课件19张PPT。What is your trouble in getting a high score in writing?高考英语作文评分标准第五档(很好):(21~25分)
1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.覆盖所有内容要点。
3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I agree with you on that.
Some of the columns are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it‘s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out(脱口而出)” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.
, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the
things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine! definitely which you mentioned in the letter Last but not least trendy
Good
language
advanced and vivid words ,phrases and sentence patterns sentence patternsdifferent and mixedA piece of high-score writing should have How to make the language in writing more advanced 1.It is clear that he has got it.
2.I feel so worried about my problem.
Replace the italic red words with more advanced wordsevident/obviousdistressed/concerned3.The situation is bad.
4.The little boy was afraid of the dark.
Way1: to use more advanced words.awful/terriblescared/fearful Replace the italic red words with more advanced words5.I hope that ...
6.I sincerely hope that ...
Way2: to use adverbs properly. Compare and find the highlights(亮点) Translation:
7.你将越来越受同学欢迎。
You will be increasingly popular with your classmates.8.I like the city because it has many places of interest.
9.The reason why I like the city is that it has many places of interest.
Compare and find the highlight Way3:to use some more advanced sentence patternsTranslation:与他们分享你的故事非常重要。(使用主语从句)
What is extremely significant is that you should share your stories with them.10.I like to stay alone.
11.Generally speaking , I like to stay alone.
Compare and find the highlights Way4: to use parenthesis (插入语)Complete the sentence:
(最后但是同样重要的,)I will help you expand your circle of friends.Last but not (the) least 12.If you are given more time , you will get in well with them.
13.Given more time , you will get in well with them.
Compare and find the highlights Way5: to use nonfinite verb(非谓语动词) Fill in the blank: With time (permit), I hope to take you to join our club.permitting14.You will have more friends in this way.
15.Only in this way will you have more friends.
Compare and find the highlights
Way6: to use inversion(倒装) to change the word order (语序)
Complete the sentence:
Only ____________________
(只有当我们共同努力的时候,我们可以改变这种局势。)
when we work together can we change the situation.Writing 1: Hong Kong is a lively city,and Hong Kong has relaxing beaches and fantastic shopping malls.
Writing 2: Hong Kong is a lively city. There are many relaxing beaches . Its fantastic shopping malls always attract many tourists. Way7:to use different forms of beginnings .Compare and find the highlights Way 1:to use more advanced words.
Way 2:to use the adverbs properly.
Way 3:to use some more advanced sentence patterns
Way 4:to use parenthesis (插入语)
Way 5:to use nonfinite verb(非谓语动词)
Way 6: to use inversion(倒装) to change the word order (语序).
Way 7:to use different forms of beginnings of sentences.
How to make your language more advanced in writing
你喜欢阅读吗?请你以“Reading—A good habit”为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。
内容包括:
你的阅读习惯(喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等)。
阅读带给你什么益处(至少两点)。
号召大家读书。A writing requirement Reading– A good habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. It is clear. It is necessary for us to form a good reading habit. Reading can improve our knowledge. It can also make us think over more different things.
We are free. We can do some reading. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. I like story books most. Most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Reading can be good for us a lot. It’s time for us to have our good reading habit now.
Work together to make the writing better in groups
Reading– A good habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. It is obvious that it is essential for us to form a good reading habit. Not only can it improve our knowledge but also make us think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefit us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now.
One model essayHomeworkCopy the model essay into your exercise books and try to learn it by heart after class.