课件20张PPT。Topic Writing The Dragon Boat Festival Key points about Dragon boat festivalThe Dragon Boat FestivalOn May 5th on Chinese calendar(The Double Fifths Festival)Qu Yuan , a chinese poet and minister, Chu Ci anthologyRacing dragon boatEating zong zi ( rice dumplings)The calendar of 2018 writing task假定你是李华,你的班级决定组织同学们6月18日端午节一起骑共享单车去西湖观看龙舟比赛。请你给外教史密斯先生写一封邮件,邀请他当天上午八点在学校门口集合,一起前往,感受中国传统文化。
要求:1 词数100左右;
2 可适当增加细节,使得行文连贯。Step 1 take out the key points When :6月18日端午节‘上午八点At eight o’clock on June 18th Ride the shared bikesHow: 一起骑共享单车去Gather at school gateWhere:在学校门口集合;西湖The West Lake Dragon boat race / traditional chinese cultureWhat:观看龙舟比赛。感受中国传统文化。
(要求:1 词数100左右;
2 可适当增加细节,使得行文连贯。)
体裁:请你给外教史密斯先生写一封邮件,邀请他当天,一起前往
(be polite ,be sincere, be well-prepared)
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Supporting sentences:When / where howWhat benefitsLogical transitionContent structurelanguageThe key details includedp1 p2p3 Transitional wordsTopic sentenceSupporting sentences words spellingAdvanced expressionsTransitional wordsFirst of all, for the first place, also ,
besides, as scheduled, in addition,
moreover, what’s more, if possibleUseful expressionsExperience/enjoy a traditional chinese festival
Fall on
In honor/memory of…
According to…
Head to…
Plan to dosth.
Originately
Custom To…,we will…….
It is important/necessary/…for sb. To do sth.
It would be better if we…
it is our duty to …How to polish a passagecorrectaddLeave outOne possible versionDear Mr. Smith,
our class is planning to cycle to the West Lake to watch the dragon boat race on June 18th,when the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated nationwide. We’ll gather at our school gate at 8 am. I’d like to invite you to go with us and experience the unique Chinese culture. The dragon boat race , originally held in memory of the great poet QuYuan , has already become a common practice and developed into a sport. Your presence will certainly add to our pleasure. Would you please to join us and have fun?
looking forward to your reply.
yours,
Li Hua