(共24张PPT)
Character Writing
人物写作
y 肖雪 Celine
基础写作指导
George Bernard Shaw——a famous playwright
他是一位著名的剧作家,于1856年出生于
爱尔兰的都柏林;
他的第一部戏剧《鳏夫的房产》
(Widowers’ House)创作于1892年;
3. 《卖花女》(Pygmalion)是他最著名
的戏剧之一,此剧的电影剧本使他获得
了奥斯卡奖;
4. 1925年他荣获诺贝尔文学奖, 他是唯一一个
荣获奥斯卡奖和诺贝尔奖的人;
5. 1950年,他逝世于英国家中,享年94;
学生作品鉴赏
(梁晓燕)
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The Magical Wands (魔法棒)
of Character Writing
the infinite verbs(非谓语)
with结构
clauses (the attributive clause, the object clause)
同位语(appositive)
固定句式(fixed sentences)
同位语appositive
1.徐悲鸿是一位著名的画家,他从9岁起开始从父学
画。
Xu Beihong is a famous painter.
He began to learn drawing from his father at the
age of 9.
2. 博尔特是一位著名的运动员,他于1986年8月21日
出生在牙买加(Jamaica).
Usain Bolt is a famous athlete.
He was born on August 21st,1986 in Jamaica.
Xu Beihong, a famous painter, began to learn
drawing from his father at the age of 9.
Usain Bolt, a famous athlete, was born on
August 21st,1986 in Jamaica.
Practice
The Mid-Autumn Day falls on the fifteenth day
of August of the lunar calendar every year. It is a
traditional festival with a long history in China.
The Mid-Autumn day,__________________________
______________,falls on the fifteenth day of August of
the lunar calendar every year.
a traditional festival with a long
history in China
Practice
2. The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first
lunar month every year. It is the most energetic and
traditional festival in China.
The Spring Festival,____________________________
______________, falls on the first day of the first lunar
month every year.
the most energetic and traditional
festival in China
with 结构
我的历史老师是一位漂亮的女人,
长着一头长发和一对大眼睛。
My history teacher is a beautiful
woman. She has long hair and
big eyes.
My history teacher is a beautiful
woman, with long hair and big
eyes.
Practice
1.这是一个漂亮小女孩,长着一对智慧的眼睛和长长的浓密
的睫毛。
This is a beautiful child,________________________
and_____________________.
2.这个罪犯是看起来很老,宽宽的下巴,额头上还
有一道疤痕。
This criminal appeared to be old, _________________
and_____________________.
3. 在我眼里,科比是最棒的篮球员,长着强壮的
肌肉。
In my eyes, Colby is the best basketball player with
strong muscles.
with a pair of intelligent eyes
long and thick eyelashes
with a square jaw
a scar on his forehead
从句——定语从句(the Attributive Clause)
他是世界跳水冠军(champion),出生于1986年8月
21日。
Bolt was a world champion in diving
He was born on August 21, 1986.
2. 刘翔是110米跨栏(110-meter hurdle)的世界冠军,
身高1.89米,体重87公斤。
Liu Xiang is a world champion in the 110-meter
hurdle .
Liu Xiang is 1.89 meters tall and 87 kg in weight.
Step one 找相同的名词性的成分
Bolt was a world champion in diving
He was born on August 21, 1986.
Step Two 确定被修饰成分
Bolt he was born on August 21, 1986 was a world
champion in diving.
Step Three 将从句中的相同成分去掉,用关系词
代替
Bolt was born on August 21, 1986 was a
world champion in diving.
who
Liu Xiang is a world champion in the 110-meter
hurdle .
Liu Xiang is 1.89 meters tall and 87 kg in weight.
Liu Xiang who is a world champion in the 110-
meter hurdle is 1.89 meters tall and 87 kg in
weight.
Liu Xiang who is 1.89 meters tall and 87kg in weight is a world champion in the 110-meter hurdle.
Practice
我们的英语老师叫Bruce,他对学生很严格。
Our English teacher is called Bruce, who is strict
with his students.
Non Clauses名词性从句
值得一提的是, 他是第一位在世锦赛(世锦赛)上
拿到冠军的中国人。
What’s worth mentioning is that he is the first Chinese
to win the first prize in the world championship.
What’s worth mentioning is that …值得一提的是
What’s worth noticing is that …值得注意的是
It means that …这意味着…
The subject clause(主语从句)
The predictive clause表语从句
非谓语nonfinite verbs——past participle
过去分词
Born in August, 1958, Michael began to perform
with his four brothers as a member of “The
Jackson 5” in his childhood.
Born in/on …, 主语+谓语
Considered as the hero of the nation, Liu Xiang is
admired and respected by many people.
Considered as…,主语+谓语
Practice
李 时珍出生于1518年,是一位中国历史上著名的医学家(medical scientist)。
Born in 1518, Li Shizhen was a famous medical
scientist in Chinese history.
2. 宫崎骏(Hayao Miyazaki)被认为是世界上最伟大
的卡通片绘制者(animator),他绘制了很多非常好
的动画片。
Considered the world’s greatest animator, he drew
many good cartoons.
Usain Bolt was born on August 21, 1986. Usain Bolt was a
world champion in diving.
用非谓语(infinite verbs)美化
Born on August 21, 1986, Usain Bolt was a world champion in
diving.
B. 用同位语(appositive)美化
Usain Bolt, a world champion in diving, was born on
August 21, 1986.
B. 用定语从句(the attributive clause)美化
Usain Bolt was a world champion who was born on August 21,
1986.
美化句子
Practice
同位语 定语从句 with结构 非谓语
Bruce,我们的英语老师,出生于1982年,是位英国人,
又高又瘦,戴着一副眼镜。
Bruce, our English teacher, who was born in 1982, is a
tall and thin Englishman with a pair of glasses.
Born in 1982, Bruce , our English teacher, who is tall
and thin person with a pair of glasses.
Character Writing
How many parts should the writing include?
What kind of information should we write in each part?
the birthplace
the time of birth
Appearance
Personality(性格)
general introduction
education
great events in his/her life
Evaluation and the date of death
教育背景(education)
be admitted to …university被录取到……大学
graduate from …university从某大学毕业
receive/get a master’s/doctor’s degree获取…学位
go abroad for further studies 出国深造
major in 主修
Graduate from…,majoring in毕业于…主修…
巴拉克·奥巴马 (Barack Obama )毕业于哈佛法学院
(Harvard Law School ),主修法律。
Barack Obama graduated from Harvard Law School,
majoring in law.
1991年,巴拉克·奥巴马 (Barack Obama )获得了哈
佛法学院的博士学位。
Barack Obama received a doctor’s degree from
Harvard Law School in 1991.
评价(evaluation)
famous/well-known at home and abroad国内外著名的
make great achievement in 在…取得很大成就
speak highly of…/be spoken highly of (被)高度赞扬be honoured as…被誉为/被尊为……
make great contributions to为…作出巨大贡献
1.冯齐伟为中山一中作出了很大的贡献。
Feng Qiwei has made great contribution to Zhong
Shan No.1 Middle School.
2. 莎士比亚被誉为最伟大的剧作家。
Shakespeare is honoured as the greatest playwright.
学生作品鉴赏
Do you know a famous playwright, Xiao Bona, who was born in Ireland in 1856. The Widowers’ Houses writen in 1892 was his first opera. The Pygmalion that made him get Oscar was one of the most famous opera of his. In 1925, he reward the Alfred Elemhard Nobel. He was only one that have both Oscar and the Alfred Elemhard Nobel among all literary figure. Although he left the earth and went to the heaven when he was 94, he would live our heart forever.
(梁晓燕)
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Rewrite your writing work by using the skills
learnt in the class, and show your work to the whole
class.
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