高考英语书面表达--如何提高书面表达效果 课件（43张PPT）
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课件43张PPT。如何提高书面表达效果字太小学生习作书写差学生习作学生习作书写差学生习作书写差铅笔打格，严禁！学生习作书写认真学生习作学生习作书写认真NMET对书面表达的要求 要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇120个单词左右的短文 情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。
本部分满分25分，所需时间约为30分钟。NMET书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。第五档. 21~25分
第四档. 16~20分
第三档. 11~15分第二档. 6~10分
第一档. 1~5分
0分语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：
内容要点；
词汇和语法的数量和准确性；
上下文的连贯；
语言的得体性应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性
2. Body
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增 强 书 面 表 达 效 果Utilize some high-grade words
1.That is a difficult task.challenging/ demanding2.He has known the truth at last.eventually3.I should thank you for helping me out of trouble.I am awfully grateful to you for…
5. We try our best to improve our life . 4. Several weeks ago, I happened to meet an old friend of mine.A couple of days ago, I came across an old friend of mine.make every effort to …
spare no effort to better our life… 1.be????interesed???in?:show??great????interest????in?
/take?an???interest????in?/be???fascinated in????
2.very????difficult:challenging???
3.be??made??up??of??:be??composed??of???/consist??of???
4.because???of?:thanks??to??/owing??to??/due??to??
5.in??order??to??:for??the??purpose??of?/in??an??effort??to?
6.be??angry???with?:be???annoyed???withHigh-grade words or phrases7.as a result:turn out to be
8.cause:lead to/ result in
9.in one's opinion: personally speaking
10.face : be faced with
11.being built: under construction
12.because :for the reason that
/on account of 13.be surprised at :be astonished at
14.decide to do :be determined to do
/determine to do
15.use :make use of
16.hope: be expected to
17.should: be supposed to /ought to
/be meant to
18. easily:have no trouble in doing 19.considering: in view of
20.and: as well as
21.suddenly :all of a sudden
22.finally: eventually
23.like:love /prefer/enjoy
24. send:deliver
25.very quickly: in no time
26.lie??in??:be??located??in?
/be??situated??in???? 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
2. We all think he is a great man.
3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
Thanks to/ Owing to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.We all think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me.Or: A good idea suddenly struck me.Practice4. Shanghai lies in the east of China.
5. As a result, the plan was a failure.
6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
7. A new railway is being built in my hometown.The plan turned out to be a failure.Shanghai is situated/ located in the east of China.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 8. She went to Austria in order to study music.
9. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.
10. In our school, there are two tennis courts.
11. You can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.We have two tennis courts available in our school.You’ll have no trouble (in) finding my house. II、Adopt a variety of sentence patterns;1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail. (使用V-ing形式)
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句)
3. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (用过去分词) On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Once seen, it can never be forgotten.4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型)
5. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）
It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)
7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (使用V-ing形式)
Singing and laughing, they went back to school.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.8. I won’t believe what he says. (使用状语 从句)
9. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (用定语从句)
10. It is great fun to climb the hill. (用感叹句)No matter what he says, I won’t believe. The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. What great fun it is to climb the hill!11. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
12. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
13. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被动语态)
No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Study hard, and you’ll make rapid progress.It is suggested that the conference be put off.I.用于文章段首句Supplementary: 精选句型1.关于……人们有不同的观点一些人认为
There are different opinions among people as to____ some people suggest that ______
2.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。 首先，……，其次，……，更为糟糕的是……。
Today ,_______,which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First ,_________Second,_______.What makes things worse is that____3.任何事物都有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and _____is not an exception.Is has both advantages and disadvantages.
4..……已成为人们关注的热门话题，特别是在年轻人当中，将引发激烈的争论。
_______has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
5.根据数字／统计数字／表格中的百分比／图表／条形图／线形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistice/percentages in the chart/bar graph/line graph , it can be seen that _____while.Obviously,__________,but why?II. 用于文章承转句 1.相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。 On the contrary,there are some people in faver of ______.At the same time,they say______.
2.但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。更糟糕的是……。
But I don't think it is a very good way to solve_____. For example,_______.Worst of alk ,_____.
3.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt.First,we can____4.为什么……？第一个原因是……，第二个原因是……，第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……
Why______?The first reason is that______.The second reason is____The third is _____.For all that,the main cause of______due to
5.尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless,I believe that_____is more advantageous.III. 用于文章结尾句1.至于我，在某种程度上同意后面的观点，我认为……
As far I am concerned,I agree with the latter opinion to some ectent.I think that______.
2.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。
In a word the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can _____in the future.3.但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于……
But _____and______have their own advantages. For example,______,while ______ Comparing this with that,however,I prefer to _______.
4.就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally,I believe that______. consequently ,I'm confident that A bright future is awaiting us because________
5.随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将变得越来越好。
With the development of society,_______.So it's urgent and necessary to ______.If every member id willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.III.Employ some proper transitional or cohesive words.在议论文中，为了使结构清楚，要点明了，可以使用如下几组词汇： 1）first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), last/ finally
2）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 3）to start with, next, in addition, finally
4）first and foremost, besides, last but not least 5）on the one hand, on the other hand 6）for one thing, for another thing（适用于
两点的情况） Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. _______________.
____________, most families are too poor to send their children to school. __________, they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. The reasons can be listed as followsTo begin withAs a resultIn additionHoweverPratice __________, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. _________, they don’t let them go to school.
_______, some children are not interested in their studies. ______________________, some wouldn’t like to go to school.In my opinionThereforeFinallyTo make matters worseIn addition _____________________, all the children including girls should be educated. _______, the whole society should lay/ place/ put great emphasis on children’s education ________ they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day.As far as I’m concernedBesideshoweverThereforeLast but not leastbecause _____________________, all the children including girls should be educated. _______, the whole society should lay/ place/ put great emphasis on children’s education ________ they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day.As far as I’m concernedBesideshoweverThereforeLast but not leastbecauseTips on Writing Better1.Utilize some high-grade words;
2.Adopt a variety of sentence patterns;
3.Employ some proper transitional or cohesive words.SummaryHomework书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简
历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和
格式（format）。
注意： 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
See you!I will be always with you!
本部分满分25分，所需时间约为30分钟。NMET书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。第五档. 21~25分
第四档. 16~20分
第三档. 11~15分第二档. 6~10分
第一档. 1~5分
0分语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：
内容要点；
词汇和语法的数量和准确性；
上下文的连贯；
语言的得体性应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性
2. Body
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增 强 书 面 表 达 效 果Utilize some high-grade words
1.That is a difficult task.challenging/ demanding2.He has known the truth at last.eventually3.I should thank you for helping me out of trouble.I am awfully grateful to you for…
5. We try our best to improve our life . 4. Several weeks ago, I happened to meet an old friend of mine.A couple of days ago, I came across an old friend of mine.make every effort to …
spare no effort to better our life… 1.be????interesed???in?:show??great????interest????in?
/take?an???interest????in?/be???fascinated in????
2.very????difficult:challenging???
3.be??made??up??of??:be??composed??of???/consist??of???
4.because???of?:thanks??to??/owing??to??/due??to??
5.in??order??to??:for??the??purpose??of?/in??an??effort??to?
6.be??angry???with?:be???annoyed???withHigh-grade words or phrases7.as a result:turn out to be
8.cause:lead to/ result in
9.in one's opinion: personally speaking
10.face : be faced with
11.being built: under construction
12.because :for the reason that
/on account of 13.be surprised at :be astonished at
14.decide to do :be determined to do
/determine to do
15.use :make use of
16.hope: be expected to
17.should: be supposed to /ought to
/be meant to
18. easily:have no trouble in doing 19.considering: in view of
20.and: as well as
21.suddenly :all of a sudden
22.finally: eventually
23.like:love /prefer/enjoy
24. send:deliver
25.very quickly: in no time
26.lie??in??:be??located??in?
/be??situated??in???? 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
2. We all think he is a great man.
3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
Thanks to/ Owing to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.We all think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me.Or: A good idea suddenly struck me.Practice4. Shanghai lies in the east of China.
5. As a result, the plan was a failure.
6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
7. A new railway is being built in my hometown.The plan turned out to be a failure.Shanghai is situated/ located in the east of China.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 8. She went to Austria in order to study music.
9. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.
10. In our school, there are two tennis courts.
11. You can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.We have two tennis courts available in our school.You’ll have no trouble (in) finding my house. II、Adopt a variety of sentence patterns;1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail. (使用V-ing形式)
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句)
3. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (用过去分词) On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Once seen, it can never be forgotten.4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型)
5. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）
It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)
7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (使用V-ing形式)
Singing and laughing, they went back to school.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.8. I won’t believe what he says. (使用状语 从句)
9. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (用定语从句)
10. It is great fun to climb the hill. (用感叹句)No matter what he says, I won’t believe. The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. What great fun it is to climb the hill!11. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
12. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
13. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被动语态)
No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Study hard, and you’ll make rapid progress.It is suggested that the conference be put off.I.用于文章段首句Supplementary: 精选句型1.关于……人们有不同的观点一些人认为
There are different opinions among people as to____ some people suggest that ______
2.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。 首先，……，其次，……，更为糟糕的是……。
Today ,_______,which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First ,_________Second,_______.What makes things worse is that____3.任何事物都有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and _____is not an exception.Is has both advantages and disadvantages.
4..……已成为人们关注的热门话题，特别是在年轻人当中，将引发激烈的争论。
_______has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
5.根据数字／统计数字／表格中的百分比／图表／条形图／线形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistice/percentages in the chart/bar graph/line graph , it can be seen that _____while.Obviously,__________,but why?II. 用于文章承转句 1.相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。 On the contrary,there are some people in faver of ______.At the same time,they say______.
2.但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。更糟糕的是……。
But I don't think it is a very good way to solve_____. For example,_______.Worst of alk ,_____.
3.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt.First,we can____4.为什么……？第一个原因是……，第二个原因是……，第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……
Why______?The first reason is that______.The second reason is____The third is _____.For all that,the main cause of______due to
5.尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless,I believe that_____is more advantageous.III. 用于文章结尾句1.至于我，在某种程度上同意后面的观点，我认为……
As far I am concerned,I agree with the latter opinion to some ectent.I think that______.
2.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。
In a word the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can _____in the future.3.但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于……
But _____and______have their own advantages. For example,______,while ______ Comparing this with that,however,I prefer to _______.
4.就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally,I believe that______. consequently ,I'm confident that A bright future is awaiting us because________
5.随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将变得越来越好。
With the development of society,_______.So it's urgent and necessary to ______.If every member id willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.III.Employ some proper transitional or cohesive words.在议论文中，为了使结构清楚，要点明了，可以使用如下几组词汇： 1）first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), last/ finally
2）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 3）to start with, next, in addition, finally
4）first and foremost, besides, last but not least 5）on the one hand, on the other hand 6）for one thing, for another thing（适用于
两点的情况） Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. _______________.
____________, most families are too poor to send their children to school. __________, they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. The reasons can be listed as followsTo begin withAs a resultIn additionHoweverPratice __________, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. _________, they don’t let them go to school.
_______, some children are not interested in their studies. ______________________, some wouldn’t like to go to school.In my opinionThereforeFinallyTo make matters worseIn addition _____________________, all the children including girls should be educated. _______, the whole society should lay/ place/ put great emphasis on children’s education ________ they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day.As far as I’m concernedBesideshoweverThereforeLast but not leastbecause _____________________, all the children including girls should be educated. _______, the whole society should lay/ place/ put great emphasis on children’s education ________ they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day.As far as I’m concernedBesideshoweverThereforeLast but not leastbecauseTips on Writing Better1.Utilize some high-grade words;
2.Adopt a variety of sentence patterns;
3.Employ some proper transitional or cohesive words.SummaryHomework书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简
历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和
格式（format）。
注意： 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
See you!I will be always with you!