Module 6 Old and New Writing 课件（24张PPT）

课件24张PPT。Old and New Module 6WritingE-mailformatcontentWriting
1.Read the email and answer the questions.
1) Does the writer of the email live in Zi gui County?No, she doesn’t. Because it is where her grandparents had lived. 2)Why did she want to visit the region? 3)What had changed
since the last time she was
there? The area has been flooded because of the Three Gorges Dam. 2.Discuss and find out the main idea of each paragraph. 1)reasons ( for visiting Zigui County)2)changes ( in Zigui County) 3)comments (about Zigui County) 3.Write an email to a friend about a visit to place which has changed.E-mailEMAIL基本结构 To: shirley@shirleytaylortraining.com
Cc:
Bcc: 信头
Subject: HELLO!!!
Attachments:
hi Shirley 称谓
（问候语） 正文
Hope things r well with u. Its good 2 know that u will be back in malaysia again in nov to hold your seminar on effective biz writing. PLS LET ME HAVE SOME FREE DATE while u r over here. some bookstores r interested in a talk cum singing event.
I hope u will agree to take part. 结尾
tnks & r 结尾敬语
Harry 落款签名
主体
英文e－mail与英文书信的写法和格式大体相同，但也有不同之处。英文e－mail一般由以下五部分组成：
1．标题栏
这是英文书信中没有的。标题栏中有“收件人”、“抄送”和“主题”三个框。在“收件人”框中填写收件人的e－mail地址。如要将邮件同时发送给多人，可在“抄送”框中填入其他人的e－mail地址。在“主题”框中简要地概括邮件的内容，可以用一个单词，如：Greetings(问候)；也可以用短语，如：Personal information(个人情况)；还可以是一个内容完整但语言简短的句子。
2．称呼语
如果是同学或亲朋好友间的邮件，可以直呼其名，如：Mike；但如果是发给老师、长辈或上级，最好在称呼前加上称谓或职位。职位可用Doctor，Professor等，如：Professor Li。男性用Mr；女性用Miss(未婚)，Mrs(已婚)，Ms(不知婚否)。
3．正文
大多数e－mail篇幅短小，语言简单明了。如果是写给不熟悉的人，一般要先进行自我介绍；反之，则可直接进入正题。要多使用短句、简单句，少用或不用长句。一是便于阅读，再者使意思清楚。
4．结尾客套话
英文书信的信尾客套话常用Best wishes! Good luck to you! 等。而e－mail通常很简明，如：Best，Thanks，Yours等。
5．落款
直接写发件人的姓名即可，且与客套话对齐。
EMAIL基本结构 To: shirley@shirleytaylortraining.com
Cc:
Bcc: 信头
Subject: HELLO!!!
Attachments:
hi Shirley 称谓
（问候语） 正文
Hope things r well with u. Its good 2 know that u will be back in malaysia again in nov to hold your seminar on effective biz writing. PLS LET ME HAVE SOME FREE DATE while u r over here. some bookstores r interested in a talk cum singing event.
I hope u will agree to take part. 结尾
tnks & r 结尾敬语
Harry 落款签名
主体
主体部分 1．段首常用语：
(1)Thank you for your letter of Dec. 15th…
(2)I'm glad/pleased to tell you that…
(3)I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
(4)Thanks for your invitation to the Christmas party.
(5)How are you getting along with your study? 2．话题引入常用语：
(1)I'm glad to tell you something about…
(2)As far as I know/am concerned/see

3．段尾常用语：
(1)Please write to me soon and tell me about your…
(2)I'm looking forward to your reply…
(3)With kind/ best regards/wishes.
(4)If so, please e－mail me in response…Write an E-mailtask题目要求：
假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。
最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。
他三年前参观过你们学校，听说现在变化很大，
希望了解有关情况。请你根据下面的汉语提示，
给他回一封电子邮件，介绍你们学校的变化。三年前：一座教学楼，一个操场。
现状：
1．校园扩建，新建起了一座教学楼和一座图书馆，
内有音乐室、美术室、微机房等，体育设备齐全；
2．学生人数：从1,000增加到2,000；
3．绿化了校园。
词数：120左右
思路点拨：
1．本文要求写一封电子邮件，注意使用开头结尾的常用句式和客套话语。
2．本文主要使用现在时态，在介绍三年前的情况用过去时态。
Mr. Smith，
I was pleased to hear from you and I am writing to
tell you something about my school.
You are right. Great changes have taken place in
our school in the past three years. It is no longer
what it used to be three years ago，when there
was only a teaching building and a playground.参考范文to tell you that I am happy two new buildings have been built and are in use. One of them is a new classroom building，in which there are rooms for music，art and computer teaching.. The other is the library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. Besides, my school is well equipped with sports facilities参考范文The number of the students has also grown from 1,000 to 2,000. What’s more, we have planted a lot
of trees in and around the school.I believe our school will become better and better, and I hope you will visit our school again.
Yours,
Li Hua参考范文THNAKS FOR WATCHING
thanks