课件19张PPT。DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing?
Content: everything needed included which is
related to your view. 内容要完整
Structure:
* Good beginning and ending 好的开头结尾
* Well organized and smoothly developed
结构合理,行文流畅
Language:
* No Chinglish 避免中文式英文
* No Grammatical mistakes 没有语法错误
* With exactly used words and relatively
changed sentence patterns
词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化Enjoy the following paragraph:Enjoy the following paragraph: Notice
Dear Ms. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15.It will start at 2∶00 pm in Room 501 and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 4487665 if you have any questions.
Li hua1.通知的定义
通知是指通知有关事项的文书。通常是上级对下级、单位对员工布置任务、安排工作、召开会议、传达信息等所使用的一种常见的应用文。
2.通知的形式
常见的通知形式有三种:
书信式,通过邮局寄发或由专人递送。
布告式,即将张贴在布告栏内或醒目处,或写在黑板上,多用于单位内部。
广播通知,多用于公共场所,如:车站、机场等,也可用于内部,应付紧急事件。3.通知的基本结构
1)标题:写法:Notice 或 Notice of?
位置: 在正文、内容的正上方
2)正文:传统写法开头空出四个字母位置的空格,直接顶头写也常见,根据内容需要,可采用一个自然段,或多个不等。
3)发布通知的单位/机构:一般在正文的右下角。
4)发布通知的日期:一般在正文的左下角。4.通知的语言特点
简洁清晰,表达清楚,以免产生歧义。(详见试题——双语报第6期B3版)
1)开门见山,直奔主题:
2)用词要朴实:
3)用常见的三大句型:
①主语+谓语+宾语(+状语),
②There be +主语+状语,
③主语+系动词+表语,
4)适当的高级表达:5.通知的附加成分
通知的主要内容表述完了以后,往往另起一段,一两句简要说明要注意的问题事项.【实战演练---2009辽宁高考卷]
假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件,
将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。
要点:
时间:下周六上午8:00至11:00
内容:采摘苹果
报名:办公室,下周四下午5:00前
提示:带帽子、手套
注意:
1.词数100左右,开头已为你写好。
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:社区 community
Dear neighbors,
We are happy to announce that our community is going to
organize an activity for all the community members......高中英语书面表达常用的过渡词语和表达方式:
1.文章及段落起始的过渡词语:
to begin with; generally speaking; first of all; in the first place; in general;
generally; in my opinion;
2.文章及段落结尾常用的过渡词语:
therefore, thus; in conclusion; in brief; to sum up; in a word
(注意:要避免在这些短语之前用"so")
3.常见的表示先后次序的过渡词语:
first; second; next; eventually; since then; afterward; meanwhile;
therefore; immediately
4.常见的表示因果关系的过渡词语:
for this reason; as a result; in this way; so; due to; therefore;
because of; thus5.常用于比较和对比的过渡词语:
similarly; on the contrary; different from; equally important; on one hand,
on the other hand
6.常用于表示举例的过渡词语:
for example; that is; for instance
7.有关描写图表的过渡词语:
during this time/ period; apart from; compared with; from the above table/
chart/ graph; on average; below/ above the average; increase/ reduce/ decrease by
8.常用表示强调的过度词语:
furthermore; moreover; besides; in fact; indeed; in particular;
what's more; in addition; 书面表达评价表
项目 自评 他评
1.书写工整吗?有没有乱涂乱划?
2.句子开头注意大小写了吗?
3.有没有注意标点符号?
4将文章分段了吗?分成了几段?
5有单词拼写错误吗?几个?
6.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态?
7.注意主谓一致了吗?
8.有没有语态的错误?
9.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗?
10.有没有词性的错误?哪一种?
11.简单句表达正确吗?
12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构?
13.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗?
14.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些?Avoid Chinglish!
1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded .
2) There has a highway connected with Beijing.
3) Though the transport is good ,but it fades
next to our natural resources.
4) I forgot my dictionary at home.
5) It will cost us much money to buy one. 1.It built in the 1980s.
2.In our city ,the public order is better than other places.
3.Buy a cellphone is too expensive.
4.The public order is very well.
5.At the last ,I hope you can invest here.
6.The government is like investors to come here.
7.Let me introduce this city for you.
8.Thank you for you come.
9.I think you can happy.
10.To my surprised, my father agreed to buy one.A lot of families are much more poor.
I’m very happy I can write letter to you.
Some are not interest in lessons.
I think every child is equality.
Because of their parents don’t have enough money .
I can keep touch with my family.
Some parents think go to school is not good.
Every child including girls should have the chance
to accept education.
There are many families are poor.
Some parents in village think that girls are not
important as well as boys.Dear neighbors,
We are very happy to announce that our community is
going to organize an activity for all the community members.
Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers
away from our town, and all are welcome. We will meet at 8:00 am at
the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting. Our outdoor activity
will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.
If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm
next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.
We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.
We are looking forward to your joining us.
Community Office