选修模块7 Unit 21 Human Biology communication workshop课件(26张)

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课件26张PPT。Unit 21

Communication Workshop
The second period Writing
A Discursive essayShould people in comas be kept on life support machines Lead-in Discussion文章结构正反观点对比类的文章提出问题不同观点对比说明自己观点 作为一个中学生, 你肯定经历过多次考试,
体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 请你根据提示内容,
简要概述中学生普遍存在的对考试失败的两种
态度, 并结合自身实际, 说明你的观点.
态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧失
信心, 不再继续努力.
态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励
自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。
你的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ……写作内容Step One: Looking through the given information审题
1. Style体裁:
2.Person时态:
3.Tense人称:
arguement essay(议论文)the present tense(现在时)first person(第一人称) (1) 我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败.
(2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力.
(3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。
(4)我的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ……4. Main points要点: (1) 我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 对考试失败大致有两种态度.have/take many tests or exams do well in the exams
achieve success suffer from failure,
fail (in) the examstake different attitudes towards…
there be different attitudes towards
Step Two : 构思---句型短语 (2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力.be in low spirits
have passive attitudes
no longer study hard ;
no longer try one’s best …lose heart/confidence
句型短语(3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。
find out/ analyze the causes,
encourage oneself
have/take active attitudes
build up self-confidence, avoid making the same mistake
句型短语(4)你的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ……句型短语in my view / opinion,
As for me, …
As far as I am concerned,
I agree with…Failure is the mother of success.
Step 3文章结构 对考试失败大致有两种态度.
我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败.
(2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力.
(3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。
(4)我的观点: 失败乃成功之母, … 提出问题不同观点对比说明自己观点We middle school students have had many tests or exams and have both achieved success and suffered from failure, but different students take different attitudes to failure.
Some fall in low spirits when they don’t do well in the exams, losing heart and no longer studying as hard as before.
However, most students take an active attitude towards failure. By encouraging themselves to be self-confident,They find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.
In my opinion, failure is the mother of success, which can teach us a lot in the process of reaching our goals, and only by tasting failure can we enjoy the fruit of success.
【写作任务】
最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报社组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况,并简述你的看法。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.参考词汇:entrance fee门票。
【写作分析】
第一步 认真审题
正反对比类议论文是从正反两方面辩证地说明某个观点。此类文章常用一般现在时,结构一般为:引语——正方观点——反方观点——结论。
写这类书面表达时可套用常用词汇及结构:
1.开头可以用的表达方式:
We have a discussion about...
We have had a survey on...6.进行相反的比较时用on the other hand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,in contrast,on the contrary, compared with...等。
第二步 提炼要点
1.I'm writing to tell you about the discussion...
2.Opinions are divided on...
3.be against the idea of charge
4.be free of charge
5.have a bad influence on...
6.need money to do sth7.suggest that sb should do...
8.in my opinion
9.as long as...
第三步 扩点成句
1.I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
2.Opinions are divided on the question.
3.60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.
4.They believe a public park should be free of charge.
5.It will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will have a bad influence on the appearance of a city.
6.40% think that fees should be charged because they need money to pay gardeners and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees.
7.They suggest fees should be charged now.
8.In my opinion,the point that fees should be charged is better as long as the price is reasonable.
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.(点题)
Opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.They believe a public park should be free of charge.People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.What's more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will have a bad influence on the appearance of a city.(A方观点)
On the other hand,40% think that fees should be charged because they need money to pay gardeners and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees.They suggest,however, fees should be charged low.(B方观点)
Everything has two sides.In my opinion,the point that fees should be charged is better as long as the price is reasonable.(总结)
Yours truly,
Li Hua
表示不同观点的套语总起:
Different people hold different opinions.
People have taken different attitudes towards …

People have different opinions on this problem.


不同观点之间的衔接:
On the contrary, others hold a different view.
However, each coin has two sides.
On the other hand, people object that ….
However,
on the other hand,
on the contrary, unlike …
be different from …,
在对某一观点作进一步论证时,可用下列过渡词:what's more/besides/in addition/furthermore/moreover
比较、对比HomeworkWrite an essay with the title:
“Should Smoking Be Banned?”