外研版选修八Module 7 Revision - Writing课件（33张ppt）
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课件33张PPT。怎样让书面表达
文采飞扬假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文：
1. 简要描述下图内容，并点名主题；
2. 联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示The part and the whole world
Some water makes up the sea. The forest is
made up of many trees. In our society, the group of people consists of various people. The little things contribute to the whole world. Don’t forget the little things and ignore them, which will cost you a lot.
It’s obvious that we look upside down some
little things frequently, while look up to several
honorable things .However, the common thing is more meaningful than the honorable thing. Normal man as you are, you can create more contributions to the society. It’s what you have done to the society that are really
important .With a kind heart to the society,
every part of the society is of significance.
The more you devote to the society, the more you will gain. Being a part of the whole world, your life will be colorful and meaningful.
满分理由
本文意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，运用了consist of ,look upside down等高级词汇外。还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句等多种句式，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。 25审抓遣改抄+查The six steps for writing“非常6+1”书 面 表 达 连审文体、审要求、审人称、审时态抓要点遣词造句连词成句，连句成篇修改润色复查全文1.cover all the language points and given information.
avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling4.well-connected, tight, logical ，clear. 3. beautiful language: beautiful phrases, expressions & structures, advanced vocabulary 5. the beautiful handwritingPay Attention A good composition should : Don’t use masses of “ands”, “buts”, “ors”, etc.
Use the fewest words
to say the most 1.She likes sports very much.
1.be fond of 2. go in for 3.be interested in 4.enjoy She is fond of sports.
She goes in for sports.
She is interested in sports.
She enjoys sports.
3.We all think he is a great man.think highly of him .2. I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to / struck /
came to / hit me.I came up with a good idea.4. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.5、You will find my house easily. You’ll have no trouble/difficulty (in) finding my house.
运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。1. When he heard the news, he jumped with joy..（使用V-ing形式）.
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）
3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用with结构)
, he jumped with joy. is that the little girl knows so many things.On hearing the newsWhat surprises himHe came in , with a baby in his arms.4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用非谓语） It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that ，he can’t get in touch with Mary. Not knowing his telephone number he knew what had happened.Tom likes singing songs, Mary.so does5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.( 使用倒装）7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) by many students, she walked out of the lab. , a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. he spoke, excited he felt.FollowedThe more the moreThe weather being fine8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.（使用the more…the more句型结构）9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to climb the Western hill. （使用独立主格结构）
1. _______________(据我所知), everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.
2. People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. ______________________
__________,(另外) they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.As far as I know3. There are many advantages of smiling. It can _________make us happy, _________ please others（不但……而且）.
4. Li Ming used to be a healthy boy, ___ （但是）over a year ago, he got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks. _______, （另外）he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and did little exercise. ___________, （结果）he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs. As a result not onlybut alsobutBesides5. I think it is a kind or win-win activity. ____________, （一方面）I can help take care of the children. _______________ , （另一方面）I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.For another thing For one thing6. One can keep fit in the following ways. ______,（首先） one should keep a balanced diet. _______,（其次） one is to exercise regularly. ______, （再次）one is to get rid of bad habits, such as drinking and smoking. _________________, （最后但同样很重要的是）make sure to be always in a good mood. And last but not leastFirstlySecondlyThirdly7. _________________(总之), let’s greet every day with a smile. In short / In a word8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _____________ ,(更糟糕的是) it may make us fat. What’s worse
I think the Internet is helpful not harmful as someone else thinks. We all know that the Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news and get much information. We can send E-mails or make phone calls to our family.We can attend the net school, read many books and even teach ourselves English. …In my opinionrather thanAs we all know is playing a more and more important roleUse better phrases to replace the common ones.Improve the passagenot only but also Besides wePractice Time写作练习 假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；
3.希望获准。 1.Cross question(审题)2.Seize major points3.Words and phrases4.Sentences5.Correct mistakesStyleTensePersonThe steps for writingAn application letterPresent TenseThe First PersonStructureBeginning (purpose)Body ( a.Self-introduction
b.The intention ) Ending
( the reply )1) Purpose
Step 2 抓 要 点(Seize the major points)Major points 假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）
3.希望获准。 2) Self -introduction3) The intention4) The hope for the reply The source of the information
(from the Internet )
Step 3 遣词造句(words and phrases)3. 夏令营2. 互联网the Internetthe summer camp1. 申请apply for sth/doing sth4. 欢迎各国学生参加welcome students from different counties5. 对……感兴趣be interested in6. 擅长于be good at ; do well in ; be expert in ; be skilled at 10. 期望look forward to ; expect to ; be eager to ; hope to 9. 了解learn about8. 介绍中国tell sb about Chinamaster…well ;
have a good knowledge of ;
have a good command of 7. 精通，掌握Step 4 连词成句， 连句成篇（conjunctions）Useful sentence patterns for an application letterThe beginning12. I have learned from the newspaper that your company wanted a …and I am very interested in it.3. Having known that your company needs a … I would like to apply for the post.1. I am writing to apply for the position that you have advertised in the newspaper ．I am interested in it.
The ending Don’t forget to use various grammar structures and some linking verbs .1. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.2. I will appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply. 3. I am looking forward to receiving your reply.
Show TimeDear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for __________(申请职位) that you have advertised ________(来源) ．I am interested in it.
To briefly introduce myself, I am ________ from ________.As a/an ________， I have been learning________. What’s more, I will be able to __________and _____________as well.
I will appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Name
14.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些? 13.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗? 12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构? 11.简单句表达正确吗? 10.有没有词性的错误?哪一种? 9.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗? 8.有没有语态的错误? 7.注意主谓一致了吗? 6.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态? 5. 有单词拼写错误吗?几个? 4. 将文章分段了吗?分成了几段? 3.有没有注意标点符号? 2.句子开头注意大小写了吗? 1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划?他评自评项 目 书面表达评价表Part 2
BodyPart1 Beginning
Part3 Ending
Reason1Reason2Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.
I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. I am looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Hua
语意要合情合理，过渡自然 语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安语法要结构正确，无懈可击语言要地道流畅，书写规范 假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知BMB公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，要点如下：
1.年龄；
2.学习情况；
3.兴趣和特长；
4.性格特点；Homework Practice makes perfect
文采飞扬假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文：
1. 简要描述下图内容，并点名主题；
2. 联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示The part and the whole world
Some water makes up the sea. The forest is
made up of many trees. In our society, the group of people consists of various people. The little things contribute to the whole world. Don’t forget the little things and ignore them, which will cost you a lot.
It’s obvious that we look upside down some
little things frequently, while look up to several
honorable things .However, the common thing is more meaningful than the honorable thing. Normal man as you are, you can create more contributions to the society. It’s what you have done to the society that are really
important .With a kind heart to the society,
every part of the society is of significance.
The more you devote to the society, the more you will gain. Being a part of the whole world, your life will be colorful and meaningful.
满分理由
本文意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，运用了consist of ,look upside down等高级词汇外。还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句等多种句式，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。 25审抓遣改抄+查The six steps for writing“非常6+1”书 面 表 达 连审文体、审要求、审人称、审时态抓要点遣词造句连词成句，连句成篇修改润色复查全文1.cover all the language points and given information.
avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling4.well-connected, tight, logical ，clear. 3. beautiful language: beautiful phrases, expressions & structures, advanced vocabulary 5. the beautiful handwritingPay Attention A good composition should : Don’t use masses of “ands”, “buts”, “ors”, etc.
Use the fewest words
to say the most 1.She likes sports very much.
1.be fond of 2. go in for 3.be interested in 4.enjoy She is fond of sports.
She goes in for sports.
She is interested in sports.
She enjoys sports.
3.We all think he is a great man.think highly of him .2. I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to / struck /
came to / hit me.I came up with a good idea.4. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.5、You will find my house easily. You’ll have no trouble/difficulty (in) finding my house.
运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。1. When he heard the news, he jumped with joy..（使用V-ing形式）.
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）
3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用with结构)
, he jumped with joy. is that the little girl knows so many things.On hearing the newsWhat surprises himHe came in , with a baby in his arms.4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用非谓语） It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that ，he can’t get in touch with Mary. Not knowing his telephone number he knew what had happened.Tom likes singing songs, Mary.so does5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.( 使用倒装）7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) by many students, she walked out of the lab. , a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. he spoke, excited he felt.FollowedThe more the moreThe weather being fine8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.（使用the more…the more句型结构）9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to climb the Western hill. （使用独立主格结构）
1. _______________(据我所知), everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.
2. People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. ______________________
__________,(另外) they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.As far as I know3. There are many advantages of smiling. It can _________make us happy, _________ please others（不但……而且）.
4. Li Ming used to be a healthy boy, ___ （但是）over a year ago, he got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks. _______, （另外）he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and did little exercise. ___________, （结果）he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs. As a result not onlybut alsobutBesides5. I think it is a kind or win-win activity. ____________, （一方面）I can help take care of the children. _______________ , （另一方面）I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.For another thing For one thing6. One can keep fit in the following ways. ______,（首先） one should keep a balanced diet. _______,（其次） one is to exercise regularly. ______, （再次）one is to get rid of bad habits, such as drinking and smoking. _________________, （最后但同样很重要的是）make sure to be always in a good mood. And last but not leastFirstlySecondlyThirdly7. _________________(总之), let’s greet every day with a smile. In short / In a word8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _____________ ,(更糟糕的是) it may make us fat. What’s worse
I think the Internet is helpful not harmful as someone else thinks. We all know that the Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news and get much information. We can send E-mails or make phone calls to our family.We can attend the net school, read many books and even teach ourselves English. …In my opinionrather thanAs we all know is playing a more and more important roleUse better phrases to replace the common ones.Improve the passagenot only but also Besides wePractice Time写作练习 假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；
3.希望获准。 1.Cross question(审题)2.Seize major points3.Words and phrases4.Sentences5.Correct mistakesStyleTensePersonThe steps for writingAn application letterPresent TenseThe First PersonStructureBeginning (purpose)Body ( a.Self-introduction
b.The intention ) Ending
( the reply )1) Purpose
Step 2 抓 要 点(Seize the major points)Major points 假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）
3.希望获准。 2) Self -introduction3) The intention4) The hope for the reply The source of the information
(from the Internet )
Step 3 遣词造句(words and phrases)3. 夏令营2. 互联网the Internetthe summer camp1. 申请apply for sth/doing sth4. 欢迎各国学生参加welcome students from different counties5. 对……感兴趣be interested in6. 擅长于be good at ; do well in ; be expert in ; be skilled at 10. 期望look forward to ; expect to ; be eager to ; hope to 9. 了解learn about8. 介绍中国tell sb about Chinamaster…well ;
have a good knowledge of ;
have a good command of 7. 精通，掌握Step 4 连词成句， 连句成篇（conjunctions）Useful sentence patterns for an application letterThe beginning12. I have learned from the newspaper that your company wanted a …and I am very interested in it.3. Having known that your company needs a … I would like to apply for the post.1. I am writing to apply for the position that you have advertised in the newspaper ．I am interested in it.
The ending Don’t forget to use various grammar structures and some linking verbs .1. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.2. I will appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply. 3. I am looking forward to receiving your reply.
Show TimeDear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for __________(申请职位) that you have advertised ________(来源) ．I am interested in it.
To briefly introduce myself, I am ________ from ________.As a/an ________， I have been learning________. What’s more, I will be able to __________and _____________as well.
I will appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Name
14.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些? 13.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗? 12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构? 11.简单句表达正确吗? 10.有没有词性的错误?哪一种? 9.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗? 8.有没有语态的错误? 7.注意主谓一致了吗? 6.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态? 5. 有单词拼写错误吗?几个? 4. 将文章分段了吗?分成了几段? 3.有没有注意标点符号? 2.句子开头注意大小写了吗? 1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划?他评自评项 目 书面表达评价表Part 2
BodyPart1 Beginning
Part3 Ending
Reason1Reason2Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.
I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. I am looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Hua
语意要合情合理，过渡自然 语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安语法要结构正确，无懈可击语言要地道流畅，书写规范 假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知BMB公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，要点如下：
1.年龄；
2.学习情况；
3.兴趣和特长；
4.性格特点；Homework Practice makes perfect