课件28张PPT。 You see no see people mountain people seaWe two who and who? You ask me , me ask who ? me stop!! You no see, I now very busy. One side play go!!!You give me stop!! Chinglish ( 1 ) S+V;They are dancing.( 2 ) S+V+O;He visited many famous museums.( 3 ) S+V+O+O;He gave her some chips(4 ) S+V+P;His knowledge of English remains very weak. ( 5 ) S+V+O+C。He left the boy standing by the counter.We should keep the classroom clean and tidy.I this morning eat breakfast.
Have?you?eat?meal??
I'm a larger school student.
I'm very like play basketball.
We should hard study.
But I better like listen music.
Live to old, study to old.
I had breakfast this morning.Good morning/afternoon/evening!I’m a college student.We must work/ study hard.It’s never too old to learn.But I like listening to music better.I like playing basketball very much.
---书面表达评析及指导
Beautify your Composition高考书面表达评分标准
1.先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。
2.词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中扣2分。
3. 评分时应注意的主要内容:内容要点
应用词汇和句法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
4. 拼写与标点符号是评卷的一个方面,评分时,应
视其对表达的影响程度予以考虑。
5. 如书写较差,可将分数降低一个档次。
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡,注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, I'm very glad to receive your letter.
I will tell you something about my English
study and hometown. ………….得分:?0卷面不整洁,字数不够,未能传达读者任何信息read and writefind it hard fluent English to write Great changes roads had taken place in my hometownbuildingswidenedIt will be wonderful when you come to China if you are freeshow you aroundI will be glad to语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多得分:?11progressitwell∧widenedroadsMy hometown is becoming more and moreare语言有错误;句式单一;卷面有涂改得分?15影响书面表达得分的因素:1.语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误” 2.没有使用高级词汇和复杂句3.书写不够工整清晰4.审题不认真,要点有所遗漏。要点全面,应用了较多的语法和词汇,行文流畅,具备较强的语言应用能力。得分23第五档,25分。★ 完全完成了试题规定的任务,覆盖所有内容要点。 书面表达评分最高标准(第五档 21---25分)★ 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。★ 语法结构和词汇方面有些错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。★ 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。技
巧过渡恰当句式丰富词汇高级proper transitionsvarious sentence structureadvanced words / expressions1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
2.We all think he is a great man.
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.I. 怎样使用较高级的词汇We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.4. She went to Australia in order to study music.
5. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.
She went to Australia for the purpose of studying music.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.II. 丰富的句式:(常用到的句型结构)
利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采。 4.省略句 when I received your letter!How happy I was1.感叹句 this young boy helped the old granny. 2.强调句solve this problem. 3.倒装句 They readOnly in this way can youwhile walking or riding on a bus. 7、各种从句 I saw a young lady walking slowly in the streetwith a handbag in her hand. 5、with短语Hearing the news, she burst into tears.6 、非谓语形式Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
That’s what I should do.
Time passed quickly before we knew it.
使 用 较 复 杂 句 式◆ Translate like crazyThe more nervous we feel, the less chance to escape .Time permitting, we can ….When a fire breaks out, what we should do is …We can … a table, which is safe in an earquake.1.If we have enough time, we can ... .(使用非谓语动词)
2. When we feel nervous, we have little chance to escape.
(使用the more…the more句式)
3. When a fire breaks out, first, we should be calm.
(使用主语从句)
4. We can stay under a table. That is a safe place in an
earthquake.(使用定语从句)
Practice 一句多译 As soon as we arrived at the village,
we were warmly welcomed by the
villagers.On arriving at the village,we were
warmly….
我们一到达村庄
就受到了村民的热烈欢迎We were warmly welcomed by the
villagers immediately we arrived
at the village.No sooner had we arrived at the
village than we ……Hardly had we arrived at the
village when we….The moment we arrived at the
village, we were…Practice 一句多译昨天下午他才来。
He came here yesterday afternoon.
He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon.
It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here.
It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.
A passage without connectors I had a bad cold last week. I had a running nose. I did not take it seriously. I began to cough. I had a fever and felt weak. I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.A passage with connectors I had a bad cold last week. At first, I had a running nose, but I did not take it seriously. Then I began to cough. After that, I had a fever and felt weak. Finally, I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days. I had a bad cold last week. At first, I had a running nose, but I did not take it seriously. Then I began to cough. After that, I had a fever and felt weak. Finally, I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.withabove all, to begin start with, next/besides/
moreover, last/finally;for one thing, for another thing; on one hand,
on the other hand;However, whilethanks to, as a result / consequence of,
due to, owing to, as a result consequence,as so long as, on condition that, provided,
providing, suppose, supposingalthough, though, as, even if / even though,
while, wh-+ever,no matter + wh- what’s more, furthermore, moreover,
to make matters worse, what’s worse,III.常用的连接词Practice
请在下列句子中(间)填上恰当的关联词。
1.Xiao Ming was walking in the street
___________ he heard someone cry for help.
2. It was not long _______ the police came .
3.___________he heard the cry for help, he
jumped into the water to save the girl.
4. We can go downtown and do some
shopping. __________, we can pay a
visit to some places of interest.
5.I shared the cost of the gas with my
friends .___________, I saved $80.
6. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. ___________ , it may make us fat.In additionAs a resultWhat’s worsewhenbeforeAs soon as Homework假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Peter发邮件说,他正在学汉语,但感觉很吃力,请求你给予帮助。请给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1.举例说明汉语学习的特点;
2.提供一些可行的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。