中考英语二轮书面表达复习课件： How to describe a city 课件57张PPT

课件57张PPT。Writing 中考英语专题复习——书面表达Writing:
How to describe a city授课教师： 刘小玲
单 位： 茂名市第六中学Writing:
How to describe a city魅力中国城
charming cityTell me more about Maoming!Which team can share more

information ?
Warming up---guessing games.Which group will be the winner?food loverA red coat, white body and black heart.litchi 荔枝 [ 'lit?i:]A yellow coat, white body and an black eye inside.longan 龙眼 ['l??ɡ?n]They are yellow,and kind of long.banana It's a fruit. It's also a color. What is it? orangedragon fruit 火龙果Dressed in red clothes, his stomach sometimes is white,sometimes is red. mango芒果 ['m??g??]yellow face, sometimes tastes sour,
sometimes tastes sweetjackfruit 菠萝蜜dressed green clothes, but there are
many yellow hearts in its body.seafood 海鲜 special food in seaside cityplaces of interest 名胜景点No.1 Beach of China 中国第一滩Romantic Coast 浪漫海岸Temple [?templ] of Madam Xian 冼太庙 Mount Tianma 天马山 sportswima kind of water sportdivea kind of water sport, you can see the beautiful reef in the deep seasurf skate on the seaplay beach volleyballplay volleyball on the sandcyclingyou can ride it everywherecustom['k?st?m]
风俗 yearly worship weatherWhich group will be the winner?Which group will be the winner?John
2.介绍这个城市的亮点，如景点、美食或风俗等。 3.对约翰此次旅行提出一些建议。邮件的内容包括：
1.推荐一个广东省的城市，并简要介绍这个城市的概况。 现在请帮助Elaine老师给她的好朋友约翰发一封电子邮件告知他相关的情况。
内容包括：
1.推荐一个广东省的城市，并简要介绍这个城市的概况。
2.至少介绍这个城市的亮点，如景点、美食或风俗等。
3.对约翰此次旅行提出一些建议。Fill in the blanks.6Dear John,
Welcome to China! I am writing to tell you some things about my favorite city in Guangdong Province.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes
Yours,
Elaine书面表达审列扩连书面表达 步法改5 根据要点列提纲，列提纲的时候应以动宾短语或者系表短语的形式罗列。 将提纲里的动宾短语或系表短语加上主语、修饰词(形容词、副词等)时间或地点状语等扩展成完整的句子。 定时态、定人称、定框架和定内容。 把两个简单句合为句意连贯的复合句。在句 与句之间补充适当的连词、过渡句，使之时间 、空间、 细节有逻辑、连贯呼应。审题四定列提纲扩展成句连句成文查错改错主要检查人称代词的主格和宾格形式、动词的时态形式、名词的复数形式、固定搭配、单词拼写、标点符号、大小写和格式的书写。一、审题注意“四定”1.定时态:
记叙文、日记一般用一般过去时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；计划等用一般将来时。
2.定人称：
用第一人和第二人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。
3.定框架：根据作文题目内容定段落。
4.定内容 ：根据题目的要点定写作内容。
现在请帮助Elaine老师给她的好朋友约翰发一封电子邮件告知他相关的情况。
内容包括：
1.推荐一个广东省的城市，并简要介绍这个城市的概况。
2.至少介绍这个城市的亮点，如景点、美食或风俗等。
3.对约翰此次旅行提出一些建议。The number of paragraphsThe tenses of the composition时态
The type and the main idea
of the composition体裁The personal pronouns
of the composition人称threethe Present Tensethe Simple Future Tense? the?first，second and third person ; description of a city in Guangdong and some advice for the tripFill in the blanks.6 an E-mailBeginning:Ending:Main body:Outlinepopulation:location:area:lie in…; be located in…cover an area of…; its area ishave a population of…;
with a population of…
there be…places of interestlocal foodcustomadvice
for trip luggagetransportationhotelsafety 茂名：位于广东省西南部，超过7,900,000万人，11,427 平方千米
lie in the southwest of Guangdong Province
be located in the southwest of Guangdong Provincelocation:have a population of over 7.9 million
cover an area of 11427 square kilometers
population:area:=with a population of over 7.9 million =There are over 7.9 million people.=Its area is 11427 square kilometersComplete the outline of the E-mail.7Beginning:Outlinepopulation:location:area:lie in…; be located in…cover an area of…; its area ishave a population of…;
with a population of…
there be…hotelsafety 茂名：位于广东省西南部，7,900,000人，11,427 平方千米
lie in the southwest of Guangdong province
be located in the southwest of Guangdong provincelocation:have a population of over 7.9million
cover an area of 11,427 square kilometers
population:area:Maoming liesMaoming isIt has=Its population is
over7.9million.=There are over 7.9million people.=Its area is 11,427 square kilometersIt covers Write sentences.8It lies in the southwest of Guangdong province. It covers an area of 11427 square kilometers.
只要我们在连句成文的过程中善于扩充、适度添加单词、短语或从句，句子就会更有表现力，句意也将更加连贯。Maoming is a beautiful city.It has a population of over7.9 million.Maoming is a beautiful city with a population of over 7.9 million.And it Connect sentences with proper words.9恰当的连接词 1 格式是否正确
2 词汇 是否用对
3是否符合英语习惯表达
4时态是否正确
5用主动语态好还是用被动语态好
6标点是否用对
7人称是否用对
8主谓是否一致
9.名词的单复数等书面表达第六步：改誊：誊写。
将检查后的作文整洁地抄写在横线上
注意:横线就是我们英语作业本的第三条线（基准线）,小写字母 都要穿过这条线。
卷面整洁不一定加分，
卷面潦草一定要扣分。誊f /g /j /p /q /yEnding:Bodyplaces of interestlocal foodcustomadvice
for trip luggagetransportationhotelsafetyPlease complete the outline of body and ending.activitiessights…Tianma mountainRomantic Coastlichislongans10Dear John,
Welcome to China! I am writing to tell you some things about my favorite city in Guangdong Province. Maoming is a beautiful city with a population of over 7.9 million. It lies in the southwest of Guangdong Province. And it covers an area of 11427 square kilometers.____________________________________
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Best wishes
Yours,
Elaine书面表达:
中考英语中的必考题，约占卷面总分的12.5%，分值约为15分 。
中考英语作文评分标准
一档13-15分 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇， 用
词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的
语言运用能力。
二档10-12 分 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词
汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。
三档7-9分 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通
顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。
四档4-6分 只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文不
连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。
五档0-3分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误多。
大病指：
句子结构、谓语构成、词序、
语态、时态等方面；
小病指：
名词单复数、第三人称单数、
拼写、标点符号、大小写方面。
Dear John,
Welcome to China! I am writing to tell you some things about my favorite city in Guangdong Province.Maoming is a beautiful city with a population of over 7.9 million. It lies in the southwest of Guangdong Province. And it covers an area of 11427 square kilometers.
There are many places of interest in Maoming. No. 1 Beach of China is my favourite. It is one of the most beautiful beaches in China. The beach there is quite wide and the water is very clean. It is best to swim in the sea and play volleyball on the beach. The best time to visit it is in summer and autumn. In summer,you can swim or surf in the sea. In autumn, the weather is neither too hot nor too cold, you can take a walk or do all kinds of sports on the beach.
Welcome to Maoming. Welcome to No. 1 Beach of China . It is very easy to go there.You can take a bus or go there by taxi. I’m sure you will have a good time when you come here.
Best wishes
Yours,
Elaine
范文鉴赏：A:了解一些出名的旅游景点
B:关注社会热点，了解时事新闻
D: 体会范文佳作中有效素材及出彩语句
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