课件54张PPT。Writing a composition-Body construction书面表达
每位同学都希望自己具有良好的人际关系,成为班级中受欢迎的人,请你以“being a Popular Student”为题写一篇英语短文,参加学校网站的讨论。Identification explanation conclusion and division 破 析 立Identification What kind of person can be
called “popular”?
Do they have some characteristics? Being popularExplanationThree aspactsFor oneselfHow can we make our body paragraph rich in contents? Varied expressionsFor class… responsiblebe responsible for/to do
take on/claim/assume responsibilities for
have s sense of responsibilities
It is our duty to do sth.
do one’s duty for
take charge of
in charge of
keep sth in mind Detailed information For ourselves…
Eg. We should be strict with ourselves.We ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to build up our personality.To achieve all-round development, we are good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music,painting, social service and so on. Think : for others …
We should respect and care about others.Try to give more detailed examples. Writing an outline书面表达:(2014年高考 重庆卷)
青少年研究专家Susan Beacham 在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏邀请大家分享心目中的“最好的礼物”。她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,回应这个话题。
Tips The Best Gift
What gift do you consider as the best gift ?
What value does the gift have?
What is the meaning behind the gift?
Thank You !To design a new advertisement for your company’s Chocoloco Bar,a kind of chocolate barStepsI (don’t) think/believe…
It seems to me that…
In my opinion/ To me,…How to state opinions?eg. I think packages are important they attract the customers’attention.sinceasbecauseIf more than one reason, try as followings:1.First,…second,…then…
2.To start with,… next,… finally…
(to begin with)
3.For one thing,…for another thing,…
4.The most important is…, then,…in addition,… last but not least,…
What aspects should be included in an advertisement?What do you think about advertisements?
What aspects should be included in an advertisement?
How to read these statistics:
*Fractions:
1/5 (one fifth) 2/3 (two thirds)
? (three quarters) 2? (two and one half)
How to read:
2/5 _________ 4? ___________________two fifthsfour and three quartersStep 2 descriptions of statistics*decimals:
0.3 (zero/nought point three)
6.79 (six point seven nine)
How to read:
0.9 ________________ 24.15________________zero point ninetwenty-four point one five*percentages
63%(sixty-three per cent)
45.72%(forty-five point seven two per cent)
How to read:
27.35%
__________________________________twenty-seven point three five per centListening:10.5200012.519.5 15242005Listen to the announcement and complete the bar chart.
Director: Good morning, ladies and
gentlemen. We’re here today
to talk about the number of the
ChocoLoco Bars we have sold
over the years.
The ChocoLoco Bar was first
sold in nineteen ninety. We did
quite well in the first year:Listening textten point five per cent of the people buying chocolate bars bought the ChocoLoco Bar. However, this was still below what we had expected. In nineteen ninety-five, we started selling the chocolate bar in a new package. The results were good: the number of people buying ChocoLoco Bar rose by two per cent. The figures for the year2000 stayed the same as those for 1995. In the year 2005, we began using a famous actress inour advertisements. This had a good result, and the number of people buying the ChocoLoco Bar increased to fifteen per cent. We continued using this actress in our advertisements and on our packages. In 2010, nineteen point five per cent of the people buying chocolate bars bought the ChocoLoco Bar. We hope that this increase will continue, and in 2015, we expect it to rise to twenty-four per cent.
Thank you for your attention.the number of people buying ChocoLoco Bar rose by two per cent.
The figures for the year2000 stayed the same as those for 1995.
The number of people buying the ChocoLoco Bar increased to fifteen per cent.
in 2015, we expect it to rise to twenty-four per cent.
Describing statistics:an increase: an increase of, increase/rise by, etc
a decrease: a decrease of, decrease/fall by, etc
no change: no change, remain/stay the same, etcTelling and using different sentence typesHere are some famous advertisements and different sentence types. Try to do a match. No?business?too?small,?
no?problem?too?big.(IBM corporation)
Shift the future.(Nissan)
Everything is possible.(Li Ning)
Would you like to participate? (OLAY)
How delicious! (Nestle)Questions
Commands
Negative statement
Positive statement
Exclamations It’s your turn!Here are sentences in your homework, try to do some revisions. Use different sentence types. Final stepStep 1Step 2Step 3Step 4Expressing opinions of advertisementsCalculating information and completing a bar chartUsing different sentence typesWriting an advertisementOutline 1.you can never imagine how
.
2. The delicious Chocoloco Bars are made up of
. So they have the fun_ction that
3.Almost everyone who has tried them has an impression that
4.The price is
5. Where can you find them? They are so easily available in You can never imagine how delicious chocolate bars can be if you have never had a ChocoLoco chocolate bar. Only the best quality coco beans from Mexico and the freshest milk from China are used to make the delicious ChocoLocoPossible versionchocolate bars. Because it is low in fat, it is also a good choice for anyone trying to lose weight. Almost everyone who has tried it loves it! ChocoLoco chocolate bar is of high quality and average price, available in all supermarkets around China now.Homework Revise your advertisement of chocoloco bar.
Review the uesful expressions
and phrases of statistics and giving reasons.Thank You !Thank You !DiagramDiagramDiagramAdd Your TextAdd Your TextAdd Your TextAdd Your
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