课件13张PPT。 Book7 M3 Writing
刻画人物形象
典例展示
假设你的名字是王珊,你向《中学生》杂志社推荐你的好朋友李莉来担任学生记者,以下是她的基本情况,请参照以下情况写一篇英语文章来描写李莉:
1.性格特点:阳光,向上;爱好广泛,擅长文学,同时对历史
有着浓厚的兴趣;爱好交友,在校学生会担任学生干部。
2.年龄:16岁。
注意:词数100左右;可适当增加细节。Step 1.审题
1.时态:一般现在时
2.人称:第三人称
3.要点4个:(1).写信目的 (2)性格特点(3)年龄(4)盼望回复。
Step 2. 谋篇布局
Paragragh1: 写信目的
Paragragh2:性格特点,年龄
Paragragh3:盼望回复Step 3 连接词
First of all , ...... In addition / What's more , ......Last but not least , ......Step 4. 词汇搜索 (Discussion in groups)
1.推荐:
2.向某人推荐某人:
3.勤奋的
4.阳光的
5.钦佩
6.被认为是
7.与此同时
8.交朋友 v. recommend n. recommendationrecommend sb. to sb.hardworking ; diligentsunshinev. admire n. admirationbe regarded as ; be considered as ; be considered to be at the same timemake friendsShe has many hobbies , which has made us classmates admire her.I write this letter to you to recommend my best friend LiLi to be a student reporter of your magazine.Step 5. 由词连句(Discussion in groups.The teacher will ask two students to translate the sentences on the blackboard.)
1.我给你写这封信推荐我的好朋友李莉来担任你们杂志的学生记者。(动词不定式作目的状语)
2.她有许多爱好,这使我们同学们都很钦佩她。(非限制性定语从句)
3.作为我校学生会的一员,她真的很喜欢交朋友。(现在分词短语作状语)Being a member of Students’ Union in our school , she really loves making friends.
4.假如你能考虑我的推荐,我将不胜感激。(虚拟语气)
I would appreciate it if you could consider my recommendation.
Step 6 Practice 连句成文 (13 minutes )
The teacher ask the students to write the composition by themselves.Step 7. Presentation
The teacher asks some students to present their composition and the others mark them and tell all the students the reasons.Then hand in all the compositions.
Step 8. Homework
Revise the words and sentences we learned today. Recite the suggested writing . Suggested writing :
Dear Editor,
I write this letter to you to recommend my best friend LiLi to be a student reporter of your magazine.
First of all , as a 16-year-old sunshine girl, Li Li is very hardworking in school. In addition , she has many hobbies , which has earned great admiration from us classmates .Literature is her favorite and her composition are always regarded as model ones. Last but not least, she is very interested in history . Being a member of Students’ Union in our school , she really loves making friends. As far as I’m concerned , she can make more friends and improve herself if she becomes a student reporter of your magazine.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang ShanThank You !