Unit 1 The world of our senses A Guide to the Writing of a Comic Strip 看图写作指导课件（25张）
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课件25张PPT。Welcome to our class!“让学生参与课程建构”市级观摩课A Guide to the Writing of a Comic StripBy Shao Yujinfrom Hongze Middle School of Jiangsu Province“让学生参与课程建构”市级观摩课
（2017-04-07）By the end of this class, we will be able to learn how to Learning aims◆tell a story through a comic strip
◆write a story through a comic strip A story ― foga woman lost in the fog was helped by an old mana woman and an old manone afternoona foggy cityhow she could get homethe old man was blindLead-ina plotmain charactersa certain time perioda placea problem to be solveda climax or a surprise endingLead-inHow to read a storystorya plot (故事情节)main charactersa certain time perioda placea problem to be solveda climax or a surprise endingsixWe should find outimportant elementsHow to plot a storyPlot 1. Start2. Body3. EndingWho? Where? When? Why?What? How? (Background & the main characters)(Problems experienced by the characters)(Solutions to the problems)The chain of events in a story is called the plot. How to tell a storyBy using pictures & words in the following four forms:speech bubblesthought bubblessound bubblescaptionPresentationA story ―A little bird in the cage was set free by the little boy’s grandpaA little boy and his grandpaOne Sunday & One MondayAt homeHow he could make the bird in the cage happyThe bird was set freePresentationa plotmain charactersa certain time perioda placea problem to be solveda climax or a surprise endingA Little bird in the cagefeed the bird, in the cage, unhappy,enough food and water,whyon one’s way to school see many birds,think offly in the skypersuade sb. to do sth.set the bird free Birds also need friends! 小鸟也需要
朋友！agree to do sth., set free,happy,fly awayLet’s describe the comic strip as a whole. PresentationOne Sunday morning, a little boy and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy though it had enough food and water. The boy did not know why.
The next morning on his way to school, the boy saw many birds flying in the sky. Then he thought of the lonely bird in the cage. He decided to persuade his grandpa to set the bird free.
When he got home, he said to his grandpa, “Birds also need friends!” To his delight, his grandpa agreed.
The bird was set free. Grandpa and the children were very happy to see the bird flying away into the sky.
My version 假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2017年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。 警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见的情景。根据以下图画写出报告。Self-practice 注意：1．目击者应该准确报告事实；2．词数100左右；
3．结尾已为你写好。
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. A show timeAppreciation of the classmates’ work好词：
关联词语层面、用词变化层面
好句：
高级句型层面：定从、状从、名从、强调、
倒装、省略、虚拟语气等2. Choices of the vocabulary & sentences
[遣词造句]1. Layout of the version
[谋篇布局] 是否分段，分段是否合理Criteria (标准，条件)It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2017. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when?an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the?road. He fell with a cry. The car didn't stop but drove off with great speed heading west. I noticed the driver?was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.?
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Li Hua
? ???????????????????????????????????????????One possible version一审二写三连四改Summary◆一审：审题立意。
看清题目要求，读懂题目，知道题目要我干什么。
◆二写：逐图写纲。
如果是一幅图，一般要列五到六个要点；如果是多幅图，每一幅图也至少要列一到两个要点。切记：不要列与图画无关的要点。
◆三连：连句成文。
注意使用正确的时态与人称；句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间运用适当的关联词语。
◆四改：修改定稿。
完成后，把作文通读一遍，把不应该错的地方改正（如单词拼写、时态、主谓一致、人称、语序、格式），加些润色全文的句子等。Homework1. Prepare a short story with a clear plot and
tell the story.2. Add four kinds of bubbles or captions to
the comic strip and write an English story. Wish you all the best！plum blossomWelcome to Hongze!I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground. I quickly ran over to help her up and asked her what was wrong with her. She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble. I was worried and decided to take her to a hospital. And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contacted her family. Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital. They thanked and praised me for my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter. Although I was late for school today, I felt very proud of what I had done.The key to the homework
（2017-04-07）By the end of this class, we will be able to learn how to Learning aims◆tell a story through a comic strip
◆write a story through a comic strip A story ― foga woman lost in the fog was helped by an old mana woman and an old manone afternoona foggy cityhow she could get homethe old man was blindLead-ina plotmain charactersa certain time perioda placea problem to be solveda climax or a surprise endingLead-inHow to read a storystorya plot (故事情节)main charactersa certain time perioda placea problem to be solveda climax or a surprise endingsixWe should find outimportant elementsHow to plot a storyPlot 1. Start2. Body3. EndingWho? Where? When? Why?What? How? (Background & the main characters)(Problems experienced by the characters)(Solutions to the problems)The chain of events in a story is called the plot. How to tell a storyBy using pictures & words in the following four forms:speech bubblesthought bubblessound bubblescaptionPresentationA story ―A little bird in the cage was set free by the little boy’s grandpaA little boy and his grandpaOne Sunday & One MondayAt homeHow he could make the bird in the cage happyThe bird was set freePresentationa plotmain charactersa certain time perioda placea problem to be solveda climax or a surprise endingA Little bird in the cagefeed the bird, in the cage, unhappy,enough food and water,whyon one’s way to school see many birds,think offly in the skypersuade sb. to do sth.set the bird free Birds also need friends! 小鸟也需要
朋友！agree to do sth., set free,happy,fly awayLet’s describe the comic strip as a whole. PresentationOne Sunday morning, a little boy and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy though it had enough food and water. The boy did not know why.
The next morning on his way to school, the boy saw many birds flying in the sky. Then he thought of the lonely bird in the cage. He decided to persuade his grandpa to set the bird free.
When he got home, he said to his grandpa, “Birds also need friends!” To his delight, his grandpa agreed.
The bird was set free. Grandpa and the children were very happy to see the bird flying away into the sky.
My version 假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2017年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。 警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见的情景。根据以下图画写出报告。Self-practice 注意：1．目击者应该准确报告事实；2．词数100左右；
3．结尾已为你写好。
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. A show timeAppreciation of the classmates’ work好词：
关联词语层面、用词变化层面
好句：
高级句型层面：定从、状从、名从、强调、
倒装、省略、虚拟语气等2. Choices of the vocabulary & sentences
[遣词造句]1. Layout of the version
[谋篇布局] 是否分段，分段是否合理Criteria (标准，条件)It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2017. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when?an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the?road. He fell with a cry. The car didn't stop but drove off with great speed heading west. I noticed the driver?was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.?
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Li Hua
? ???????????????????????????????????????????One possible version一审二写三连四改Summary◆一审：审题立意。
看清题目要求，读懂题目，知道题目要我干什么。
◆二写：逐图写纲。
如果是一幅图，一般要列五到六个要点；如果是多幅图，每一幅图也至少要列一到两个要点。切记：不要列与图画无关的要点。
◆三连：连句成文。
注意使用正确的时态与人称；句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间运用适当的关联词语。
◆四改：修改定稿。
完成后，把作文通读一遍，把不应该错的地方改正（如单词拼写、时态、主谓一致、人称、语序、格式），加些润色全文的句子等。Homework1. Prepare a short story with a clear plot and
tell the story.2. Add four kinds of bubbles or captions to
the comic strip and write an English story. Wish you all the best！plum blossomWelcome to Hongze!I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground. I quickly ran over to help her up and asked her what was wrong with her. She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble. I was worried and decided to take her to a hospital. And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contacted her family. Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital. They thanked and praised me for my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter. Although I was late for school today, I felt very proud of what I had done.The key to the homework