模块6 Unit 16 Stories Communication Workshop 课件(22张)

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名称 模块6 Unit 16 Stories Communication Workshop 课件(22张)
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课件22张PPT。利用英语文学作品阅读提高记叙文写作能力 研究课展示及研讨会 北京市中小学名师发展工程执行办公室
北京外国语大学名师培养基地Detailed information
in writingListen to the song :
What makes you beautiful!
What makes the girl beautiful in the song? What makes the girl beautiful in the song?
being the way that you are
the way that you flip your hair
when you smile at the ground
being shyDetails can show us why the girl is beautiful.What can make your writing beautiful?
related details
Details can make your writing beautiful.Read and find out
detailed information in the story
Okay, Spanner, You Win!
sing shoutbounce up and downyellwild with excitement “How many are you going to score tonight, Del?”stare watchsilenttired of “Tonight’s the night!”“Yes”“No”...wanted to win the football match very much. ...were sure of wining because they trusted Del....wanted to drop out of football.Chapter 1 (Example) –“We want our medals” excitement about the match on the school bus “Last time we played them you got six!” “we’ll walk it with you playing!”“Steelhouse! Steelhouse! We’ll support you ever more.“Don’t go missing. We want our medals!”.“Dunno” “Four”Fill in the form about the details of a certain topic in Okay, Spanner, You win! Chapter 2 (Group 1) –“Come on, Del!”Fill in the form about the details of a certain topic in Okay, Spanner, You win! Chapter 3 (Group 2) –“Leave me alone”Fill in the form about the details of a certain topic in Okay, Spanner, You win! Chapter 4 (Group 3) –“Penalty”Fill in the form about the details of a certain topic in Okay, Spanner, You win! Chapter 5 (Group 4) –“The winner”Discussion:

What details should we add to make the writing vivid?
proper verbs
suitable adj/adv
some vivid conversations Writing:

Add more detailed information to a narrative story about a basketball match. Each group chooses one part to add more information.
Last Monday, our teacher told us we would have a basketball match with Class Two.
When we heard the news ,we were very excited.
Then we prepared a lot for the match.
During the match, every classmate was very active.
At last we won the game. We were very happy. Write with the detailed infromation.
Present it. 此次评分规则: One presents the writing.
Others give a score.此次评分规则: Enjoy your writing!
Enjoy your life!

Homework
Polish the whole writing with
related details.
Thank you! Fill in the form about the details of a certain topic in Okay, Spanner, You win! For example-Chapter 1What can make your writing beautiful
related details
various sentence patterns
proper words
_____________________Related detailed information
can make your writing
more vivid
more reasonable
more coherent Chapter 1
We want our medals
Chapter 2
Come on, Del!
Chapter 3
Leave me alone
Chapter 4
Penalty
Chapter 5
The winner
Excitement about the match
on the school bus
Expectation from other people
Match between Steelhouse and Vernon Park
Turning point of the match
Hesitation to drop out