课件27张PPT。 课前准备:写作词汇,短语,句型 红黑笔, 提纲,Words:novel, author, write, article, website, publish, well-known, fantasy novel, film,success, talent,criticize,写作热身Phrases: be born in, senior high school, according to,
because of/as a result of, consider... as, be famous for,Sentences pattern:
Ancient China was a place where states were often at war with each other.
Mozi was another teacher who was very influential.
His father died when he was young.Can you guess the meaning ?Exploring the old and deducing(推论) the new makes a teacher. 温故而知新,可以为师矣 。2.Man is born good.人性本善3.We should love all human beings.兼爱Reading &Writing阅读写作课
Introduction to a person Senior One Xu SanlinPhilosophers of Ancient China学习目标目标一:
通过快速阅读,完成表格填空,总结人物介绍文章的结构。
目标二:
通过单句专练,初步了解介绍人物的词汇,句型。
目标三:
通过限时写作,完成人物介绍整个语篇的写作。
目标四:
通过小组合作,掌握评价作文的基本方法。
372BChis motherpositiongovernment resignedMenciusgoodPeoplerulerscruel governmentthinkerRead the passage and fill in the blanks.3分钟Make a list of what you can think of when introducing a person. 一、人物简介的写作步骤: (概,貌,平,评)
(概况) birthday ,birth place and family background
(外貌)appearance ,character
(生平) events in his or her life
(in order of time)
(评价)Evaluation(influence) 概况
1)墨子是另外一位很有影响力的老师。
2)出生于公元前476年,他来自于一个非常穷的家庭。
3) ___________, the son of a _____ family, was born in ______ on____________.
Mozi was another teacher who was very influential.
Born in 476 BC, he came from a family which was
very poor.
定语从句非谓语同位语B.外貌,性格(巧用with复合结构) ( 现在分词作状语)张麟杰是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜
Zhang Linjie is a near-sighted boy ___________________________________.
刘厚治高高瘦瘦, 浓浓的眉毛,看上去挺帅。
Liu Houzhi is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows, ___________(look) very handsome.with a pair of glasses on his nose.
lookingC.生平事迹简介(尽量用复合句,恰当连接词等。1)于寒阳不仅对科学感兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。
Yu Hanyang _________ has a gift for music, ________ is interested in science .
2)在某种程度上,他的信念和孔子相似。
______________, his beliefs were similar to those of Confucius.
3) 因此,美少女组合花了很多年的时间练习跳舞。
___________________, the beauty group spent many years practising dancing.not onlybut also 连接词:not only…but also;as a result; To begin with ; However;besides;in some waysIn some waysAs a result/Therefore/Thus D.评价(注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语/词组)1)宫南给我们作出了榜样, 大家都对他评价很高。
Gong Nan _________________________,so all the students _________________________him.
2)孔子是中国最伟大的哲学家家,并且将会被当作杰出人物为人们所永远记住.
Confucius is one of the ________philosophers in China and will ___________________an outstanding man forever.
3)人们普遍认为韩寒是最具天赋的的中国青年作家之一,但也颇受争议。
It is generally agreed that Han Han is one of _____________writers in China. But there are also some other people who criticize his works.sets us a good example speaks highly of be remembered as greatestthe most talented目标一,二总结
一、人物简介的写作步骤: (概,貌,育,平,评)
概况 定语从句,非谓语,同位语
B.外貌,性格 巧用with复合结构,现在分词作状语
C.生平事迹简介 尽量用复合句,恰当连接词等。
D. 评价 注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语/词组
例题展示:
请你根据下面表格所提供的信息,
用英语给校报写一篇稿件,简单
介绍著名的青年作家郭敬明。
词数100左右。注意:可适当增
加内容,以使文章语篇连贯。A Young Chinese AuthorGuo Jingming思路点拨:
确定文章体裁_________,对人物事迹进行介绍时用_______________,时态在对其进行评价时用_________________时态及第_______人称
列出简要提纲
选择适当的词汇和句式。说明文一般过去时一般现在时三Sample writings13分钟
What is a good writing?
How to catch the experts' eye?Beauty
be attractive, completed in a limited time!
What is a good writing?
Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整)
(内容要点一个也不能丢,如果人家给的是文字提示,可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4,如果人家给的是图,那要先看懂图的意思,六个图都要看看再动笔,不要看了一个马上就写。)
What is a good writing?
Structure:
* Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
* Well organized and smoothly developed
(结构合理,行文流畅)
What is a good writing?
Language:
* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)
* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)
* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns
(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)Peer assessmentGroup Work5分钟I can, I try习作展示 Guo Jingming, one of the most famous young authors in China, was born in Zigong, Sichuan Province on 6th,1983.When he was at senior high school, he started writing articles on a Website named Under the Banyan.In 2002 his first book The Verge of Love and Pain was published.Then in 2003 he became well-known for his fantasy novel The City of Fantasies. From 2008, his Tiny Times series were published one after another.
And to everyone's surprise, he became a film director and made his Tiny Times series a popular film series.Because of his success,Guo is considered as one of the most talented young authors by some newspapers while there are some other people who criticize his works at the same time.Enjoy it and you will make it!Have a happy day!