Module 4 Sandstorms in Asia Writing 课件（62张PPT）
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课件62张PPT。
Wafangdian Senior Middle School
Book Three Module 4
Writing
marking criterion of a composition
the essential factors of a high quality composition
writing skills
goalsLead in What is the marking criterion of a composition?书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（21-25分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式
所致；具备较强的语言应用能力
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（16-20分）
完成了试题规定的任务。
比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容
应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复
杂语言结构或词汇所致
应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（11-15分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏，
没有写自己的认识
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解
应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯
整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（6-10分）
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
未能清楚地表达短文的内容，写了一些无关内容
语法结构简单，词汇项目有限
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解
较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。Lead inWhat are the essential factors contributing to a high quality composition?How can we write a good composition?1.everything needed included
2.proper linking words between sentences and paragraphs
3.good beginning and ending
5. advanced words , phrases and sentence patterns6.Good handwriting4.well organized and smoothly developedWriting skillsApply good sentence patterns. 一 改变时态
例: The bell is ringing now. 一般
There goes the bell. 特殊
二 改变语态
例: People suggest that the conference be put off.一般
It is suggested that the conference be put off.特殊
三 使用不定式
例: He is so kind that he can help me.一般
He is so kind as to help me. 特殊 四 使用过去分词
例: She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.一般
Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.特殊.
五 使用现在分词
例: If the weather permits ,I will come tomorrow.一般
I will come tomorrow, weather permitting. .特殊 六 使用名词性从句
1 He didn’t turn up. It disappointed everybody.一般
The fact that he didn’ t turn up
disappointed everybody.特殊
2.To his surprise, the little girl knows
so many things.一般
What surprises him is that the little girl
knows so many things. 特殊七 使用定语从句
例; The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.一般
The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. 特殊
八 使用状语从句
例： I won‘t believe what he says.一般
No matter what he says, I won‘t believe.特殊
九 使用虚拟语气
例: The ship didn't sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain.一般
But for the efforts of the captain ,the ship would have sunk with all on board.特殊
十 使用倒装句型
例:Though I'm weak I'll make the effort.一般
Weak as I am, I'll make the effort. .特殊six writing stepsSix writing steps Step1． 仔细审题
Step2. 理清要点
Step3. 译写单句
Step4. 连句成篇
Step5. 检查润色
Step6. 定稿誊写
中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。
提示：1、浪费现象：水、电、餐厅的食物及其他；
2、危害:自身性格，父母财政负担，自然资
源；
3、制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想。
要求：1、词数150左右；演讲的开头和结尾
已写好,不记入总词数。
2、不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇
通顺连贯的短文。
Step1． 仔细审题
---A speechPara.1MeasuresPhenomenaHarmPara.3Para.2Step2. 理清要点 Step3. 译写单句 & Step4. 连句成篇
Para. 1
Phenomena
have lights on
order too much food and
leave leftovers on the table Some students have the lights on in the daytime. Some students order too much food and leave a lot of leftovers on the table. Some ask their parents for a lot of pocket money and spend too much on snacks or drinks. use paper casually
spend pocket money on snacks
…Some students leave tap water running after washing.leave tap water runningPara.2
Harmhave a bad effect on one’s
character building
add financial burden to one’s
parents
use up the world’s limited natural
resources(school) burden with extra
expenditure(开支).
… The bad habit of being wasteful will have
a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to their parents. The world’s limited natural resources will be used up soon. Para.3
Measureshave a clear awareness of the
serious situation
educate students in school
set rules
start from oneself
take the lead in reducing the
waste
… In my opinion, we should have a clear awareness of the serious situation. We should educate the students to form the good habit. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste to save everything. Some students leave tap water running after washing. Some students have the lights on in the daytime. Some students order too much food and leave a lot of leftovers
on the table. Some ask their parents for a lot of pocket money and spend too much on snacks or drinks. The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to their parents. The world’s limited natural resources will be used up soon. In my opinion, we should have a clear awareness of the serious situation. We should educate the students to form the good habit. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste to save everything. 117 wordsStep5. 检查润色 Some students leave tap water running after washing. Some students have the lights on in the daytime. Some students order too much food and leave much leftovers on the table. Some ask their parents for a lot of pocket money and spend too much on snacks or drinks. …,The students leave tap water running after washing and have the lights on in the daytime, which means a huge waste of water and electricity. Some students get into a bad habit of ordering much delicious food in the canteen but they don’t eat all the food, leaving much on the table. Some ask their parents for a lot of pocket money. So it is high time we had to deal with the problem. The reasons are as follows:
在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,
尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高
级的词汇;Comment The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to their parents. The world’s limited natural resources will be used up. In the first place, the bad habit of being
wasteful will have a bad effect on their
own character. Secondly, it adds financial
burden to their parents. Last but not least,
the world’s limited natural resources, such as water and electricity , will be used up soon.First of all Firstly,
To begin with,In addition,
Besides,
Moreover,
What’s moreFinally,
What’s worse,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,
尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高
级的词汇;
恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章
结构紧凑;Comment In my opinion, we should have a clear awareness of the serious situation. We should educate the students to form the good habit. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste to save everything. But how can we reduce waste? In my
opinion, it is everybody’s duty to fight
against waste. On the one hand, I should
start with myself to save everything. On
the other hand, I’d like to remind my
friends here to take the lead in reducing
the waste.As far as I am concerned, I think
only when all of us are fully aware of its seriousness can the situation be improved. On the one hand, it is necessary for schools to educate every student not to waste anything in any form and on the other hand every one of us should start with ourselves to fight against waste. It is not until all of us are involved in the activity that we can bring the situation under control.在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,
尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较
高级的词汇;
恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章
结构紧凑;
适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇,
尽量避免重复和单调。Comment Nowdays, it is common that the students have tap water running after washing and leave the lights on in the daytime, which means a huge waste of water and electricity. Some students get into a bad habit of ordering much delicious food in the canteen but they don’t eat all the food, leaving much on the table. Some even ask their parents for a lot of pocket money. So it is high time we had to deal with the problem. The reasons are as follows:Sample: In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to their parents. Last but not least, it also exhausts the world’s limited natural resources, such as water and electricity. But how can we reduce waste? In my
opinion, it is everybody’s duty to fight
against waste. On the one hand, I should start with myself to save everything. On the other hand, I’d like to remind my friends here to take the lead in reducing the waste.English Writing如何写环保类的议论文?
写作指导:
1.点明某一环境问题或现象;
2. 阐述原因,对人们的影响;
3. 提出建议或防治措施;
4. 总结(愿望,呼吁)
Practice:
Describe one environmental problem and say what we should do about it. As is known to all, with the development of society, sandstorms in China have been increased in recent years. Our living environment is getting worse and worse.
As far as I’m concerned, the reason why sandstorms increased is that developers cut down more and more trees and dug up grass. What’s more, farmers’ overgrazing seriously damaged the grass too. In order to solve this problem, I think we should take good care of the forests and plant more trees instead of cutting them down. Meanwhile, the government should make rules and laws to punish those who destroy the forests. If so, I think our living conditions will soon be improved.ASSIGNMENT: WRITE A COMPOSITIONThanks for
your attention!
Wafangdian Senior Middle School
Book Three Module 4
Writing
marking criterion of a composition
the essential factors of a high quality composition
writing skills
goalsLead in What is the marking criterion of a composition?书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（21-25分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式
所致；具备较强的语言应用能力
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（16-20分）
完成了试题规定的任务。
比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容
应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复
杂语言结构或词汇所致
应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（11-15分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏，
没有写自己的认识
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解
应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯
整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（6-10分）
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
未能清楚地表达短文的内容，写了一些无关内容
语法结构简单，词汇项目有限
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解
较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。Lead inWhat are the essential factors contributing to a high quality composition?How can we write a good composition?1.everything needed included
2.proper linking words between sentences and paragraphs
3.good beginning and ending
5. advanced words , phrases and sentence patterns6.Good handwriting4.well organized and smoothly developedWriting skillsApply good sentence patterns. 一 改变时态
例: The bell is ringing now. 一般
There goes the bell. 特殊
二 改变语态
例: People suggest that the conference be put off.一般
It is suggested that the conference be put off.特殊
三 使用不定式
例: He is so kind that he can help me.一般
He is so kind as to help me. 特殊 四 使用过去分词
例: She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.一般
Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.特殊.
五 使用现在分词
例: If the weather permits ,I will come tomorrow.一般
I will come tomorrow, weather permitting. .特殊 六 使用名词性从句
1 He didn’t turn up. It disappointed everybody.一般
The fact that he didn’ t turn up
disappointed everybody.特殊
2.To his surprise, the little girl knows
so many things.一般
What surprises him is that the little girl
knows so many things. 特殊七 使用定语从句
例; The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.一般
The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. 特殊
八 使用状语从句
例： I won‘t believe what he says.一般
No matter what he says, I won‘t believe.特殊
九 使用虚拟语气
例: The ship didn't sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain.一般
But for the efforts of the captain ,the ship would have sunk with all on board.特殊
十 使用倒装句型
例:Though I'm weak I'll make the effort.一般
Weak as I am, I'll make the effort. .特殊six writing stepsSix writing steps Step1． 仔细审题
Step2. 理清要点
Step3. 译写单句
Step4. 连句成篇
Step5. 检查润色
Step6. 定稿誊写
中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。
提示：1、浪费现象：水、电、餐厅的食物及其他；
2、危害:自身性格，父母财政负担，自然资
源；
3、制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想。
要求：1、词数150左右；演讲的开头和结尾
已写好,不记入总词数。
2、不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇
通顺连贯的短文。
Step1． 仔细审题
---A speechPara.1MeasuresPhenomenaHarmPara.3Para.2Step2. 理清要点 Step3. 译写单句 & Step4. 连句成篇
Para. 1
Phenomena
have lights on
order too much food and
leave leftovers on the table Some students have the lights on in the daytime. Some students order too much food and leave a lot of leftovers on the table. Some ask their parents for a lot of pocket money and spend too much on snacks or drinks. use paper casually
spend pocket money on snacks
…Some students leave tap water running after washing.leave tap water runningPara.2
Harmhave a bad effect on one’s
character building
add financial burden to one’s
parents
use up the world’s limited natural
resources(school) burden with extra
expenditure(开支).
… The bad habit of being wasteful will have
a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to their parents. The world’s limited natural resources will be used up soon. Para.3
Measureshave a clear awareness of the
serious situation
educate students in school
set rules
start from oneself
take the lead in reducing the
waste
… In my opinion, we should have a clear awareness of the serious situation. We should educate the students to form the good habit. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste to save everything. Some students leave tap water running after washing. Some students have the lights on in the daytime. Some students order too much food and leave a lot of leftovers
on the table. Some ask their parents for a lot of pocket money and spend too much on snacks or drinks. The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to their parents. The world’s limited natural resources will be used up soon. In my opinion, we should have a clear awareness of the serious situation. We should educate the students to form the good habit. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste to save everything. 117 wordsStep5. 检查润色 Some students leave tap water running after washing. Some students have the lights on in the daytime. Some students order too much food and leave much leftovers on the table. Some ask their parents for a lot of pocket money and spend too much on snacks or drinks. …,The students leave tap water running after washing and have the lights on in the daytime, which means a huge waste of water and electricity. Some students get into a bad habit of ordering much delicious food in the canteen but they don’t eat all the food, leaving much on the table. Some ask their parents for a lot of pocket money. So it is high time we had to deal with the problem. The reasons are as follows:
在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,
尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高
级的词汇;Comment The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to their parents. The world’s limited natural resources will be used up. In the first place, the bad habit of being
wasteful will have a bad effect on their
own character. Secondly, it adds financial
burden to their parents. Last but not least,
the world’s limited natural resources, such as water and electricity , will be used up soon.First of all Firstly,
To begin with,In addition,
Besides,
Moreover,
What’s moreFinally,
What’s worse,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,
尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高
级的词汇;
恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章
结构紧凑;Comment In my opinion, we should have a clear awareness of the serious situation. We should educate the students to form the good habit. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste to save everything. But how can we reduce waste? In my
opinion, it is everybody’s duty to fight
against waste. On the one hand, I should
start with myself to save everything. On
the other hand, I’d like to remind my
friends here to take the lead in reducing
the waste.As far as I am concerned, I think
only when all of us are fully aware of its seriousness can the situation be improved. On the one hand, it is necessary for schools to educate every student not to waste anything in any form and on the other hand every one of us should start with ourselves to fight against waste. It is not until all of us are involved in the activity that we can bring the situation under control.在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,
尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较
高级的词汇;
恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章
结构紧凑;
适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇,
尽量避免重复和单调。Comment Nowdays, it is common that the students have tap water running after washing and leave the lights on in the daytime, which means a huge waste of water and electricity. Some students get into a bad habit of ordering much delicious food in the canteen but they don’t eat all the food, leaving much on the table. Some even ask their parents for a lot of pocket money. So it is high time we had to deal with the problem. The reasons are as follows:Sample: In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to their parents. Last but not least, it also exhausts the world’s limited natural resources, such as water and electricity. But how can we reduce waste? In my
opinion, it is everybody’s duty to fight
against waste. On the one hand, I should start with myself to save everything. On the other hand, I’d like to remind my friends here to take the lead in reducing the waste.English Writing如何写环保类的议论文?
写作指导:
1.点明某一环境问题或现象;
2. 阐述原因,对人们的影响;
3. 提出建议或防治措施;
4. 总结(愿望,呼吁)
Practice:
Describe one environmental problem and say what we should do about it. As is known to all, with the development of society, sandstorms in China have been increased in recent years. Our living environment is getting worse and worse.
As far as I’m concerned, the reason why sandstorms increased is that developers cut down more and more trees and dug up grass. What’s more, farmers’ overgrazing seriously damaged the grass too. In order to solve this problem, I think we should take good care of the forests and plant more trees instead of cutting them down. Meanwhile, the government should make rules and laws to punish those who destroy the forests. If so, I think our living conditions will soon be improved.ASSIGNMENT: WRITE A COMPOSITIONThanks for
your attention!