Unit 1 The world of our senses Task(2)How to develop your wrting better课件（26张）
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课件26张PPT。How to develop your writing better 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂） 1.覆盖了所有的要点
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？The structure of a good writing整体三部分Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性
2. Body
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
The skills to make your writing better1.Using advanced words and phrases1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
2.We all think he is a great man.
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books.
5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.1.Using advanced words and phrasesWe all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
7. She went to Austria in order to study music.
8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.
9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.
10.You can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.You’ll have no trouble finding my house. 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）
3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句)
4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)
5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 1 Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)
7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)
8.I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句）
9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
10．He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I won’t believe. Study hard ,and you’ll make rapid progress.2. Using various sentence structures
1. 感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I
received your letter!
What a kind boy he is!
How disappointed he was !
2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that
helped the old granny.
I do hope you can come if
possible.3、? 倒装句 e.g.
Only in this way can you solve this problem.
There comes the police car.
Hardly had they got to the station
when they met the young man.
4、? 省略句 e.g.
They read while walking or riding on a bus.
Come to me if necessary.
5、? with短语 e.g.
I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. 6、? 定语从句 e.g.
In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
7、? 各种名词性从句 e.g.
That’s what I should do.
We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.
8、? 各种状语从句 e.g.
Time passed quickly before we knew it.
The moment we reached the farm, we
got down to harvesting.
So long as we work harder at our lessons,
we’ll catch up sooner or later.
Do call me before hand so that I can meet
you at the airport.
They had to wait because the rain was
getting more and more heavily.
3. Using proper conjunctions
*?表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容
另外，还有：what is more; besides;
also; moreover; in addition
*表示转折关系
但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet;
instead; on the other hand;
on the contrary.*表示因果关系
因为，因此，所以: since; as; because
(of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result;
*表示条件关系
如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that );
as long as
除非: unless 否则: or else
?*表示时间关系
当… 的时候 : when ; while
在…之后: after 在…之前: before
直到: until
一…就… : as soon as
后来， 然后: later; afterwards
不久: soon 近来: lately; recently
自从… :since 从那时起: from then on*表示特定的顺序关系
首先， 最主要的: above all
其次: secondly 然后: then; next
最后: finally; in the end
*换一种方法表述
换句话说: in other words;
that is to say;
*进行举例说明
例如，比如: for instance; for example;
like; such as
＊用于陈述事实
实际上: in fact; actually;
as a matter of fact
跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth
* 对一个话题进行总结
总而言之，总的来说:
on the whole; in short; all in all;
in general; in a word
* 其它常用到的副词
therefore ; otherwise ; finally ;
thus ; namely ;
although ; afterwards ; personally;
Practice 2
Fill in the blanks with proper conjunctions or phrases to make the sentences complete.
Xiao Ming was walking in the street
___________ he heard someone cry for help.
2. He advised that I hire a car ____________
I could travel around in the west .
3. It was not long _______ the police came .
___________he heard the cry for help, he
jumped into the water to save the girl.
whenin order thatbeforeAs soon as 5. Do you agree with my arrangement ?
________ , do write to me soon.
6. We can go downtown and do some
shopping. __________, we can pay a
visit to some places of interest.
I shared the cost of the gas with my
friends .___________, I saved $80.
8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. ___________ , it may make us fat.If not/soIn additionAs a resultWhat’s worseHomework
Polish up the given letter by rewriting the underlined sentences or adding proper conjunctions to make it better.
欢迎你的光临请留下宝贵建议 Bye-bye!Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④ live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here.⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education. ⑩ May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast. ④ People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.
In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and the newly built teaching building ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education.
⑩ May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you.
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？The structure of a good writing整体三部分Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性
2. Body
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
The skills to make your writing better1.Using advanced words and phrases1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
2.We all think he is a great man.
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books.
5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.1.Using advanced words and phrasesWe all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
7. She went to Austria in order to study music.
8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.
9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.
10.You can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.You’ll have no trouble finding my house. 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）
3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句)
4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)
5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 1 Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)
7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)
8.I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句）
9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
10．He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I won’t believe. Study hard ,and you’ll make rapid progress.2. Using various sentence structures
1. 感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I
received your letter!
What a kind boy he is!
How disappointed he was !
2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that
helped the old granny.
I do hope you can come if
possible.3、? 倒装句 e.g.
Only in this way can you solve this problem.
There comes the police car.
Hardly had they got to the station
when they met the young man.
4、? 省略句 e.g.
They read while walking or riding on a bus.
Come to me if necessary.
5、? with短语 e.g.
I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. 6、? 定语从句 e.g.
In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
7、? 各种名词性从句 e.g.
That’s what I should do.
We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.
8、? 各种状语从句 e.g.
Time passed quickly before we knew it.
The moment we reached the farm, we
got down to harvesting.
So long as we work harder at our lessons,
we’ll catch up sooner or later.
Do call me before hand so that I can meet
you at the airport.
They had to wait because the rain was
getting more and more heavily.
3. Using proper conjunctions
*?表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容
另外，还有：what is more; besides;
also; moreover; in addition
*表示转折关系
但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet;
instead; on the other hand;
on the contrary.*表示因果关系
因为，因此，所以: since; as; because
(of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result;
*表示条件关系
如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that );
as long as
除非: unless 否则: or else
?*表示时间关系
当… 的时候 : when ; while
在…之后: after 在…之前: before
直到: until
一…就… : as soon as
后来， 然后: later; afterwards
不久: soon 近来: lately; recently
自从… :since 从那时起: from then on*表示特定的顺序关系
首先， 最主要的: above all
其次: secondly 然后: then; next
最后: finally; in the end
*换一种方法表述
换句话说: in other words;
that is to say;
*进行举例说明
例如，比如: for instance; for example;
like; such as
＊用于陈述事实
实际上: in fact; actually;
as a matter of fact
跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth
* 对一个话题进行总结
总而言之，总的来说:
on the whole; in short; all in all;
in general; in a word
* 其它常用到的副词
therefore ; otherwise ; finally ;
thus ; namely ;
although ; afterwards ; personally;
Practice 2
Fill in the blanks with proper conjunctions or phrases to make the sentences complete.
Xiao Ming was walking in the street
___________ he heard someone cry for help.
2. He advised that I hire a car ____________
I could travel around in the west .
3. It was not long _______ the police came .
___________he heard the cry for help, he
jumped into the water to save the girl.
whenin order thatbeforeAs soon as 5. Do you agree with my arrangement ?
________ , do write to me soon.
6. We can go downtown and do some
shopping. __________, we can pay a
visit to some places of interest.
I shared the cost of the gas with my
friends .___________, I saved $80.
8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. ___________ , it may make us fat.If not/soIn additionAs a resultWhat’s worseHomework
Polish up the given letter by rewriting the underlined sentences or adding proper conjunctions to make it better.
欢迎你的光临请留下宝贵建议 Bye-bye!Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④ live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here.⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education. ⑩ May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast. ④ People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.
In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and the newly built teaching building ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education.
⑩ May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you.