(共9张PPT)
单元知识运用
教材回扣
用本单元所学短语完成句子
1.I often (与……分享
感受与想法)my classmates after class.?
2. (凭借) his own efforts,he succeeded in getting
the job finished. ?
答案:1.share feelings and ideas with 2.Drawing upon
答案:3.danced to the music 4.All of a sudden 5.give life to
3.Then she came to the United States and 。
(伴着音乐跳舞) of Walter Damrosch’s
orchestra. ?
4. (突然),we heard a familiar
voice singing beautiful harmony in the background. ?
5.Empty spaces (赋予……生命)the whole
painting and allow people to come into the picture.?
Ⅰ.单句语法填空
1.Don’t hesitate to make contact me if you need any
further information.?
2.When you are nervous and tired,you should listen to some (relax)
music.?
3.The beautiful scenery, (combine) with lovely weather and
delicious food,made our visit to Hawaii pleasant and unforgettable.?
4.To the doctor’s (relieve),the patient came to himself. ?
语境活用
答案: 1. with 2. relaxing 3.combined 4.relief
5.Diets are most effective when (combine) with exercise.
6.It (depression) me to see so many young people smoking.
7.His (ambitious) to become a pilot was held back by his
poor eyesight. ?
8.It is such honor and a thrill to be with you this morning. 9.The European Commission says those prices are high, and it hopes
operators will lower them (voluntary).
10.We are most honoured you have taken time to meet with us.
答案:5.combined 6.depresses/depressed 7.ambition 8.an 9.voluntarily 10.that
Ⅱ.单句语法改错
1.Very to her relief, he came home safe and sound at last.
2.Hosting the 32nd Olympics is great honor and the Japanese are
working hard to make the Games a success.
3.As one of the traditional Chinese festivals,the Mid-Autumn
Festival has been enjoyed great popularity in our country.
4.Anson was forced to eat humble pie and public apologise to her. 5.In addition to lack exercise,your diet is also a factor of your
disease.
答案:1.将Very改为Much 2.great前加a 3.将enjoyed改为enjoying 4.将public改为publicly 5.将lack改为lacking
6.The moment when I saw her, I told her the good news.
7.All of sudden, someone grabbed me around the neck.
8.For example, between 1880 and 1900,the monetary base in Italy
actually shrink by 4.8%.
9.You can do it now or later—it’s all the same as me.
10.When combining with berries or slices of other fruits, frozen
bananas make an excellent base for thick, cooling fruit
shakes and low fat “ice cream”. (2018全国Ⅱ,阅读理解B)
答案:6.去掉when 7.sudden前加a 8.将shrink改为shrank 9.将as改为to
10.将combining改为combined
微写作
1.很多音乐家喜欢和别人交往,以便就自己的音乐与他人分享感受与想法。
?
2.音乐家赋予音乐以生命,因此音乐能表达不同的情感。
?
(借助过渡性词语或句子就能把下面的句子连接成一篇小短文)
答案:1.Many musicians love to make contact with other people so that they can share feelings and ideas about their own music.
2.Musicians give life to music, therefore it can express different feelings.
3.有时候一首音乐是为了纪念一个人或一件事而创作。
?
4.无论什么风格的音乐,都是时代的象征。
?
5.在所有音乐中,我最喜欢流行音乐,因为它能在我疲劳的时候让我放松,在我
沮丧的时候给我宽慰。
?
答案:3.Sometimes a piece of music is created in honor of a person or an event.
4.Whatever type of music, it is symbolic of the time.
5.Of all the music, I like pop music best, because it can make me relax when I am tired and give me relief when I am depressed.
(共31张PPT)
Module 4 Music
原文缩写
关键知识
基础知识
原文缩写·再现 巧复现·重记忆
Liu Fang is an international music star.1. (combine) the pipa sounds and the pauses to make a poetry of sound, Liu Fang 2. (give) life to classical Chinese music. ?
Liu Fang’s mother is a Dianju 3. (act).When Liu Fang was a child, her mother took her to performances. In 1996,Liu Fang moved to Canada with her husband and she 4. (live) there since then.
Liu Fang thinks that the biggest challenge is to respect the traditions 5. to add her own style. She enjoys playing and performing in public. She also likes 6. atmosphere in a concert hall and always feels happy when she has a concert.
Liu Fang feels a little 7. (depress)or lonely when there is no concert for a long time. ??
Liu Fang has had opportunities to make contact 8. other musical traditions and play with master musicians. She wishes to continue working with master musicians from other traditions and to be able 9. (compose) her own music, using elements from different cultures. She also wishes to introduce 10. (classic)
Chinese pipa and guzheng music to every corner of the world. ?
答案:1.Combining 2.gives 3.actress 4.has been living 5.but
6.the 7.depressed 8.with 9.to compose 10.classical
1.combine v.结合,联合
关键知识·盘点 解疑难·提智能
典例链接:
①The study of traditions should be combined with practice.
(2018全国Ⅲ,阅读理解C)
对于传统的研究应该与实践相结合。
②The two old schools are to combine to form one big new school.
这两所老学校将合并成一所大规模的新型学校。
③Peking Opera is a combination of music, dance, art and acrobatics.
京剧是一种集音乐、舞蹈、美术和杂技为一体的艺术。
词语辨析:
重点领悟 ①combine...with/and...把……与……结合起来
②combine to do sth.联合起来做某事,合起来促成某事
③be combined with 与……相结合
④a/the combination of...……的组合
join 结合,连接。泛指任何事物的直接连接,连接的程度可紧可松,含“还能够分离”之意。常与介词to连用。
combine 合并,结合。指两个或两个以上的人或事物合在一起,含有“为了一个共同的目的而结合,或结合后仍不改变或失去本性”之意。常与and/with连用。
connect 结合,连接。通过媒介把各种事物连接起来,表示连接两个事物时,相当于join,与to连用。
You should combine your work with relaxation.
你应该把工作和休闲结合起来。
They will build a bridge to join the two villages.
他们将修建一座桥来连接那两个村子。
The company united the two departments.
公司合并了那两个部门。
He can’t connect his computer to the Internet.
他的电脑无法联网。
unite 联合,混合。指紧密结合,使之成为一个整体,含“极难分开”之意。
巧学活用:
①In recent years an English word “infosphere” has appeared,
(combine) the sense of “information” and
“atmosphere”. (2015福建卷)
②The new graduates are advised to combine their knowledge
practice.
③A number of factors have combined (create) this
difficult situation.
combining
to create
with/and
2.regarding prep.关于,对于
典例链接:
①It is a question regarding quality.
那是质量方面的问题。
②With regard to future oil supplies, the situation is uncertain.
关于未来石油供应问题,情况尚不确定。
③He ran into the burning building, without regard to his safety.
他不顾自身安全,冲进燃烧着的大楼。
④Should you happen to see him, please give him my regards.
如果你碰巧见到他,请代我向他致意。
重点领悟 ①with/in regard to关于,至于
②without regard to不考虑……
③give one’s regards to sb./give sb. one’s regards
向……致意;代……向……问候
3.relief n.(痛苦、忧虑等的)解除,减轻,调剂
典例链接:
①It was a relief to know that he had passed the exam.
知道他通过了考试是一件令人宽慰的事情。
②A doctor’s task is to work for the relief of patients’suffering.
医生的工作是解除病人的痛苦。
③To our relief, you came back safe and sound.
你安然无恙地回来了,我们就都放心了。
④When will the students be relieved of the burden?
什么时候才会给学生减负?
⑤Not until we succeed in letting wildlife live in peace, can we
smile in relief.
直到我们成功让野生动植物安详平静地生活,我们自己才能如释重负地笑
开颜。
重点领悟 ①(be) a relief宽慰,安慰;如释重负
②to one’s relief令人感到宽慰的是
③What a relief!谢天谢地!/多么令人欣慰啊!
④relieve sb.of...解除某人……负担
⑤in/with relief 欣慰地?
巧学活用:
① our great relief,the exam turned out to be not so difficult
as we had imagined.
②We all sighed relief when the plane finally landed safely.
③What relief! The difficulty has been overcome by the combined
efforts of the whole team.
④A secretary was hired to relieve her some of the
administrative work.
To
a
of
with/in
4.hono(u)r v.尊敬,敬重;给……以荣誉
n.荣誉;尊敬;敬意
典例链接:
①If you honour somebody, you respect his good fame and look up
to him.
如果你尊重某人,你就是尊重他的好名声并尊敬他。
②I am honored to be asked to speak.
我应邀发言,不胜荣幸。
③It is an honor to have the chance to work with you.
有机会和你共事真是荣幸。
④He had the honour of being presented to the king.
他有幸觐见国王。
⑤The monument is in honor of a scientist.
那座纪念碑是为纪念一位科学家而建的。
重点领悟 ①be/feel honoured (to do sth.)(做某事)感到荣幸?
②in honour of为了纪念……;为了表示对……尊敬
③be an honour to...对……来说是一件荣幸的事/一个荣幸的人
④have the honour of doing sth./to do sth.有幸做某事
巧学活用:
①I have the honour (inform) you that you have got the
first.
②I feel honoured (invite) to give you a lecture on
how to improve English reading ability.
③Washington,a state in the United States,was named honour of
one of the greatest American presidents.
完成句子
④很荣幸有此机会在这里发言。
have this chance to speak here.
⑤能赏光和我跳下一支舞吗?
May I the next dance with you?
to inform
to be invited
in
It is an honour to
have the honour of
5.(be) true of/for与……情况相同;对……也适用
典例链接:
①He needs enough sleep and it is true of you.
他需要充足的睡眠,你也是。
②He remains true to the traditions of his profession.
他一直忠实于他这一行业的传统。
③It must be true that sooner or later, everyone finds his or her
way back to nature. (2017全国Ⅰ,七选五)
每一个人早晚都会找到自己回归自然的路,这一点必定会成为事实。
④His dream will come true sooner or later.
他的理想迟早会实现。
重点领悟 ①be/remain true to sb./sth.忠实于某人,忠实反映某物,恪守……
②(be) true of/for 与……情况相同;对……也适用?
③It is true that ...……是真实的。
④come true (愿望、梦想等)成为现实,实现?
6.draw upon/on利用,凭借,依赖
典例链接:
①You can draw upon your experience to get the job.
你可以凭借你的经验得到这份工作。
②He drew back in horror when he saw the cuts on her face.
看到她脸上的伤口时,他吓得直往后退。
③The final exam is drawing near and he stays in the reading room
all day preparing for it.
期末考试要到了,他整天待在阅览室里准备。
④I’d like to draw your attention to the no smoking rule.
我希望你们注意禁止吸烟的规定。
⑤I think we can draw up a tentative plan now.
我认为现在可以先草拟一个临时方案。
⑥You can’t take just one day and draw a conclusion that the bear
market is over.
你不可以仅用一天的时间得出结论熊市已结束。
重点领悟 ①draw back退却,撤回
②draw sth.up起草,草拟(文件)
③draw sb.’s attention to 有意使某人注意?
④draw near/close (时间、空间的)临近
⑤draw a conclusion (from sth.) (从某事中)得出结论?
7.make contact with与……进行来往,和……联系
典例链接:
①To our delight, he got contact with his lost son the other day.
令我们高兴的是,前几天他与他失踪的儿子取得了联系。
②I have been in contact with her for three years.
我与她保持联系已有三年。
③I still hear the loud laughter below the sun faintly. The
childhood playmates are out of contact for a long time.
阳光中的琅琅笑声,现在依稀听得见,只是,儿时的玩伴,现在失去联系了。
重点领悟 ①have contact with...与……有交往
②get/lose contact with与……取得/失去联系(表示动作)
③be/keep in contact with与……保持联系(表示状态)
④be out of contact with与……失去联系(表示状态)
8.It’s the same with classical Chinese music.
中国古典音乐也是一样。
典例链接:
①He is very clever but he doesn’t work hard; it is the same
with his sister (so it is with his sister).
他很聪明,但不努力,他姐姐也是这样。
②This is the same bag as I lost yesterday.
这个包和我昨天丢的那个一样。(但不是同一个)
③This is the same bag that I lost yesterday.
这是我昨天丢失的包。(是同一个)
④“Happy Christmas!”“And the same to you, Ben.”
“圣诞快乐!”“也祝你圣诞快乐,本。”
特别提示: It’s the same with...也可换成So it is with...或The same is true of...。该句型主要用于:(1)前面句子的谓语既有肯定又有否定时;(2)前面句子的主语既有人又有物时;(3)前面句子的谓语动词既有be动词又有实义动词时。表示“……也如此”的其他结构:
①在肯定句中,用“so+be/have/助动词/情态动词+另一主语”表示前面所
说的情况亦适合于另一人或物。
②在否定句中,用“neither/nor +be/have/助动词/情态动词+另一主语”
表示“也不”。
③“so+主语+ be/have/助动词/情态动词”表示赞同,意为“某人/物的确
如此”。
巧学活用:
①If you don’t go abroad next year,neither/nor I.
②He can play the piano,and can his sister.
③Mary was born in Australia and she lived in the United States.It
was the same Jane.
so
shall/will
with
重点领悟 ①the same with...表示后面所讲的情况与前面所讲的情况相同,这
时前面的句子中可出现两种形式不同的谓语动词。
②the same as和……相同
③the same to (双方在共同的情景下)用于别人向你表示“祝愿,问
候,祝贺”时回答对方。?
完成句子
④我读过这本小说,我弟弟也读过。
I have read the novel; .
⑤他喜欢英语但不擅长数学,汤姆也是如此。
He likes English but is not good at maths; 。
.
⑥——汤姆昨晚在晚会上玩得很愉快。
——他的确玩得很愉快,杰克玩得也很愉快。
—Tom had a wonderful time at the party last night.
— and .
so has my brother
so it is with Tom/it
is the same with Tom
So he did
so did Jack
基础知识·达标 细疏理·固双基
combine
combination
combined
regarding
regard
relief
relieve
光荣的
relieved
honour
ambition
ambitious
单
词
过
关 1. v.结合,联合
n.联合,混合
adj.共同的,联合的
2. prep.关于
v.对待,看作
3. n.(痛苦、忧虑等的) 解除,调剂
v.减轻,缓解
adj.宽慰的,不再忧虑的
4. v.尊敬,敬重
honourable adj. 。
5. n.志气,抱负,雄心
adj.志向远大的
relatively
relate
relativity
characteristic
character
具有……的特征
depress
depression
regulate
regulation
depressed
regular
relative
单
词
过
关 6. n.亲戚,亲属?
adj.比较的;相对的
adv.相对地,比较地
v.讲述,叙述
n.相对性,相对论
7. n.特征,特性,特质
n.性格;角色;文字
characterize vt. 。
8. v.使沮丧,使心灰意冷
adj.抑郁的,沮丧的
n.抑郁,沮丧
9. v.规定,管理,整顿
n.规则,法规
adj.有规律的
voluntary
volunteer
relax
自愿地
relaxation
relaxed
relaxing
collection
collect
象征的,作为象征的
symbol
present
presentation
presently
单词过关 10. adj.自愿的
n.义务工作者;志愿者
voluntarily adv. 。
11. v.使放松,使轻松
n.放松,休息
adj.轻松的,无拘无束的
adj.使人放松的
12. n.收藏;收藏品
v.收集,收藏
13.symbolic adj. 。
n.象征
14. v.赠送,颁发(礼物、奖品等)
adj.在场的
n.授予
adv.不久,目前
间隔,空隙
of/for
upon
to
in
share
with
sudden
to
to
单词过关 15.interval n. 。
短语记忆 1.(be) true 与……情况相同
2.draw 利用,凭借,依赖
3.give life 赋予……生命(生命力,活力)
4. public 公开地,当众
5. feelings and ideas 与……分享感受与想法
6.make contact 与……进行来往
7.all of a 突然间
8.dance the music 伴着音乐跳舞
9.in addition 除此之外
the
same
with
to
respect
The
moment
used
as
they
to
be
句型整理 1.It’s classical Chinese music.
中国古典音乐也是一样。
2.The biggest challenge is the traditions but
to add my own style.
最大挑战是既要尊重传统的东西,又要加入我个人的风格。
3. they start to play,it is clear the members
of Twelve Girls Band are among the most gifted musicians
in the world.
她们一开始表演,人们就发现女子十二乐坊是世界上最有天赋的音
乐人。
4.However,some people think that the Grammys are not as
important .
然而一些人认为格莱美奖不像以前那么重要了。
Module 4 Music
Ⅰ.话题延读
(2018四川自贡三诊)
In the middle of a hot July afternoon,when the wet air came with slight waves of heat,I became a thief of some sort—a thief of music.
For the first time,I had created an original piano arrangement of one of my favorite songs.Not once had I looked for the help of premade sheet music or video courses on YouTube.Using only my ears and iPod,I had changed a mix of different sounds and complex melodies into the tones of a single instrument; I had created complex harmonies and voices into something I could perform with only two hands.No help,no guide: I had done it on my own.
I’ve been a pianist since before my hands were big enough to reach an octave(八度音节): with a musician and composer for a father,I was all but born on the piano bench.For many years,my musical identity was defined by the notes that others had written in centuries past.
This was why,when I added the finishing touches to my piano version(版本) of a modern rock song,I was proud of myself: this arrangement was mine.What I’d done seemed magical: an ability to take what had already existed—to “steal” a song from my favorite band—and to change it into something different and all my own.I was a thief,but I was also an artist.
In music,as in other aspects of life,I believe that true originality rarely exists.Almost everything has,in one form or another,been done before.The most
romance novel may very well be a slightly changed version of a play by
Shakespeare,which is likely to be borrowed from the works of Ancient Greece: same themes,different characters,different circumstances.But,the novel is no less
deserving of praise just because its uniqueness is compromised.Adaptation is not a synonym for failure.
The gift of creativity is the ability to do what I did on the piano: to find something beautiful,to analyze and twist it and lose yourself in the mystery of its composition,and then to make it new.Such an act is not copying; it is finding inspiration and having the strength and the innovation(创新) to use it as fuel for your own masterpiece.The world is nothing more than collections of preexisting parts—scattered and often lost in the chaos of everyday life.I believe it is my job,as an artist,to rearrange this world into what I envision it to be.
I refuse to live as if I were trapped within the walls of a museum: looking but never touching,afraid to ruin the so-called perfection of the artifacts inside.
Therefore,I will embrace my ability to be a thief,because if I don’t steal what the world has to offer,I’ll never have the tools to share with others a creation of my own.
My life is my own arrangement,and because of that,anything is possible.
1.Which word has the closest meaning with the underlined word “embrace”?
A.adopt B.describe C.accept D.quit
2.The reason why the author felt proud of himself was that .?
A.he became a real artist without other’s help
B.he could play the piano before he was shorter than the piano bench
C.he has a father who was a musician and composer
D.he changed one of his favorite songs into a piano arrangement on his own
3.Which of the following can be the best title?
A.A music thief B.Changes from a thief to an artist
C.The passion to create music D.My piano arrangement
语篇解读:本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。本文的小主人公是一位钢琴家。一个炎热的下午,他将一首现代摇滚乐改编成钢琴曲,因而获得了极大的满足。同时,他从这件事上获得了一个启迪:每个人都是自己人生的改编者,你要善于和勇于利用前人留给你的东西,去谱写属于自己的人生乐章!
答案及剖析:
1.C 猜测词义题。根据该句子中because if I don’t steal what the world has to offer,
I’ll never have the tools to share with others a creation of my own.可判断,作者对自己的创作感到庆幸,欣然接受自己的能力。故选C项。
2.D 细节理解题。根据第四段可知,作者之所以感到自豪是因为作者凭借一己之力生平第一次将自己最喜欢的一首歌改编成了原创钢琴曲。故D项正确。
3.A 主旨大意题。由文章第四段可知,作者从他最喜爱的乐队中“偷”一首歌,将其改造成另一种完全不同的、只属于他自己的作品。结合第一段中I became a thief of some sort—a thief of music可判断标题A music thief最为适合。
Ⅱ.阅读理解
When people introduce themselves,I always hear them say “I’m just a housewife”.
I don’t understand why their introduction is always filled with regret and
self-pity.Is it really a crime to be a housewife?Is it really embarrassing when you choose not to work outside and instead choose to work in your home?
How could you be “just a housewife” when the basic social unit of society depends on you and your service?A housewife works for the longest hour, supporting your husband, child’s studies, caring for elders, managing finances, paying bills, grocery shopping, cooking according to individual taste, cleaning, etc.A housewife could be anyone:daughter, wife, mother, teacher, financial advisor, fashion
designer and nurse, gardener, driver, cook, and so on.Don’t think you are not being paid for it.You get the reward that no money can offer—the love and affection of your family, their trust in you, a happy home and your own satisfaction.
It is you who choose to be in this occupation, willingly or for any other
reason.After a busy day, all wait to return to the comfortable home set by you.They know you will be there to absorb all their stress and tiredness and relax them.Would you along with your family have been able to buy all the content in life that you are enjoying now with that money?
Respect yourself for what you are.Introduce yourself to the world with the same dignity.The world understands the importance of your job; it’s time to make them accept it.Introduce yourself with pride and with twinkle in your eyes “I am a housewife”.Kick that “just” out.
1.How do people feel when they say “I’m just a housewife”?
A.Satisfied. B.Proud. C.Regretful. D.Anxious.
2.Listing the housewife’s duties, the author implies a housewife .?
A.usually leads a terrible life B.plays a more important role
C.does not always get her reward D.makes a great contribution to the family
3.If a housewife worked outside, she would .?
A.have the same life like before B.set a comfortable home for her family
C.absorb her family’s stress D.lose the content that she is enjoying
4.What is the author’s attitude toward housewives?
A.Supportive. B.Doubtful. C.Opposed. D.Tolerant.
语篇解读:本文主要讨论了家庭主妇的伟大之处。
答案及剖析:
1.C 细节理解题。根据第一段的第二句“I don’t understand why their introduction is always filled with regret and self-pity.”可知,家庭主妇在自我介绍时会对自己的身份感到后悔或者遗憾。
2.D 推理判断题。根据第二段的整体内容可知,家庭主妇身兼多职,其在家庭中的作用和地位不可小觑,为整个家庭做出了巨大的贡献。
3.D 推理判断题。根据第三段的“Would you along with your family have been able to buy all the content in life that you are enjoying now with that money?”可推知,职业妇女是不可能享有家庭主妇所享有的那种满足感的,那是钱买不来的。
4.A 观点态度题。根据文章最后一段的“Introduce yourself with pride and with twinkle in your eyes ‘I am a housewife’.Kick that ‘just’ out.”可推知,作者是支持家庭主妇的。
Ⅲ.语法填空
E-commerce (电子商务) has changed the lives of people across the world.With fewer people 1. (leave) home for shopping, physical stores are having a difficult time.2. it seems that one kind of physical store is not being
hit— the convenience store.?
Convenience store sales in 2016 in China increased by 13 percent, 3. (compare) with that of 2015, according to China Daily.There are now 4. (near) 100,000 convenience stores in China.And in Japan, there are 11,000 more convenience stores in 2017 than in 2010.?
Why are these 24-hour stores with 5. average area of 110 square meters enjoying such rapid 6. (develop)??
One reason is that young people have grown into the habit of shopping at convenience stores, noted Convenience Store News.Convenience stores 7. only have everything for daily use, but also fresh food like sushi, sandwiches and salads, 8. are all quite popular among young people.?
What’s more, different 9. supermarkets, many convenience stores sell
things they make themselves, like bread and cakes.As these products can only
10. (find) in these stores, many people go there just to buy them.?
答案及剖析:
1.leaving 考查非谓语动词作宾补。fewer people与leave是主动关系,故此处填leaving。
2.But 考查连词。该句与上句在逻辑上为转折关系,故此处填but。
3.compared 考查非谓语动词作状语。句子的主语与compare是被动关系,故此处填
compared。
4.nearly 考查副词。副词修饰be动词。
5.an 考查冠词。with an average area of为固定短语,意为“平均面积为……”。
6.development 考查名词。用名词做enjoy的宾语。
7.not 考查固定短语。not only...but also..., 意为“不仅……而且……”。
8.which 考查定语从句。前有逗号,先行词是物且在定语从句中作主语,故此处填which。
9.from 考查介词,be different from为固定短语,意为“与……不同”。
10.be found 考查谓语动词,要考虑时态和语态,these products 与find之间是被动,故填be found.
Ⅳ.短文改错
Dear Sir,
Thank you for your offer of invite me to the summer English course in your school.As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-weeks course for 60 hours of study.Because of this would allow me more time to do some travelling and make a few new friends either.Of all the subject I’m learning at school, I like English best.I had been learning English for 6 years but my spoken English remains poorly.So I hope to take this chance to improve it.If possible, I’d like stay with a family for a couple of days in order to I can know some customs in England.I believe I will have a wonderful time this summer.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
答案:Dear Sir,
Thank you for your offer of me to the summer English course in your school.As for choice between the two courses, I prefer the course for 60 hours of study.Because this would allow me more time to do some travelling and make a few new friends .Of all the I’m learning at school, I like English best.I been learning English for 6 years but my spoken English remains .So I hope to take this chance to improve it.If possible, I’d like stay with a family for a couple of days in order I can know some customs in England.I believe I will have a wonderful time this summer.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
剖析:介词of后面要接动名词作宾语。
此处使用my和句子主语I保持一致。
此处是“数词+名词”构成的复合形容词,作定语修饰名词course,尽管数词是大于1的,但名词仍用单数形式。
连词because后面要接句子充当原因状语从句,而介词短语because of后面要接名词或名词短语作宾语。
副词too “也”,用于肯定句中表示“也”,either用于否定句中表示“也”。本句是一个肯定句,所以使用副词too。
名词subject“学科”是一个可数名词,其前有all修饰,故此处应用其复数形式。
原文中使用了过去完成时,表示过去的过去。实际上本文并没有“过去的过去”的含义,而表示到目前为止已经完成的事情,所以使用现在完成时。
remain为连系动词,此处作表语,故把poorly改为poor。
would like to do...“喜欢做某事。”
in order that...“为了……”后面跟从句充当目的状语。
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