课件37张PPT。How to correct a composition 短文改错
Proof Reading 高考短文改错的短文通常只有110个词左右,文体多为第一/三人称记叙文、应用文(以书信为主)。所选取的语言材料贴近实际生活,多为考生所熟知,且话题贴近学生,有的带点幽默,有的包含教育意义。文字浅显易懂,材料中没有生僻、超纲的词汇;句子结构简单,基本上是简单句和并不复杂的复合句;语言地道,符合英语语言习惯。各种错误所占比例为命题特点 1.“规范性”原则:要严格按照示范规定的符号改错。要记住“——”、“∧”、“”分别表示错词纠正、缺词填补、多词删除。切忌用文字说明或用箭头表示。
2.“四不改”原则:①单词拼写不改;②大小写不改;③词序错误不改(应从错词或少词方面考虑);④标点符号不改。
3.“四改动”原则:①忠实于原文原则(不可改变原文的原意);②错误以改动最少为原则;③虚词以添加或者删除为原则;④实词以改变形式为原则。答题原则屠呦呦宁泽涛二胎Warming up1 mistakeChina is to end the one-child policy, allowing couples to have two child.children1 mistakeNing Zetao wins a gold medal for China in August, 2015.won1 mistakeCongratulations to Tu Youyou on win the Nobel Prize in Medicine.winning常考的考点一、冠词
二、谓语动词
三、非谓语动词
四、名词数
五、形容词、副词
六、代词
七、介词和固定搭配
八、复合句连词、疑问词
九、逻辑【2015 新课标全国I】
but I miss my home in countryside.
【2015 新课标全国II】
A woman saw him crying and told him to wait outside a shop.
【2014 新课标全国I】
As result, the plants are growing somewhere.
【2014 新课标全国II】
There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.
【2014 辽宁】
Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day . 一、冠词∨thethe∨aan二、动词形 【2015·新课标全国I】
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.
Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very serious problem.
We must found ways to protect your environment.
【2015·新课标全国II】
Tony was scared and begun to cry.
If they will give me some information I will tell you.
thoughtfindbegan提醒:在含有时间、条件状语从句的复合句中,
主句用将来时态,从句中则用一般现在时态【2014新课标全国II】
My dream school look like a big garden.
【2014全国卷大纲版】
The understanding between two friends mean both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other.
looksmeans动名词,不定式或从句做主语谓语动词用单数。 Many a student have this kind of phone.
Every man and every woman have such a good chance.
hashas提醒:主语有every; many a; each或no 修饰或被这些词修饰的并列成分做主语谓语用单数。三、非谓语,细辨别【2015 新课标全国II】
After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.
【2015 浙江】
I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.
[【2015 四川】
I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.
lookingsitting∧tosinging【2012陕西】
I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Bingjing.
【2013四川】
Mary, my best friend asked me to let her to copy my answers.
taken解决方案 除了并列谓语的存在,一个句子只能有一个谓语动词,如出现其他动词就必需转化成非谓语。
to do 表将来的主动动作。
done 被动,完成
doing 主动,进行
【2015·新课标全国II】
A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside the shop
提醒:看动词是充当谓语还是非谓语
told四、名词数【2015 新课标全国I】
The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier
【2015 新课标全国II】
One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.
A group of sheeps are eating grass and leaves at the foot of the hill.
The book will give you all the informations you need.
airparentssheepinformation单复数同形:fish; deer; sheep; means; Chinese; Japanese等不可数:furniture ;fun;homework;paper;news;progress;trouble;advice; information; work(工作); equipment等可数名词单数形式不单独使用,要么用复数要么前面加冠词 In their opinions, they should have more holidays.
记清一些用于固定词组中名词的特殊用法如:
in one’s opinion
keep one’s word
take measures to do sth.
take action to do sth.opinion五、还要注意形和副 【2015 新课标全国I】
Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.
Much rare animals are dying out
【2015 新课标全国II】
Dad and I were terrible worried.
【2013浙江】
I am awfully tiring.
【2012全国新课标】
I learned that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.
seriousMany terriblytired less解决方案
1.在系动词(be;感官系动词;become; go;
turn等)后要常用形容词做表语。修饰名词也用形容词。
2.修饰动词,形容词或整个句子用副词
3.关注比较级和最高级的使用。Unfortunate,there are too many people in my family. Unfortunatelyfortunately,luckily,obviously,naturally,interestingly【2013浙江】
I tried hardly to do it.hard六、 代词格,细领悟1. 人称代词主格和宾格,物主代词的使用.
2.反身代词oneself?的使用.
3. 不定代词的使用.
4. both,all,either,neither,none的使用.Imeweusyouyouyouyouhehimsheheritittheythemyoursminehishersitsoursyourstheirs
【2014辽宁】
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter
【 2012浙江】
I knew that they would be worried about myself.
yourme【2013 四川】
I let her copy my answers . But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office.
【2012 重庆】
I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it.boththem[考点剖析]
此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面:
1)? 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误.
2)? “it” 一词的不当使用(包括用于从句中或作形式主语或宾语).
3)? 不定代词或反身代词的误用.
七、介词、短语要记住. 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识,错误表现形式主要有多词、少词和搭配错误。【2015 新课标全国II】
Tony saw a toy on a shop window.
【2015 新课标全国I】
Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.
【2014 新课标全国I】
We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music.
inwith∨to 【2015 四川】
Please help with me and give me some advice .
I carefully wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forget.八、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语境要选择不同的词语。这些都有待于我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析,才能找出用词不当的错误。【2015 新课标全国II】
he turned around and found where his parents were missing.
【2014四川】
If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately. that或九、逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴,人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误常是这类错误的考查对象。 【2015 新课标全国I】
There the air is clean or the mountains are green.
【2014 浙江】
A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset.
【2013 新课标全国I】
He was the gentlest man I have never know.
andandever
【2015 陕西】
I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.
【2015 四川】
I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. what do you think I should do? somethingbut解决方案:
(1)?培养用英语思维的良好习惯,避免汉语影响.
(2)??分析句子成分,把握句子结构 .
(3) 结合上下文,完整领会短文内容 .【解题步骤】1 浏览全文,掌握大意2 分句阅读,逐句找错3 检查核对,攻克难点4 规范答题 不留空白短篇练习At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
They put them in the corner of the sitting
____on_________chose_______tall_______it动词形介词短语常常考,习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格,细领悟高考英语短文改错模拟训练room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
really beautifully at the moment. There was
a fire burn in the fire place, but the Christmas
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim or his
\_______lights_____________beautiful动词形还要注意形和副名词数逻辑错误须关注and非谓语,细辨别burningparents singing and dancing happily.∧were动词形Dear?Alice,
I?have?just?got?some?good?news?to?
tell?to?you.???? I?win?a?national?prize?for?painting?last?week.????????? My?father?was?so?pleasing?that?he?
suggested????????? I?went?to?England?for?a?holiday.?I’d?like?to?staying?????? there?for?half?a?month,?visiting?
place?of?interest?????? or?practicing?my?English?as?well.?
We’ve?been???????? wonpleasedstayplacesandgowriting?to?each?for?nearly?a?year?now.?I?have????????? often?dreamed?of?talk?face?to?
face?with?you.?????????????? I?imagine?you’ll?be?at?vacation?
yourself?by?that??????? time.?Perhaps?we?could?go?out?to?do?some?sightseeing?
together.??????????????????????
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