课件26张PPT。What's the matter?Are they happy?Do you think it's terrible?How to stop it?How to keep healthy?
Must we exercise to prevent the flu
Section DWriting preparation123Task 1We can keep healthy in 3 ways.
Choose one and discuss in groupsSportsEating habitsMoodTalk about the topicbasketballsportsmake…strong
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Eating habitsWe should / had better… because it’s good for…
We shouldn’t … because it’s bad for…MoodWe should smile to life. When we are unhappy, we can….Group work:Talk about how to keep healthy with your group members.How to write better?
Here are some standards(标准)you can refer to(参考)。Make up a main structure(构建骨架)Task 2 How to Keep Healthy
I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits. They are good for our health. And we shouldn’t eat junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong. I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy. If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.Cover all the focal points. 覆盖所有要点Scores(分数)________8-10 For exampleHow to be better?Use proper conjunctions.
适当运用了语句间连接成分 (加1-2分)Scores ____9-12
A. Finally B. First C. ThenABCUse proper conjunctions.
适当运用了语句间连接成分 (加1-2分) How to Keep Healthy
I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits. They are good for our health. And we shouldn’t eat junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong. I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day. We should be happy. If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.How to be better? Add a good beginning and ending.
有好的开头和结尾(加1-2分) As we all know, it’s very important to keep healthy. But do you know how to keep healthy?
Here are 3 rules.
I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits. They are good for our health. And we shouldn’t eat junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong. I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy. If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.
In order to keep fit, let’s follow the rules.How to Keep HealthyScores____10-14 As we all know, it’s very important to keep healthy. But do you know how to keep healthy?
Here are 3 rules.
I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits. They are good for our health. And we shouldn’t eat junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong. I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy. If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.
In order to keep fit, let’s follow the rules. Be happy to be healthy.How to Keep Healthy要点、连词开头结尾美句Scores ____11-16 Add some details or English mottoes.
句式多样或有细节描写和美句。 (加1-2分)Writing accessment当我们在写作和评价他人作文时,要注意以下几点:How to write better?Writing practice
要点提示:
1.保持健康应该注意哪些方面?
2.关于这几方面具体应该怎样做?
要求:1.词数:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数
2.文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。
Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, it is very important for us to keep fit.How to Keep Healthy思路点拨:
审题:时态为:
人称为:
体裁为 :应用文
要点:1.保持健康应该注意哪些方面?
2.关于这几方面具体应该怎样做?
条理:连词,逻辑。
结构:好的开头和结尾。
重点突出:通过细节描写或添加美句等。一般现在时第一人称/第二人称 魅力作文竞技场:How to keep healthy?Show time!assessment in groupsBe happy to be healthy.?
想健康就得快乐 Thank you for listening!