外研版必修五Module 7 Revision - Writing课件（25张）
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课件25张PPT。How to describe a person?
人物描写 Joseph Haydn (1732-1809) was an Austrian composer and is known as " the father of the symphony”. Other composers had written symphonies before Haydn,but he changed the symphony into a long piece for a large orchestra.
He was born in a village in Austria, the son of a peasant. He had a beautiful singing voice. After studying music in Vienna,Haydn went to work at the court of a prince in eastern Austria, where he became director of music. Having worked there for 30 years, Haydn moved to London, where he was very successful.Do you still remember them? Ancient China was a place where states were often at war with each other. But it was also a time when there were many great philosophers. Confucius（551BC一479BC）is the philosopher whose influence has been the greatest. He stressed the importance of kindness, duty and order in society. Chinese society was influenced by these ideas for more than 2,000 years. Yuan Longping was born and brought up in China. As a boy he was educated in many schools and was given the nickname, " the student who asks questions.”
From an early age he was interested in plants.He studied agriculture in college and as a young teacher he began experiments in crop
breeding. He thought that the key to feeding people was to have more rice and to produce it more quickly. He thought there was only
one way to do this---by crossing different species of rice plant, and then he could produce a new plant which could give a higher yield than either of the original plants. Mr Wu’s only been teaching us for two weeks and he’s already very popular. I think this is because he really enjoys teaching Chinese literature---he loves it, in fact! He’s got so much energy, this is one class you do not fall asleep in! He’s about 28, I think, and is rather good-looking. He talks loudly and fast, and waves his hands about a lot when he gets excited. He’s really amusing and tells jokes when he thinks we’re getting bored. Even things like compositions and summaries are fun with Mr Wu. I respect him a lot.Summarize the key points of how to describe a person: name,date of birth,birthplace,identity(身份)，title(称号)，experiences,how to succeed,
evluation(评价)，interests,appearance,
characters(性格),specialty(特长)，language,action[Writing Tips]
以写人为主的记叙文(narrative)，应该注意肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写。考生应根据写作的要求，灵活掌握、突出重点。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但考试时需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。
2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，
突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历；新闻报道要重点突出事迹；介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点等。
3．注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等
常用一般现在时；而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。第一步 构建框架，清晰行文 [谋篇布局]Beginning：简单概述人物基本概况(如年龄、出
生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等)；
Body：叙述其事迹或在某个领域中所作出的贡献；
Ending：最后再对其进行评价。1.出生在一个……的家庭
___________________________
2. 在某人十几/二十几/三十几岁的时候
___________________________
3. 长相普通/英俊
___________________________
4. 毕业于…… ___________________________
5. 获得……(方面的)学位
___________________________第二步 精心选词，恰当运用be born in a…familyin one’s teens/twenties/thirtiesordinary/plain-looking / handsome-lookinggraduate from…get/obtain a…degree in…6. 对……有浓厚的兴趣_____________________
_________________________
7. 对……有天赋 _____________________
8. 竭尽全力做某事 _____________________
_________________________
9. 受……尊重 _____________________
10. 献身于 _____________________ show (a) strong interest
in…/take (a) great interest in…have a gift/talent for… make every/great effort
to do sth./try one’s best to do sth. be respected by…devote oneself to11. 为……树立榜样 ___________________
12. 被誉为…… ___________________
13. 全心全意为……服务 ___________________
14. 高度评价 ___________________
15. 为……作出伟大的贡献
___________________set an example to…be honored as…serve…heart and soulthink/speak highly of make great contributions to…第三步 打造亮句，增色文章1. 杰克由他当农民的祖父母抚养，从小就对植物和昆虫产生了浓厚的兴趣。1. Brought up by his grandparents, who were farmers, Jack showed a strong interest in plants and insects when he was a child.1.2. 他主修医学，1989年在中山大学毕业并获得学士学位。四年后，他出国留学深造。2. Majoring in medical science, he graduated from Sun Yat-Sen University with a bachelor’s degree in 1989 and four years later, he went abroad for further studies.2. 3. 凭着他的决心和毅力，他在两年内创下了多项世界纪录并在田径界获得了高度的评价。3. 3. With great determination and perseverance, he set several world records within two years and was thought highly of by the athletic circles.4. 他不仅献身于志愿者工作，而且还全心全意为人民服务。4. Not only did he devote himself to voluntary work, but also he was willing to serve people heart and soul. 4. 5. 尽管他的相貌平凡，但是他有丰富的教学经验，深得其他老师和学生的尊敬。5. 5. Ordinary-looking as he is, he has rich teaching experience and he is deeply respected by other teachers and students.
习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)
Born in Ningbo City Zhejiang Province in December 1930,
Tu Youyou show a strong interest in medicine when she
was young. After graduated from Beijing Medical
University in 1955, she worked on medical researches.
showed graduating On January, 1969, she began to conduct
experiments on difference drugs and
medicine. Having tried over 380 time, she
finally succeeded in developing
artemisinin(青蒿素). In different times In spite of this achievement, she still devoted
oneself to all kinds of medical researches,
aiming to find more effective drugs for
human’s healthy. Because her great
contributions and devotion to the medical
field, she was awarded for the Nobel Medical
Prize in 2015, becoming world famous.herself health Advice on writing：①巧用连接词
②注意选词、多用短句、慎用长句
有无遗漏要点 ;
看文体格式是否正确规范 ;
③做好检查 看词语使用是否正确，有无语法或用词上的错误;
看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有
无遗漏或错用。
Sample:
Lin Dan, also nicknamed “Super Dan”, was born in 1983 in Fujian Province. He is considered to be one of the most outstanding badminton players in the world. When he was young, he showed a strong interest in playing badminton. Then, he made great effort to play badminton and was admitted to the national team eventually. In 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, he won the champion. But what impresses me most is his wonderful performance in 2012 London Olympics, when he competed with another excellent player Li Zongwei. With his professional skills and perseverance, he overcame all the difficulties and finally won the competition, becoming the world champion.
Because of this, his spirits will never stop influencing me, pushing me to work hard to achieve my goal.Thanks for listening!
人物描写 Joseph Haydn (1732-1809) was an Austrian composer and is known as " the father of the symphony”. Other composers had written symphonies before Haydn,but he changed the symphony into a long piece for a large orchestra.
He was born in a village in Austria, the son of a peasant. He had a beautiful singing voice. After studying music in Vienna,Haydn went to work at the court of a prince in eastern Austria, where he became director of music. Having worked there for 30 years, Haydn moved to London, where he was very successful.Do you still remember them? Ancient China was a place where states were often at war with each other. But it was also a time when there were many great philosophers. Confucius（551BC一479BC）is the philosopher whose influence has been the greatest. He stressed the importance of kindness, duty and order in society. Chinese society was influenced by these ideas for more than 2,000 years. Yuan Longping was born and brought up in China. As a boy he was educated in many schools and was given the nickname, " the student who asks questions.”
From an early age he was interested in plants.He studied agriculture in college and as a young teacher he began experiments in crop
breeding. He thought that the key to feeding people was to have more rice and to produce it more quickly. He thought there was only
one way to do this---by crossing different species of rice plant, and then he could produce a new plant which could give a higher yield than either of the original plants. Mr Wu’s only been teaching us for two weeks and he’s already very popular. I think this is because he really enjoys teaching Chinese literature---he loves it, in fact! He’s got so much energy, this is one class you do not fall asleep in! He’s about 28, I think, and is rather good-looking. He talks loudly and fast, and waves his hands about a lot when he gets excited. He’s really amusing and tells jokes when he thinks we’re getting bored. Even things like compositions and summaries are fun with Mr Wu. I respect him a lot.Summarize the key points of how to describe a person: name,date of birth,birthplace,identity(身份)，title(称号)，experiences,how to succeed,
evluation(评价)，interests,appearance,
characters(性格),specialty(特长)，language,action[Writing Tips]
以写人为主的记叙文(narrative)，应该注意肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写。考生应根据写作的要求，灵活掌握、突出重点。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但考试时需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。
2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，
突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历；新闻报道要重点突出事迹；介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点等。
3．注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等
常用一般现在时；而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。第一步 构建框架，清晰行文 [谋篇布局]Beginning：简单概述人物基本概况(如年龄、出
生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等)；
Body：叙述其事迹或在某个领域中所作出的贡献；
Ending：最后再对其进行评价。1.出生在一个……的家庭
___________________________
2. 在某人十几/二十几/三十几岁的时候
___________________________
3. 长相普通/英俊
___________________________
4. 毕业于…… ___________________________
5. 获得……(方面的)学位
___________________________第二步 精心选词，恰当运用be born in a…familyin one’s teens/twenties/thirtiesordinary/plain-looking / handsome-lookinggraduate from…get/obtain a…degree in…6. 对……有浓厚的兴趣_____________________
_________________________
7. 对……有天赋 _____________________
8. 竭尽全力做某事 _____________________
_________________________
9. 受……尊重 _____________________
10. 献身于 _____________________ show (a) strong interest
in…/take (a) great interest in…have a gift/talent for… make every/great effort
to do sth./try one’s best to do sth. be respected by…devote oneself to11. 为……树立榜样 ___________________
12. 被誉为…… ___________________
13. 全心全意为……服务 ___________________
14. 高度评价 ___________________
15. 为……作出伟大的贡献
___________________set an example to…be honored as…serve…heart and soulthink/speak highly of make great contributions to…第三步 打造亮句，增色文章1. 杰克由他当农民的祖父母抚养，从小就对植物和昆虫产生了浓厚的兴趣。1. Brought up by his grandparents, who were farmers, Jack showed a strong interest in plants and insects when he was a child.1.2. 他主修医学，1989年在中山大学毕业并获得学士学位。四年后，他出国留学深造。2. Majoring in medical science, he graduated from Sun Yat-Sen University with a bachelor’s degree in 1989 and four years later, he went abroad for further studies.2. 3. 凭着他的决心和毅力，他在两年内创下了多项世界纪录并在田径界获得了高度的评价。3. 3. With great determination and perseverance, he set several world records within two years and was thought highly of by the athletic circles.4. 他不仅献身于志愿者工作，而且还全心全意为人民服务。4. Not only did he devote himself to voluntary work, but also he was willing to serve people heart and soul. 4. 5. 尽管他的相貌平凡，但是他有丰富的教学经验，深得其他老师和学生的尊敬。5. 5. Ordinary-looking as he is, he has rich teaching experience and he is deeply respected by other teachers and students.
习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)
Born in Ningbo City Zhejiang Province in December 1930,
Tu Youyou show a strong interest in medicine when she
was young. After graduated from Beijing Medical
University in 1955, she worked on medical researches.
showed graduating On January, 1969, she began to conduct
experiments on difference drugs and
medicine. Having tried over 380 time, she
finally succeeded in developing
artemisinin(青蒿素). In different times In spite of this achievement, she still devoted
oneself to all kinds of medical researches,
aiming to find more effective drugs for
human’s healthy. Because her great
contributions and devotion to the medical
field, she was awarded for the Nobel Medical
Prize in 2015, becoming world famous.herself health Advice on writing：①巧用连接词
②注意选词、多用短句、慎用长句
有无遗漏要点 ;
看文体格式是否正确规范 ;
③做好检查 看词语使用是否正确，有无语法或用词上的错误;
看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有
无遗漏或错用。
Sample:
Lin Dan, also nicknamed “Super Dan”, was born in 1983 in Fujian Province. He is considered to be one of the most outstanding badminton players in the world. When he was young, he showed a strong interest in playing badminton. Then, he made great effort to play badminton and was admitted to the national team eventually. In 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, he won the champion. But what impresses me most is his wonderful performance in 2012 London Olympics, when he competed with another excellent player Li Zongwei. With his professional skills and perseverance, he overcame all the difficulties and finally won the competition, becoming the world champion.
Because of this, his spirits will never stop influencing me, pushing me to work hard to achieve my goal.Thanks for listening!