it's our duty to protect the environment.
2) A honest man will be loved by many people in the society.
3) Some decisions are so important that they should not be made without talking to the others first.
3. 代词
1) 代词的主格和宾格;
2) 反身代词(ourselves/themselves/yourselves)
3) 代词的单复数 和不定代词
4) 代词的性别
5) 多余的代词和少代词
6) it作形式主语、形式宾语
7) 替代词:that, those,one
注意:it’s----its a friend of mine
Ex:1) The only thing I like it is art.
2) To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate more on studies.
3) This is our duty to help those who are in trouble.
4) I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.
5) The Smiths have been married, but have no children of his own.4. 谓词动词的时态语态(动词形)
1) and 前后动词时态不一致;
2) 主谓不一致;
3) 缺少动词,特别是be动词;
4) 第三人称单数形式错用;
5) 主动语态和被动语态错用。
6) 非谓语动词的正确选用(非谓动词细辨别)
不规则动词的变化Ex:Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very serious problem.
2) Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher.
3) Not only does it harm to our eyesight, but it also has a bad effect on our studies and everyday life.
4) Time spends in England is so memorable that I will treasure it forever.
5. 连词(逻辑错误需关注)
1) If you help us, we won’t be able to succeed.
2) Thousands of people have been here when it was set up.
3) To sum up, smoking does more harm than good. But students should not pick up the habit of smoking.
6. 形容词、副词
We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully.
2) How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.
3) I arrived home, safely and sound.
4) It is a really supplement to our English class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers.
7. 介词(习惯用法要记住)1) Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students.
2) I stared at everything as if I were looking at it the first time.
3) Gathering around here, we practice spoken English by talking about everything we are interested.8. 从句(句子成分多分析)1) Many people which smoke say that smoking helps them to think better.
2) I finally knew the reason that she didn't talk to me and comforted me.
3) Finally, we can predict that may happen in the future and be prepared.
短文改错口诀
动词形,名词数; 注意形和副;
非谓动词细辨别; 习惯用法要记住;
句子成分多分析; 逻辑错误须关注。
备考建议:
1.在做题中自己归纳,形成自己的错题本。
2.采用多种形式加强针对训练,平时可让翻译句子、单句改错、互评作文等形式进行训练。
3.把短文改错和书面表达练习有机地结合起来,书面表达中常见的错误往往也是短文改错中经常设置的错误。
4.平时训练时规范答题,正确使用改错符号。HomeworkFind a composition you wrote some time ago and try to make it better according to the rules we’ve learnt today. Just believe:
you can always do something to better your composition.
制作单位:合肥北城中学技术组
制作时间:(2017年/4月13日)