2020届高考英语专项复习课件：短文改错（36张ppt）
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(共36张PPT)
短文改错
What’s the main trouble when correcting a composition?
1. 看不出句子有错。
2. 看出句子出错的地方,但答案不正确。或无法改正。
“改错改错，越改越错”。因此了解改错的题型特点，并在此基础上加以一定分项训练，掌握一些解题技巧就非常有必要。
Procedures of the lesson
2. 新改错解题策略及答题原则
1. 短文改错设错方式及规范
3. 解读短文改错口诀
4.练习巩固（Practice）
Right or Wrong?
增加
been
I have offered a scholarship at a university.
I have offered a scholarship at a university.
been
I have offered a scholarship at a university.
been
∧
∧
X
∨
X
X
X
X
I have got a good news to tell you.
I have got a good news to tell you.
I have got a good news to tell you.
Right or Wrong?
删除
X
X
Right or Wrong?
修改
Three weeks ago I bought the electronic
an
dictionary at a shop.
Three weeks ago I bought the electronic
an
dictionary at a shop.
Three weeks ago I bought the electronic
an
dictionary at a shop.
以上为不规范答题,均不给分，不能手下留情
E.g.: What's more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next day,he posted the message on the poster-board… When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway…
to
a
^
for
I can return to home now.
the
∧
in
一.短文改错设错方式及规范
3.Unnecessary word
I like playing piano.
I major at English.
2.Missing word
1.Wrong word
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
三、新高考短文改错
应试策略及答题原则
三步
五原则
四不改
1. 通读全文, 理解文章.
2. 先易后难, 找出明错.
3. 对照考点, 深入审读.
1.以改变实词形式为原则.
2.以单词形式变化最小为原则.
3.以添删或更换虚词为原则.
4.以多“改正”少“添删”为原则．
5.以保持原意不变为原则．
1.标点符号不改。
2.大小写不改。
3.词序错误不改。
4.单词拼写不改 。
文中出现带汉语注释的词，
在句中不可能用错。
Next
动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副;
非谓语，细辨别，
句子成份多分析;
代词格，细领悟，
介词短语要牢记;
冠词连词常光顾，
逻辑错误须关注.
四.短文改错口诀：
I 词法和逻辑错误:
1）动词形
1. For all these years, we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please.(2014年新课标I)
2. My father took me out camping for the first time ….
My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.(陕西卷)
3. Share with others makes me feel happy.
have
came
1.动词的时态和语态错误.
2. 主、谓不一致的错误。
3.非谓语动词形式的误用
Sharing
4. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. (陕西卷)
5. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky. (陕西卷)
6. Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined
to be just as good.
7. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. （辽宁卷）
were
Amazed
understand
having
8. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.
10. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calm.
11. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians.
try
been
∧
has
2）名词数
1. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several class.
2. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes death around me.
dead
classes
1.可数与不可数名词的混用。
2.可数名词的单复数的错用。
3.名词的格的误用
4.词性的转换
3. The man said, “my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on the floor.”
4. We're called several time about Cleo's early morning barking.
5. I'm deeply grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English.
6. The police soon tracked the calls to a barber shop.
attention
barber's
teeth
times
3）还要注意形和副
1. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
(新课标I)
2. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. (陕西卷)
3. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.（浙江卷）
immdiately
noisy
wonderful
1.形容词、副词、名词等词性的误用。
2.原级，比较级和最高级的误用。
4. Li Ming enjoyed himself, competing and chatting with his father, and felt relaxing in the open air.
5. I really take proud in this experience.
6. There are more than 200 excellent teachers and 5，000 lovely students studying hardly in our school.
7. I hope I can practise my spoken English there as more as possible.
pride
hard
much
relaxed
4）代词格，细领悟
1. The survey also shows that libraries are where students get most of his books.
2. My uncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.
none
their
1.前后人称不一致。
2.人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的误用。
3.不定代词的误用及混用。
3. Though situations are tough today, a lot of we post?80s are making great efforts to live a good life.
4. It has been repaired and strengthened several times over it's past one hundred years' history.
5. I think important to learn the computer well.
6. Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for me.
its
it
∧
us
5)介词短语要牢记
1. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.(四川卷)
2. Then we made him breathe using the mouth-to-mouth way. After the boy came to himself, we sent him hospital at once and telephoned his parents.
to
for
∧
主要考查介词短语和习惯用法的搭配。
∧
3. Nearly five years ago, with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果) in our back garden. (新课标I卷)
4. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him.
5. Soon they came up a good idea.
6. The woman was angry and said the man, “What are you doing, sir? What are you looking for?
from
with
∧
∧
to
of
6）冠词、连词常光顾
1. Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.
2. But there was a man sitting beside her in a next seat.
3. Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.
the
a
∧
an
１. 冠词a,an和the的错用或少用．
２．连词but,and，or, so,because, although,
therefore, however的错用．
4. Now many girls prefer to marry a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don't think love built on houses and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.
5. On Monday, Li Ming was energetic but active in class.
6.“Should I choose a good major and a good university?"
7. They had expected to find a free place to live in, so they experienced a hard winter.
and
or
but
However
Our English teacher begin to teach us in 2012.
She had been teaching English for more than two year. She likes we, and she is very strict in all of us. Although she is a bit short and not so beautifully,
but we consider her as our friend. She is really good teacher. We are love her very much.
We're sure we'll get in well with each other.
began
has
years
us
with
beautiful
∧
a
on
动词形
名词数
代词格，细领悟
介词短语要牢记
还要注意形和副
冠词连词常光顾
五、Practice
Passage1
My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.
don't
much
for
hours
there
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
looks
sit
helpful
∧
to
Summary
2.较好拿到分数的有：
名词单复数/形容词副词/动词时态/代词.
1. 做题时应注意：
叙事性文章首抓________，以免理解有误；
论述性文章首抓名词形容词冠词代词错误
全文时态
3.短文改错口诀
代词格，细领悟
介词短语要牢记
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
动词形，名词数；
还要注意形和副；
非谓语，细辨别；
句子成份多分析
1.He put it in a secret place where I couldn't find.
which
2.The house which Lu Xun once lived is
being repaired now.
where
3. I'll never forget the day which I first
went to school.
when
1）定语从句
关系代词和关系副词的误用
1.We would return at night to hear that he'd
picked up from the radio in the day.
what
2.But it didn’t matter that I would win or not.
whether
3.When people are playing games,they move
a lot. That is how sports are good activities
for their health.
why
2）名词性从句
连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用
1.He got up early in order to he could
catch the first.
that
2. Make a mark which you have any doubts or questions.
where
3）状语从句
引导词的误用
As we climbed the mountains, we fed monkeys,
visiting temples and told stories.
2)I particularly enjoyed driving through the
countryside with you and saw the changing colors
of the leaves on the trees.
visited
seeing
4）句式结构
考察一个句子是否完整,是否存在否定误用的问题,省略现象是否有误,平行、并列关系是否混乱,强调句结构是否完整等.
3)Why you think so many people still suffer
from poverty now?
4）Hot water is provided for 24 hours,
but lifts work day and night.
5）I thought it was dull to watch a game in
which players kicked a ball to each other.
Therefore, my father loves football.
and
However
do
When?I?was?in?high?school,?most?of?my?friend?had?bicycles.?I?hoped?I?could?also?have?it.?One?day?I saw?a?second-hand?bicycle ,he?said?he?could?only?give?me?half?of?the?money,?that?was?only?one?hundred?yuan.?I?asked?my?father?the?money.?But he?should?find?the?other?half?myself.?So?I?went?to?sell?newspapers?after?the?school.?My?father?was?pleasedif?I?showed?him?the?money?a?month??after.?He?gives?me?the?other?fifty.?You?can?imaginewhat ?happy?I?was?when?I?rode?to?school?on?my?own?bicycle.??
.??
?
?
When?I?was?in?high?school,?most?of?my?friend?had?bicycles.?I? hoped?I?could?also?have?it.?One?
day?I saw?a?second-hand?bicycle,?that?was?only?one?hundred?yuan.?I?asked?my? father??the?
money.?But he?said?he?could?only?give?me?half?of?the?money.?He?should?find?the?other?half?
myself.?So?I?went?to?sell?newspapers?after?the?school.?My?father?was?pleased?if?I?showed?him?
the?money?a?month??after.?He?gives?me?the?other?fifty.?You?can ?imagine?what ?happy?I?was?when?I?rode?to?school?on?my? own?bicycle.??
___
__
__
___
__
_____
friends
one
which
I
when
later
gave
∧
for
______
how
_________
短文改错
What’s the main trouble when correcting a composition?
1. 看不出句子有错。
2. 看出句子出错的地方,但答案不正确。或无法改正。
“改错改错，越改越错”。因此了解改错的题型特点，并在此基础上加以一定分项训练，掌握一些解题技巧就非常有必要。
Procedures of the lesson
2. 新改错解题策略及答题原则
1. 短文改错设错方式及规范
3. 解读短文改错口诀
4.练习巩固（Practice）
Right or Wrong?
增加
been
I have offered a scholarship at a university.
I have offered a scholarship at a university.
been
I have offered a scholarship at a university.
been
∧
∧
X
∨
X
X
X
X
I have got a good news to tell you.
I have got a good news to tell you.
I have got a good news to tell you.
Right or Wrong?
删除
X
X
Right or Wrong?
修改
Three weeks ago I bought the electronic
an
dictionary at a shop.
Three weeks ago I bought the electronic
an
dictionary at a shop.
Three weeks ago I bought the electronic
an
dictionary at a shop.
以上为不规范答题,均不给分，不能手下留情
E.g.: What's more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next day,he posted the message on the poster-board… When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway…
to
a
^
for
I can return to home now.
the
∧
in
一.短文改错设错方式及规范
3.Unnecessary word
I like playing piano.
I major at English.
2.Missing word
1.Wrong word
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
三、新高考短文改错
应试策略及答题原则
三步
五原则
四不改
1. 通读全文, 理解文章.
2. 先易后难, 找出明错.
3. 对照考点, 深入审读.
1.以改变实词形式为原则.
2.以单词形式变化最小为原则.
3.以添删或更换虚词为原则.
4.以多“改正”少“添删”为原则．
5.以保持原意不变为原则．
1.标点符号不改。
2.大小写不改。
3.词序错误不改。
4.单词拼写不改 。
文中出现带汉语注释的词，
在句中不可能用错。
Next
动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副;
非谓语，细辨别，
句子成份多分析;
代词格，细领悟，
介词短语要牢记;
冠词连词常光顾，
逻辑错误须关注.
四.短文改错口诀：
I 词法和逻辑错误:
1）动词形
1. For all these years, we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please.(2014年新课标I)
2. My father took me out camping for the first time ….
My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.(陕西卷)
3. Share with others makes me feel happy.
have
came
1.动词的时态和语态错误.
2. 主、谓不一致的错误。
3.非谓语动词形式的误用
Sharing
4. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. (陕西卷)
5. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky. (陕西卷)
6. Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined
to be just as good.
7. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. （辽宁卷）
were
Amazed
understand
having
8. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.
10. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calm.
11. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians.
try
been
∧
has
2）名词数
1. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several class.
2. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes death around me.
dead
classes
1.可数与不可数名词的混用。
2.可数名词的单复数的错用。
3.名词的格的误用
4.词性的转换
3. The man said, “my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on the floor.”
4. We're called several time about Cleo's early morning barking.
5. I'm deeply grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English.
6. The police soon tracked the calls to a barber shop.
attention
barber's
teeth
times
3）还要注意形和副
1. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
(新课标I)
2. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. (陕西卷)
3. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.（浙江卷）
immdiately
noisy
wonderful
1.形容词、副词、名词等词性的误用。
2.原级，比较级和最高级的误用。
4. Li Ming enjoyed himself, competing and chatting with his father, and felt relaxing in the open air.
5. I really take proud in this experience.
6. There are more than 200 excellent teachers and 5，000 lovely students studying hardly in our school.
7. I hope I can practise my spoken English there as more as possible.
pride
hard
much
relaxed
4）代词格，细领悟
1. The survey also shows that libraries are where students get most of his books.
2. My uncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.
none
their
1.前后人称不一致。
2.人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的误用。
3.不定代词的误用及混用。
3. Though situations are tough today, a lot of we post?80s are making great efforts to live a good life.
4. It has been repaired and strengthened several times over it's past one hundred years' history.
5. I think important to learn the computer well.
6. Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for me.
its
it
∧
us
5)介词短语要牢记
1. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.(四川卷)
2. Then we made him breathe using the mouth-to-mouth way. After the boy came to himself, we sent him hospital at once and telephoned his parents.
to
for
∧
主要考查介词短语和习惯用法的搭配。
∧
3. Nearly five years ago, with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果) in our back garden. (新课标I卷)
4. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him.
5. Soon they came up a good idea.
6. The woman was angry and said the man, “What are you doing, sir? What are you looking for?
from
with
∧
∧
to
of
6）冠词、连词常光顾
1. Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.
2. But there was a man sitting beside her in a next seat.
3. Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.
the
a
∧
an
１. 冠词a,an和the的错用或少用．
２．连词but,and，or, so,because, although,
therefore, however的错用．
4. Now many girls prefer to marry a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don't think love built on houses and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.
5. On Monday, Li Ming was energetic but active in class.
6.“Should I choose a good major and a good university?"
7. They had expected to find a free place to live in, so they experienced a hard winter.
and
or
but
However
Our English teacher begin to teach us in 2012.
She had been teaching English for more than two year. She likes we, and she is very strict in all of us. Although she is a bit short and not so beautifully,
but we consider her as our friend. She is really good teacher. We are love her very much.
We're sure we'll get in well with each other.
began
has
years
us
with
beautiful
∧
a
on
动词形
名词数
代词格，细领悟
介词短语要牢记
还要注意形和副
冠词连词常光顾
五、Practice
Passage1
My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.
don't
much
for
hours
there
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
looks
sit
helpful
∧
to
Summary
2.较好拿到分数的有：
名词单复数/形容词副词/动词时态/代词.
1. 做题时应注意：
叙事性文章首抓________，以免理解有误；
论述性文章首抓名词形容词冠词代词错误
全文时态
3.短文改错口诀
代词格，细领悟
介词短语要牢记
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
动词形，名词数；
还要注意形和副；
非谓语，细辨别；
句子成份多分析
1.He put it in a secret place where I couldn't find.
which
2.The house which Lu Xun once lived is
being repaired now.
where
3. I'll never forget the day which I first
went to school.
when
1）定语从句
关系代词和关系副词的误用
1.We would return at night to hear that he'd
picked up from the radio in the day.
what
2.But it didn’t matter that I would win or not.
whether
3.When people are playing games,they move
a lot. That is how sports are good activities
for their health.
why
2）名词性从句
连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用
1.He got up early in order to he could
catch the first.
that
2. Make a mark which you have any doubts or questions.
where
3）状语从句
引导词的误用
As we climbed the mountains, we fed monkeys,
visiting temples and told stories.
2)I particularly enjoyed driving through the
countryside with you and saw the changing colors
of the leaves on the trees.
visited
seeing
4）句式结构
考察一个句子是否完整,是否存在否定误用的问题,省略现象是否有误,平行、并列关系是否混乱,强调句结构是否完整等.
3)Why you think so many people still suffer
from poverty now?
4）Hot water is provided for 24 hours,
but lifts work day and night.
5）I thought it was dull to watch a game in
which players kicked a ball to each other.
Therefore, my father loves football.
and
However
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