课件24张PPT。Book3 Module7
WritingPre-writing While-writingHow to describe a place?Dear Mark,
You’ve made the wise choice to travel here. I’d like to recommend you a famous city.
Hangzhou, the capital of Zhejiang Province, lies in the southeast of China covering an area of 16596 square kilometers. With a population of about 8.8 million, the city has a history of more than 2,200 years, and enjoys a reputation of ?a paradise on earth. It is a very beautiful city with a lot of places of interest, among which the West Lake is the most famous one. It also has many modern factories and high buildings. Besides, the nice climate and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.
I’m sure you will have a good time here. looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Chinese friend.Read and think: how to describe a placePossible subjects:a place010203Writing structureHow to enrich the main part? WordsPhrasesSentencesParagraphsIt is called
“ Idea ”
Your ideas count most about writing the main part.
be located in (on/to) …
be situated in (on/to) …
lie in (on/to) …
坐落于……脚下/顶部
…stands at the foot of/ on the top of… 1.介绍地理位置(location) 毗邻…
border /bordering …; neighbor/neighboring …
…周围是…
be surrounded by…
1.我的家乡位于中国辽宁,毗邻河北。
My hometown, neighboring Hebei, is located in Liaoning Province of China.
2.我的家乡四面环山,是个居住的好地方。
Surrounded by the mountain, my hometown is a nice place to
live in.
2.介绍人口(Population)… has / with a (large/small) population of…
… is a city with a (large/small) population of
中国是一个发展中国家,人口13亿。
1. China is a developing country, with a population of 130 million.
2. As a developing country, China has a population of 130 million.
3. The population of China, which is a developing country, is 130 million.北京是中国的首都,是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。(用一句话) Beijing, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,ooo,ooo.3.介绍面积(Area)… has / occupies / takes up / covers an area of… square kilometers
…covering / with an area of… square kilometers如:天安门是世界上最大的广场,它的面积是440000平方米。
1.Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, covers / has an area of 440000 square meters.
2. Tiananmen Square, with / covering an area of 440000 square meters ,is the largest square in the world.
3. Tiananmen Square , which takes up 440000 square meters, is the largest square in the world.
4.介绍历史(History):…has a long history (of …years)
with a long history (of …years)历史悠久北京是一个现代化城市, 历史悠久。1. Beijing, a modern city, has a long history.
2. Beijing, which has a long history, is a modern city.
3. Beijing is a modern city with a long history. Post-writing. Post-writing.
高级词语勤思考
定语从句不能少
改编句意变丰满
字迹书写需提高
老词新用多奇妙
名词要比动词巧
非谓语倒装效果好
Substitute 替代
Combine 合并
Modify 修饰
Put to other uses挪用 Adapt 改编 Eliminate 去除Reverse 逆转Summary ---SCAMPER(创新思维法) post-writing假设你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Nick将于八月来四川旅游,特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。
请根据下表所提供的要点,写一封回信,并表示盼望他的到来。 注意:
1. 词数100左右,信的格式及开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:省份province;海子lake;都江堰水利工程Dujiangyan Irrigation ProjectHomeworkThank you !