课件44张PPT。年级:高三
版本:北师大版
课题:Unit 21 communication Workshop
writing WelcomeWriting Beauty is found everywhere.The world is not the lack of the beauty, but the lack of the eyes finding beauty。
——Auguste Rodinthe saying
ObejectivesTo appreciate a beautiful composition;
To learn some skills to beautify our essays;
To write a beautiful composition in group.Appreciate a beautiful composition! 随着生活及工作节奏的加快,人们选择上饭馆吃饭而不在家吃饭。请你谈谈上饭馆吃饭的利与弊,并简单陈述自己的观点。 Because of the quickening rhythm of life and work, our way of life has changed, so have our eating habits. More and more people prefer to have meals in restaurants rather than make meals at home.
Firstly having meals in restaurants is very convenient. Secondly the restaurant, especially fast food restaurants, may provide a very comfortable environment as well as a warm atmosphere. People can not only enjoy the food but can communicate with their friends. However, having meals in restaurants will lessen the contact with their families. Besides, compared with home-cooked meals, the food served by restaurants may be expensive or has little nutrition.Appreciate a beautiful composition! Not only do we need a balanced diet but we also want to live a happy life. So, I think it’s better to eat at home.
Appreciate a beautiful composition!What do you think is a good composition?What makes a good composition?Beautiful Beautiful content: All the details should be stated and everything should be to the point.(内容要完整)
What is a good composition?切题 Beautiful structure:
* Good beginning and ending
(好的开头结尾)
* Well organized and smoothly developed
(结构合理,行文流畅)What is a good composition? Beautiful language:
* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)
* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)
* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns
(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)What is a good composition?书写潦草、字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息,得 分 0Worse! 卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言 错误多;层次不清;得 分8Neat! 卷面整洁;语言错误少;层次不明显;得 分14beautiful handwritingWhat makes a good composition?beautiful handwriting使用较丰富的句式使用恰当的连接词skillsHow to write a good composition?
How to beautify our essay?使用较高级的词汇1、phrases priority
词组优先原则2、avoid repeating
避免重复原则3、the new, advanced and long phrases priority
后、高、长原则
后学到、较高级、较长词汇。How to use advanced words?skill 1principles
1、词组优先原则[原文]A new railway is being built in my hometown.
[修正]A new railway is under construction in my hometown.2、避免重复原则[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.three principlesphrases priorityavoid repeating 3、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇。
the new, advanced and long phrases priority
原 词 替换词
important be of importance
very rather extremely
pay attention to attach importance to
happy delighted
more and more the increasing number ofthree principles 3、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇。
the new, advanced and long phrases priority
原 词 替换词
important be of importance
very rather extremely
pay attention to attach importance to
happy delighted
more and more the increasing number ofthree principles
1. 感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I
received your letter!
2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that
helped the old lady. Adopt a variety of sentence patterns.skill 23. 倒装句
e.g.Only in this way can you solve this problem.
4. 省略句
e.g. Come to me if necessary.
5. with短语
e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.Adopt a variety of sentence patterns.skill 26、? 定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place _______ we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of_______stands the school library.
7、? 各种名词性从句 e.g.
That’s _______ I should do.
We should do a favour to ________needs help at present.Adopt a variety of sentence patternswhere which whoever whatskill 28、? 各种状语从句 e.g.
Time passed quickly before we knew it.
So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later.
Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. skill 2Adopt a variety of sentence patterns.1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(使用主语从句)
2. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)
4. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)
Practice adopting a variety of sentence patterns.
Practice adopting a variety of sentence patterns.1. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
2. No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.
3.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
4. Singing and laughing, they went back to school.1.?表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容
另外,还有:what is more; besides;
also; moreover; in addition
2. 表示转折关系
但是, 然而, 相反:but; however; yet;instead; on the other hand;
on the contrary.Use proper linking words.skill 33. 表示因果关系
因为,因此,所以: since; as; because(of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result;
4. 表示条件关系
如果,只要: if ;on condition ( that );
as long as 除非: unless 否则: or else
Use proper linking words.skill 3?5. 表示时间关系
当… 的时候 : when ; while
在…之后: after 在…之前: before
直到: until
一…就… : as soon as
后来, 然后: later; afterwards
不久: soon 近来: lately; recently
自从… :since
从那时起: from then onUse proper linking words.skill 36. 表示特定的顺序关系
首先, 最主要的: above all
其次: secondly 然后: then; next
最后: finally; in the end
7. 换一种方法表述
换句话说: in other words;
that is to say;
Use proper linking words.skill 38. 进行举例说明
例如,比如: for instance; for example; like; such as
9. 用于陈述事实
实际上: in fact; actually;
as a matter of fact
跟你说实话 : to tell you the truthUse proper linking words.skill 310.? 对一个话题进行总结
总而言之,总的来说:
on the whole; in short; all in all;
in general; in a word
其它常用到的副词
Therefore ; otherwise ; finally ;
furthermore ;Thus ; namely ;
although ; afterwards ; personally;
Use proper linking words.skill 3现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请客观的介绍以下讨论结果。Try to write a beautiful composition in group.writing tips:
1.春游
go spring outing
2.接触自然
be close to nature
3.高考
college entrance
examination 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请客观的介绍以下讨论结果。assessPlease learn to
Your composition
when you finish it . 书面表达评价表
项目 自评
1.书写工整吗?有没有乱涂乱划?
2.将文章分段了吗?分成了几段?
3.有单词拼写错误吗?几个?
4.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态?
5.注意主谓一致了吗?
6.有没有语态的错误?
7.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗?
8.有没有词性的错误?哪一种?
9.简单句表达正确吗?
10.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构?
11.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗?
12.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些?show timeHaving finished your beautiful composition, you can put up it on the blackboard. 书面表达评价表
项目 他评
1.书写工整吗?有没有乱涂乱划?
2.将文章分段了吗?分成了几段?
3.有单词拼写错误吗?几个?
4.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态?
5.注意主谓一致了吗?
6.有没有语态的错误?
7.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗?
8.有没有词性的错误?哪一种?
9.简单句表达正确吗?
10.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构?
11.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗?
12.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些?Let's find the most beautiful composition!
If you find it, draw a smile on it! Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.
Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. Read aloud On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.
Read aloudEvaluationDid you appreciate a beautiful composition? (YES/NO)
Did you learn some skills to beautify our essays?(YES/NO)
Did you write a beautiful composition in group?(YES/NO) 目前,许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理,学生对此看法不一。
请根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的看法。注意:1. 字数120左右; 不要逐字翻译。
2. 短文开头已给出,不计人总词数。
Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all
day long……HomeworkThank you for your listening!