课件27张PPT。 Advance with English 1Unit 3 Look good, feel good
Task
Skills building 3: using punctuationStep 3 writing an e-mail encouraging a friend Free talkImagine one of your classmates is depressed
these days. What will you do? Problem 1 ['p??kt??'e??n]What’s wrong with Hu Bo’s writing?punctuation marks标点符号Read an e-mail
Encouraging a friend
Mind mapProblem 1 Problem 2Problem 3Hu BoProblems—solutionssemi-colon
quotation mark
dash
apostrophe
hyphen( . )
( , )
( ! )
( : )
( ? )
full stop
comma
exclamation mark
colon
question mark ['ha?f(?)n][,ekskl?'me??(?)n]Common punctuation marks [?'p?str?f?]warm-hearted( ; ) (‘ ’)(—)( - ) ( ’ )I don’t enjoy exercise.导 1. Are you afraid of the mid-term exam___?2. It’s so terrible___!3. Miss chen said, __believe yourselves and you will get
a good result.__‘’( , ) ( : ) ( ? ) ( ! ) (‘ ’) Where is my place?4. You should pay attention to three things___
preparing well ___ keeping confident and staying calm.:,—( . ) ( , ) ( ; )Confusing ones:1. Some people go on a diet to lose weight___They even
take weigh-loss pills.
2. If some people go on a diet to lose weight_____ they may
have a bad health.
3. Many people____ some of who are not overweight , are
going on a diet.
4. Some people go on a diet to lose weight___ they even
take weight-loss pills.,.,= Some people go on a diet to lose weight and they even
take weight-loss pills.;单句单句从句主句思whomI’ m improving.Problem 2 Dear health expert:
Please help me! I am a fat teenager. My classmates laugh at me a lot, I don’t do sports, and my favourite meal is a hamburger; chips and soft drinks. Is this really such a problem? I don’t enjoy exercise; it makes me tired. Also. I’m hungry all the time and love to eat fast food. What should I do! Do you think I should take some weight—loss pills? What about exercise and food? Please don’t tell me to stop eating:
Best wishes.
Hu Bo!有错必纠Page 56议Dear health expert:
Please help me! I am a fat teenager. My classmates laugh at me a lot, I don’t do sports, and my favourite meal is a hamburger; chips and soft drinks. Is this really such a problem? I don’t enjoy exercise; it makes me tired. Also. I’m hungry all the time and love to eat fast food. What should I do! Do you think I should take some weight—loss pills? What about exercise and food? Please don’t tell me to stop eating:
Best wishes.
Hu Bo!有错必纠,,,!? .Problem 1 The usage of
punctuation marksDear health expert,?Problem 2Problem 3He is a _______ teenager and is often _________ at.
On the one hand, he enjoys eating___________and feels
__________ all the time; on the other hand, he dislikes________________.Task: Find out Hu Bo’s problem. fatfast foodexercisehungrylaughedProblem 2 导学无止境Hi, I’m Li Fan, a health expert.Task1 : Listen to Li Fan’s e-mail on Page 57 and find out the advice he gives.lose weight
play basketball
go on a dietAdvice:思Problem giving advice and encouragement showing comfort
…
expressions: Task 2 Find out the useful expressions.An e-mail of encouragementYou’ll become healthier and feel better if…
If it is any comfort to you…
Here’s a good idea—why don’t you
It would help you do…
It would aslo be fun.
We can do it together.giving advice and encouragement showing comfort…
Task 2 Find out the useful expressions.An e-mail of encouragementI feel sadness…
Please know that I am a true friend…
I think you are good… Comfort and encouragement
Your own ways常见的问题I have the same experience. There’s no need to worry too much about that.
I feel sorry to hear that…
You’re not alone. It’ s a common problem.
It’s not a big deal. Just be confident about yourself.
With a little patience and confidence, many problems can be solved.
…?Useful expressions:思An e-mail of encouragementDate: 13 October From: Li Fan To: Hu Bo Subject: Have funShowing comfortDear Hu Bo,Giving advice and encouragementPlease write back and tell me what you think about my plan.
Best wishesExpressing ________Li FanExpressing wishes主题学以致用Miss Chen’s Problem:Task1: Let’s work out her problem. strong armsa little large waistClothes with no sleeves(袖子) never belong to her.I feel sad during summer. I have two strong arms and a little large waist. I don’t like hot days. Because I dare not wear clothes with short sleeves(衣袖).,because议Problem 3 学以致用Miss Chen’s Problem:Task 1: Let’s work out her problem.showing comfort;giving advice and encouragement .Your help:I feel sad during summer. I have too strong arms and a little large waist. I don’t like hot days, because I dare not wear clothes with short sleeves(衣袖).Writing an e-mail of encouragementDate: 4 September From: To: Miss Chen Subject: Dear Miss Chen??Best wishes
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1. 外在美:标点、书写;
2. 结构美:
3. 语言美:词汇美、句式美、衔接美。
How to beatify your writing1. Beautiful handwriting(书写) and correct punctuation (标点)?
2. A clear structure(结构)and complete content (内容)?
3. Proper linking words(衔接词)?
4. Various sentence pattern(句式)?
5. Correct sentences (句子)?Criteria for your assessing(评价标准)5分10分2分3分5分Dear Miss Chen,
I feel…
giving advice and
encouragementshowing comfortexpressing wishes I think…Please write back…Best wishesI feel sorry to hear..
I think you look good as you are.
Just be confident.
There’s no need to worry much about that.
It’s a common problem.
With a little patience and confidence, many problems can be solved.
If it’s any comfort to you…
Why don’t you… /You’d better…
It would be a good idea…
…Writing an e-mail of encouragement SampleSuggested expressions:musicexercise, feeling goodLooking goodHomework学后反思Exchange交换the problems and write a letter of encouragement to each other.Share one of your own problems.If you share your problems, you’ll feel better.Roses given, fragrance in hand.Remember:Thank you for
your attention!