外研版必修四Module 2 Traffic Jam - Writing课件（20张）
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课件20张PPT。Module 2
Traffic Jam
Writing
To write a passage about traffic problems individuallyWrite a similar passage about your town. Use ideas from Listening and speaking activities 3 and 4. 如何写善于交通堵塞的文章这类文章往往属于议论文，写作时分三步
走：
1. 介绍现状：可以列举现实中存在的问题，其作用是引出下文的原因。为了突出交通问题的特征，需要使用一些形容词描述问题的严重性和阐述相关的后果。
2. 分析原因：这是全文的重点，一般需要从多个方面来剖析问题，如“缺乏管理”、“建设落后”等角度展开论述。3. 解决途径：针对问题提出解决办法。为了使提出的方法具有可接受性，通常是运用一些具有劝说性质的从句叙述相关的内容，如if条件状语从句、so that目的状语从句等。黄金表达：教你如何营造亮点
1. 交通拥堵现象：
With the development of the economy, ...
More and more people can afford private cars, ...
The serious car accident caused 5 deaths.2. 产生原因：
This leads to/causes ...
Traffic jams happen in every big city, especially during rush hours and on festivals and vacations.
To start with, a vast population leads to heavy traffic.
The last but not least reason is that some people don't realize the importance of respecting traffic rules.3. 解决办法：
We must take measures ...
My suggestions to solve the problem are as follows.
Subway is obviously the fastest and safest form of public transport.
Compared with other means of transport, public transportation continues to be one of the safest.最近，你班同学围绕“How to solve the problem of heavy traffic”这一话题进行了激烈的讨论，请将讨论结果写成一篇英语短文。要点如下：
交通拥堵的原因：人多、车多、人们遵守交通规则的意识淡薄。建议：1.建设更多宽阔的道路，开辟更多的公交线路；
2．减少使用私家车，多乘坐公共交通工具，提倡步行或骑自行车；
3．遵守交通规则，不乱穿马路。
注意：1.词数100左右(首段已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。How to solve the problem of heavy traffic
Almost every city has a big traffic problem. Today, our class have a debate about how to solve it. _______________________________
______________________________________第一步：审题构思很关键
一、审题
1．确定体裁：本文为议论文；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；
3．确定时态：主要以一般现在时为主。
二、构思
第一段：简要提出目前多数城市出现交通拥挤这一现象，并展开讨论。
第二段：分析出现交通拥堵的原因。
第三段：针对这一现象提出合理化建议。第二步：核心词汇
1．have a debate about 就……展开讨论
2．traffic jam 交通阻塞
3．to start with 首先
4．lead to 导致
5．the last but not least 最后同样重要的是
6．respect/obey traffic rules 遵守交通规则
7．deal with 处理，对付
8．insist on 建议
9．pedestrian 行人；步行者第三步：由词扩句雏形现
1. 首先，人多导致了交通拥堵。(简单句)
To start with, a vast population leads to heavy traffic.
2. 最后一个原因是一些人没有意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。(that引导表语从句)
The last but not least reason is that some people don't realize the importance of respecting traffic rules.3. 为了解决这个问题，一些学生建议建设更多宽阔的道路。(不定式作目的状语；suggest)
To deal with this problem, some students suggest that we (should) build more wide roads.
4. 有人认为我们应该多步行或多骑自行车。(宾语从句)
Someone else thinks we should walk and ride the bike more.5. 减少私家车的使用。(private cars)
We should drive private cars less.
6. 行人应该遵守交通规则。(obey)
Pedestrians should obey traffic rules.
7. 行人在红灯时不要乱穿马路。(at a red light)
Pedestrians shouldn't cross the road at a red light.第四步：句式升级造亮点
1. 用instead of合并句4和句5
Someone else thinks we should walk or ride the bike more instead of driving private cars.
2. 用and并列句合并句6和句7
Pedestrians should obey traffic rules and not cross the road at a red light.
第五步：过渡衔接联成篇
I live in a small town. In the past few years, great changes have taken place. With the development of economy and living conditions, more and more private cars appeared. The roads are full of motorbikes, electrical bicycles and cars, which cause traffic jam in turn, especially in rush hour.
One possible version:
I think the government should take effective steps to solve the problems. On one hand, the roads should be widened. On the other hand, I suggest the government should request people to go to work at different times.
I hope people will live in this town more happily.
Traffic Jam
Writing
To write a passage about traffic problems individuallyWrite a similar passage about your town. Use ideas from Listening and speaking activities 3 and 4. 如何写善于交通堵塞的文章这类文章往往属于议论文，写作时分三步
走：
1. 介绍现状：可以列举现实中存在的问题，其作用是引出下文的原因。为了突出交通问题的特征，需要使用一些形容词描述问题的严重性和阐述相关的后果。
2. 分析原因：这是全文的重点，一般需要从多个方面来剖析问题，如“缺乏管理”、“建设落后”等角度展开论述。3. 解决途径：针对问题提出解决办法。为了使提出的方法具有可接受性，通常是运用一些具有劝说性质的从句叙述相关的内容，如if条件状语从句、so that目的状语从句等。黄金表达：教你如何营造亮点
1. 交通拥堵现象：
With the development of the economy, ...
More and more people can afford private cars, ...
The serious car accident caused 5 deaths.2. 产生原因：
This leads to/causes ...
Traffic jams happen in every big city, especially during rush hours and on festivals and vacations.
To start with, a vast population leads to heavy traffic.
The last but not least reason is that some people don't realize the importance of respecting traffic rules.3. 解决办法：
We must take measures ...
My suggestions to solve the problem are as follows.
Subway is obviously the fastest and safest form of public transport.
Compared with other means of transport, public transportation continues to be one of the safest.最近，你班同学围绕“How to solve the problem of heavy traffic”这一话题进行了激烈的讨论，请将讨论结果写成一篇英语短文。要点如下：
交通拥堵的原因：人多、车多、人们遵守交通规则的意识淡薄。建议：1.建设更多宽阔的道路，开辟更多的公交线路；
2．减少使用私家车，多乘坐公共交通工具，提倡步行或骑自行车；
3．遵守交通规则，不乱穿马路。
注意：1.词数100左右(首段已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。How to solve the problem of heavy traffic
Almost every city has a big traffic problem. Today, our class have a debate about how to solve it. _______________________________
______________________________________第一步：审题构思很关键
一、审题
1．确定体裁：本文为议论文；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；
3．确定时态：主要以一般现在时为主。
二、构思
第一段：简要提出目前多数城市出现交通拥挤这一现象，并展开讨论。
第二段：分析出现交通拥堵的原因。
第三段：针对这一现象提出合理化建议。第二步：核心词汇
1．have a debate about 就……展开讨论
2．traffic jam 交通阻塞
3．to start with 首先
4．lead to 导致
5．the last but not least 最后同样重要的是
6．respect/obey traffic rules 遵守交通规则
7．deal with 处理，对付
8．insist on 建议
9．pedestrian 行人；步行者第三步：由词扩句雏形现
1. 首先，人多导致了交通拥堵。(简单句)
To start with, a vast population leads to heavy traffic.
2. 最后一个原因是一些人没有意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。(that引导表语从句)
The last but not least reason is that some people don't realize the importance of respecting traffic rules.3. 为了解决这个问题，一些学生建议建设更多宽阔的道路。(不定式作目的状语；suggest)
To deal with this problem, some students suggest that we (should) build more wide roads.
4. 有人认为我们应该多步行或多骑自行车。(宾语从句)
Someone else thinks we should walk and ride the bike more.5. 减少私家车的使用。(private cars)
We should drive private cars less.
6. 行人应该遵守交通规则。(obey)
Pedestrians should obey traffic rules.
7. 行人在红灯时不要乱穿马路。(at a red light)
Pedestrians shouldn't cross the road at a red light.第四步：句式升级造亮点
1. 用instead of合并句4和句5
Someone else thinks we should walk or ride the bike more instead of driving private cars.
2. 用and并列句合并句6和句7
Pedestrians should obey traffic rules and not cross the road at a red light.
第五步：过渡衔接联成篇
I live in a small town. In the past few years, great changes have taken place. With the development of economy and living conditions, more and more private cars appeared. The roads are full of motorbikes, electrical bicycles and cars, which cause traffic jam in turn, especially in rush hour.
One possible version:
I think the government should take effective steps to solve the problems. On one hand, the roads should be widened. On the other hand, I suggest the government should request people to go to work at different times.
I hope people will live in this town more happily.