Module 5 Great people and Great Invention writing 课件（21张PPT）

课件21张PPT。Module 5 WritingPre-writing:
Read the essay. Match the essay paragraphs with these descriptions.
A. This paragraph gives the arguments against cars.
B. The conclusion:This gives the writer's final opinion.
C. This paragraph gives the arguments for cars.
D. The introduction:This gives some general facts
about the subject.1 _______
Cars were first used at the end of the nineteenth century and were no faster than a horse. Today there are billions of cars on the road. Everyone wants one. DThe introduction:This gives some general facts about the subject.2 _______
Cars have great advantages. They move fast and they give you freedom. You can just get in your car and go wherever you want. Up to five people can travel in a car, so often it is cheaper to go by car than to take a train.CThis paragraph gives the arguments for cars.3 _______
But cars have great disadvantages. They use fuels which pollute the environment very badly.They also create serious traffic problems. Sometimes you can't get into a city because there are so many cars on the road.AThis paragraph gives the arguments against cars. 4 _______
In conclusion, I think that cars are very useful because travel is so easy with a car. But the environmental problem is serious and we need to find a cleaner fuel.BThe conclusion:This gives the writer's final opinion. 互联网已经成为现代人工作和生活中必不可少的通讯工具，在人们的生活中起着重要作用，但也有一些负面影响。请就互联网的利与弊发表你的见解，并阐述你的理由。内容包括： 注意：1.应阐明自己的观点； 2.词数：100词左右。Writing好处 弊端你的观点…………审题谋篇Pair work
Discuss in pairs to talk about some useful words, phrases and sentence patterns that you'd like to use in your article .(about five minutes)1.词汇 (words and phrases)
1).通讯工具 ________________________
2).起重要作用 _________________________
3).优点 _________________________
4).弊端 _________________________
5).最新信息 _________________________
6).网上购物 _________________________
7).对...... 有害 _________________________
8).对......上瘾 _________________________
9).充分利用 _________________________a means of communicationplay an important part /role inadvantage（s）disadvantage （s）the latest information/newsshop online/ shopping onlinedo harm to/ be harmful tobe addicted tomake full use of词句推敲Great!2.句式 (sentence patterns)
1)互联网已经成为现代人工作和生活中必不可少的通讯工具，在人们的生活中起着重要作用，但也有一些负面影响不容忽视（ignore)。
一般表达：Nowadays, the Internet has become an essential means of communication to modern people. It plays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits, but its disadvantages shouldn't be ignored.
高级表达：（用非限定性定语从句改写上面的句子）Nowadays, the Internet has become an essential means of communication to modern people ,which plays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits, but its disadvantages shouldn't be ignored.2)互联网给我们提供大量最新的信息，并且我们可以给朋友发送电子邮件，从而促进人际交流。
一般表达：The Internet can provide a great deal of the latest information for us and we can send e-mails to our friends.It helps to develop social communication.高级表达：（用not only...but also...改写上面的句子）Not only can the Internet provide a great deal of the latest information for us but also we can send e-mails to our friends, which contributes to developing social communication.3)互联网很容易让身体出问题，损害眼睛。
一般表达：The Internet can easily lead to physical problems and do harm to our eyesight.高级表达：（用现在分词短语作状语改写上面的句子）The Internet can easily lead to physical problems, doing harm to our eyesight.Let's come to the part While-writing
Write down a whole article, trying to use advanced expressions.(about five minutes)
1. Check the essay in groups.
2. Call students to share their essays in public.Post-writingLet’s have a summary on how to write a comparative essay:
1. Pre-writing
1) Read the instructions carefully.
2) Write an outline:tense,type,topic,person,etc.
3) Collect useful expressions:words, phrases and
sentence patterns.
2. While-writing: Write a whole essay.
3. Post-writing: Check and correct mistakes. ｛｝HOMEWORK
Write an essay on this subject:
The advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones.

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